Comments received on poems by ashleyT



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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME TO MPS ASHLEY Thanks for your first poem ~ well written but with a sad content ! CONTROL is bad and destructive and some Men relish it especially control over Lovely Young Ladies like you ~ paying that you have broken His despicable control ! In all my relationships with ladies I have shared 50 / 50 (Girl on Top !) and they have enjoyed their share of control in all things ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

July 8th, 2017 08:18

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onepauly said:

control yourself! beautifully written. don\'t fight to control yourself. do it and lay light on your mind.

July 8th, 2017 04:39

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Welcome to MPS. I hope that you now have control of your life.

July 8th, 2017 00:28

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Michael Edwards said:

Well constructed with a great message and looking forward to more.

July 7th, 2017 23:57

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burning-embers said:

So now you are free to express yourself in your poetry. More please! I was reminded of a line from great lyricist Stevie Wonder \"you took me riding in a rocket and gave me a star and then a half a mile from heaven you dropped me back down to this cold, cold world\".

July 7th, 2017 23:07

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FredPeyer said:

Welcome to the site Ashley!
A well written first poem. Hope to read a lot more from you!

July 7th, 2017 22:44