Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
The Elegy of the Fading Second
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the protraction of love\'s dissolution and fading. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the protraction of love\'s dissolution and fading. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 18:33
When the Core broke
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor expanded on so well. It applies nicely to many failed relationships. Very nice
March 11th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor expanded on so well. It applies nicely to many failed relationships. Very nice
March 11th, 2026 03:48
Echoes, Shadows, and Cruel Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being trapped in the past. Nicely written in most poetic form. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being trapped in the past. Nicely written in most poetic form. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 03:50
Hope Against the Ending
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is the first time that I have seen that format intended or not it caught my eye. A sad poem that speaks of love loss over time and the end result. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is the first time that I have seen that format intended or not it caught my eye. A sad poem that speaks of love loss over time and the end result. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:39
Seasons Fleeting
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here that applies to many in that people are as unpredictable as the weather. Well said
March 5th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here that applies to many in that people are as unpredictable as the weather. Well said
March 5th, 2026 19:38
Garden of Eden
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
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