Comments received on poems by moonwriting
The Star That Never Dimmed
Neville said:
I checked back to discover where you have come from .. and I was not disappointed .. ink well spilt in my humble opinion ... Neville
July 3rd, 2023 07:04
Neville said:
I checked back to discover where you have come from .. and I was not disappointed .. ink well spilt in my humble opinion ... Neville
July 3rd, 2023 07:04
What does it mean to be free?
Neville said:
there are those of course who would have us believe that freedom means that we have nothing else to lose .. my own thoughts on the matter are far more complex and would need a bigger rectangle to post them in .. nevertheless, I am delighted you found me earlier and nudged me in this direction ... Neville
July 3rd, 2023 07:02
Neville said:
there are those of course who would have us believe that freedom means that we have nothing else to lose .. my own thoughts on the matter are far more complex and would need a bigger rectangle to post them in .. nevertheless, I am delighted you found me earlier and nudged me in this direction ... Neville
July 3rd, 2023 07:02
What does it mean to be free?
Lauretta13 said:
I\'ve not really experienced it but I like the feeling you put in this poem
October 13th, 2021 02:55
Lauretta13 said:
I\'ve not really experienced it but I like the feeling you put in this poem
October 13th, 2021 02:55
What does it mean to be free?
Lauretta13 said:
I\'ve not really experienced it but I like the feeling you put in this poem
October 13th, 2021 02:55
Lauretta13 said:
I\'ve not really experienced it but I like the feeling you put in this poem
October 13th, 2021 02:55
The Star That Never Dimmed
spilleronsheet said:
Though it’s an old post
But I am new to it
It’s deep
Enthralling with beauty
For the yearn for the star which kept shining
For the hope for return of it
And the beauty of star which danced to the drum
October 13th, 2021 01:41
spilleronsheet said:
Though it’s an old post
But I am new to it
It’s deep
Enthralling with beauty
For the yearn for the star which kept shining
For the hope for return of it
And the beauty of star which danced to the drum
October 13th, 2021 01:41
What does it mean to be free?
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful
To the known
To the unknown
Questions the mind
What is to be free
Free from restraints
Free from desires
Or free from unwanted glares
What is freedom to you
What is freedom to me
A mere word defined in dictionary
Questions the mind
Wish one can live freely overtime
October 13th, 2021 00:57
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful
To the known
To the unknown
Questions the mind
What is to be free
Free from restraints
Free from desires
Or free from unwanted glares
What is freedom to you
What is freedom to me
A mere word defined in dictionary
Questions the mind
Wish one can live freely overtime
October 13th, 2021 00:57
Love Into Lost
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a great sublime comparison of the earlier beginning hot passionate moments and the cold wry attitudes now. Kudos for a fab poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 12th, 2021 23:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a great sublime comparison of the earlier beginning hot passionate moments and the cold wry attitudes now. Kudos for a fab poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 12th, 2021 23:59
Love Into Lost
Caring dove said:
Sometimes love fades ... and all we have are memories
I love this poem , you have worded it really nicely !
October 12th, 2021 01:42
Caring dove said:
Sometimes love fades ... and all we have are memories
I love this poem , you have worded it really nicely !
October 12th, 2021 01:42
The Inside
FredPeyer said:
I am glad you wrote a comment for this poem moonwriting. I usually try to read the poem first before reading any of the author\'s comments. I do like your choice of words, but being quite daft sometimes I don\'t think I would have come to the same conclusion. Still don\'t get the last two lines. This is a reflection on me, not on your poem!
July 15th, 2017 17:56
FredPeyer said:
I am glad you wrote a comment for this poem moonwriting. I usually try to read the poem first before reading any of the author\'s comments. I do like your choice of words, but being quite daft sometimes I don\'t think I would have come to the same conclusion. Still don\'t get the last two lines. This is a reflection on me, not on your poem!
July 15th, 2017 17:56
The Star That Never Dimmed
Goldfinch60 said:
That drum will always call you and your friend to rise again. Good write. Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2017 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That drum will always call you and your friend to rise again. Good write. Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2017 00:15
The Star That Never Dimmed
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ love your first poem and its Dance of Love. Rhythm in a Poem is much more important than Rhyme ! Your poem pulsates with Rhythm which complements the theme ! I am sure your Friend will return ~ I know I would ! Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 14th, 2017 16:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ love your first poem and its Dance of Love. Rhythm in a Poem is much more important than Rhyme ! Your poem pulsates with Rhythm which complements the theme ! I am sure your Friend will return ~ I know I would ! Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 14th, 2017 16:17
The Star That Never Dimmed
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site moonwriting!
Judging from your moniker, you must have been writing this at night while watching the sky.
Beautiful writing. I like the flow, how you go from young to older, childhood to adulthood, where perceptions change from the magic of a little child to the skepticism of an adult.
I may be way off here, but this is what I felt.
July 14th, 2017 15:33
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site moonwriting!
Judging from your moniker, you must have been writing this at night while watching the sky.
Beautiful writing. I like the flow, how you go from young to older, childhood to adulthood, where perceptions change from the magic of a little child to the skepticism of an adult.
I may be way off here, but this is what I felt.
July 14th, 2017 15:33
The Star That Never Dimmed
Nicholas Browning said:
I like the free verse style of no initial rhyming scheme. The title is amazing, and what follows is also great. I don\'t really see this as love. I see it as a deep and profound appreciation for the star that never stopped shining. Bravo.
July 14th, 2017 12:33
Nicholas Browning said:
I like the free verse style of no initial rhyming scheme. The title is amazing, and what follows is also great. I don\'t really see this as love. I see it as a deep and profound appreciation for the star that never stopped shining. Bravo.
July 14th, 2017 12:33
