Comments received on poems by rpgiii
Lorna
Goldfinch60 said:
Some youngsters are so very mean and to end up shooting each other is not the way to go, those kids that persecuted you are just monsters that will always persecute others and lead a dreadful life themselves.
Be who you are and all will be well in your world, do not worry about what others think, that is their problem.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Some youngsters are so very mean and to end up shooting each other is not the way to go, those kids that persecuted you are just monsters that will always persecute others and lead a dreadful life themselves.
Be who you are and all will be well in your world, do not worry about what others think, that is their problem.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:01
Lorna
Doggerel Dave said:
Fantasy poem obviously – if real then they both deserve a Darwin Award (awarded to people who take themselves out of the gene pool and thus raise the collective IQ (https://darwinawards.com/); they may fail because one of the qualifications is unintentional removal, however give them a chance….
Of course one alternative solution might have been to eat half of what they eat normally at every meal….. I know, it is a difficult concept to assimilate.... 😊
July 17th, 2021 04:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Fantasy poem obviously – if real then they both deserve a Darwin Award (awarded to people who take themselves out of the gene pool and thus raise the collective IQ (https://darwinawards.com/); they may fail because one of the qualifications is unintentional removal, however give them a chance….
Of course one alternative solution might have been to eat half of what they eat normally at every meal….. I know, it is a difficult concept to assimilate.... 😊
July 17th, 2021 04:59
Lorna
dusk arising said:
Ouch! A tale of low self esteem enhanced by selfish kids. There is much of it about and thank goodness for the criticism \'must be skinny\' is receiving today. We are naturally all shapes and sizes.
Well written piece which I hope will make people think.
July 17th, 2021 02:52
dusk arising said:
Ouch! A tale of low self esteem enhanced by selfish kids. There is much of it about and thank goodness for the criticism \'must be skinny\' is receiving today. We are naturally all shapes and sizes.
Well written piece which I hope will make people think.
July 17th, 2021 02:52
The Big Book of Choices
Goldfinch60 said:
That book is interpreted in many different ways by people in organised religion, just be sure of your OWN beliefs.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That book is interpreted in many different ways by people in organised religion, just be sure of your OWN beliefs.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:36
A Story in Silence
burning-embers said:
Truly almost too gobsmacked to comment, had to sit back a minute. Very strong disturbing story well told by you. Shocking ending works very well. Life\'s a bitch - then you die.
July 17th, 2017 11:25
burning-embers said:
Truly almost too gobsmacked to comment, had to sit back a minute. Very strong disturbing story well told by you. Shocking ending works very well. Life\'s a bitch - then you die.
July 17th, 2017 11:25
Until She Graces My Mirror Again
onepauly said:
how much does that mirror cost i\'ll buy it, if I can afford it.
July 17th, 2017 03:11
onepauly said:
how much does that mirror cost i\'ll buy it, if I can afford it.
July 17th, 2017 03:11
Local Area Business Man
Louis Gibbs said:
Very creative write, thanks for sharing, rpg!
July 14th, 2017 09:08
Louis Gibbs said:
Very creative write, thanks for sharing, rpg!
July 14th, 2017 09:08
Recipe for the End
rpgiii said:
thank you all for your comments. it truly is an epidemic and a shame this still exists in our society. Young girls are still heard with a skeptical and sometimes deaf ear. While young boys are believed and protected unfairly with cover-ups or it completely being swept under the rug.
My poetry for the most part is dark but it is derived from real situations none personal. Just seeing the world with both eyes wide open.
July 13th, 2017 20:28
rpgiii said:
thank you all for your comments. it truly is an epidemic and a shame this still exists in our society. Young girls are still heard with a skeptical and sometimes deaf ear. While young boys are believed and protected unfairly with cover-ups or it completely being swept under the rug.
My poetry for the most part is dark but it is derived from real situations none personal. Just seeing the world with both eyes wide open.
July 13th, 2017 20:28
Recipe for the End
FredPeyer said:
rpgiii you wrote a very strong poem. I like the way you structured it, nearly like a news report, letting the facts speak for themselves, without any emotions interfering.
As for the subject matter, it is so sad that after all these thousands of years of evolution some of us still behave worse than the so called savages.
July 13th, 2017 14:14
FredPeyer said:
rpgiii you wrote a very strong poem. I like the way you structured it, nearly like a news report, letting the facts speak for themselves, without any emotions interfering.
As for the subject matter, it is so sad that after all these thousands of years of evolution some of us still behave worse than the so called savages.
July 13th, 2017 14:14
Recipe for the End
burning-embers said:
A very powerful write. Provocative. What is wrong with our society today.
July 13th, 2017 11:11
burning-embers said:
A very powerful write. Provocative. What is wrong with our society today.
July 13th, 2017 11:11
The Struggle
FredPeyer said:
Welcome rpgiii, a very well written honest and emotional poem. Let us hope that writing will help you with your struggle. The prize is worth the pain! But that is so much easier said than done. As long as you can take three steps forward for every step back, you will win against any demon.
July 9th, 2017 23:44
FredPeyer said:
Welcome rpgiii, a very well written honest and emotional poem. Let us hope that writing will help you with your struggle. The prize is worth the pain! But that is so much easier said than done. As long as you can take three steps forward for every step back, you will win against any demon.
July 9th, 2017 23:44
The Struggle
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Staying clean is worth the struggle. Writing is a good step in the struggle. Keep a pen and a pad paper with you at all times so that you can capture those nuggets of gold as you endure your struggle. Don\'t forget NAMI is a good friend too.
July 9th, 2017 22:22
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Staying clean is worth the struggle. Writing is a good step in the struggle. Keep a pen and a pad paper with you at all times so that you can capture those nuggets of gold as you endure your struggle. Don\'t forget NAMI is a good friend too.
July 9th, 2017 22:22
