Comments received on poems by jaylenrene



Suicide Note
_the_girl_who_cuts_ said:

i cut (as u can tell bu the username) but i find this poem really amazing

June 17th, 2018 19:50

Don\'t Judge.
burning-embers said:

Jaylenrene too much! To my eyes you\'ve put about five different poems in one huge bulk here. OK i can see its a heartfelt outpouring but i rekkon four or five shorter works would have hit much harder. Just an opinion ok.

July 17th, 2017 08:30

Don\'t Judge.
onepauly said:

good one we are duel in nature.

July 17th, 2017 05:48

Suicide Note
onepauly said:

seems like the down side of life. next time use the up side of life.
good one, if its not real.

July 14th, 2017 05:17

Suicide Note
mbird72 said:

This is very realistic. I totally identified. What a secret you have to see into the darkness of the soul

July 14th, 2017 03:56

Suicide Note
SimoneAllen said:

I enjoyed this... I have been feeling this way for sometime now...

July 13th, 2017 23:26

War on Syria
Poetic Dan said:

I done a piece called pen warriors, glad I\'ve just found one ;).
Fantastic ugly truth, thank you


July 12th, 2017 17:15

ALC 5/29
Frank Prem said:

Hi jaylenrene, it\'s a hard job to deal with the entirety of a relationship in just one poem. You\'ve managed pretty well, I think.

Well done.

July 10th, 2017 01:45

Profanity.
onepauly said:

this early? how many have you had?

July 9th, 2017 08:09

Black is Beautiful.
onepauly said:

they pushed around the red man as well. I\'m ashamed of my color.

July 8th, 2017 20:09

Society
kevin browne said:

Fantastic writing jaylenrene, I like your thoughts on this subject of society. you have captured many many line of what we do to conform within the units of our lives. behave as a human with the manners suitable to portray yourself as a righteous person. in short, do what you need to do in order to accomplish your goals. we break rules to do that when we shouldn\'t really have to. the pressures of dealing with what is put in front of us is demoralizing enough in comparison to what you really wan to so. none-the-less, you have captured your expression really well. great work and a good start in joining the MPS clan.

July 7th, 2017 20:20

Society
onepauly said:

it makes me think twice

July 7th, 2017 19:08