Comments received on poems by DyingDreams

Neglect These Memories
MaddieJ said:

If you aren\'t already, you could be a good rapper! Just sayin\'!
Great job!

August 14th, 2017 23:25

Unto Forever
myself and me said:

\"In time I will heal but never the same\", the mark of love stays with us forever.

August 6th, 2017 14:59

Unto Forever
Louis Gibbs said:

Beautifully expressed poem of remorse, DyingDreams! Congratulations on this one.

August 6th, 2017 11:31

Unto Forever
rrodriguez said:

Splendid! Bravo...!

August 6th, 2017 00:33

onepauly said:

what say you

July 30th, 2017 19:58

niallprideaux said:

Incredibly powerful stuff this! Very well written :)

July 23rd, 2017 01:37

Smith & Wesson
onepauly said:

suicide is always a tragedy.
and you had the courage to spell it out.

July 22nd, 2017 02:51

Poetic Dan said:

I just love this! I\'ve read it three times now and it just keeps getting better, memories of moments I\'ve spent at the lowest of levels.
Thank you so much for inspiring me, to keep being me

July 20th, 2017 14:53

orchidee said:

A fine write D. I\'m on the same lines. We can\'t pay the fee to heaven, that\'s the point. A true Christian church can tell you more. or I can, but I don\'t want to seem \'preachy\'.

July 20th, 2017 12:26

These Words That I Write
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write but words can also bring joy and beauty into lives.

July 20th, 2017 00:33

These Words That I Write
Louis Gibbs said:

You elevate the stature of rhyming poems in my eyes with this fine one, D.D. Good write!

July 19th, 2017 15:26

The Chamber Of Dead Dreams

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem. Very elegantly written pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm but with a sad subject ~ but one we can (to some extent) share if we have known the \"Agony & Ecstasy of Love \". I love your positive attitude in the last stanza ~ Thinking of you ~ Brian (UK)

July 18th, 2017 14:58

The Chamber Of Dead Dreams
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to the site DD!
Yes, your first poem here shows that you have been writing maybe for a long time. Love the subject, the words, the imagery, and the rhyming.

July 18th, 2017 11:47