Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Buried Beneath the Ruin
sorenbarrett said:
Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:48
Enough This Time?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely written in a type of soliloquy style
May 6th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely written in a type of soliloquy style
May 6th, 2026 04:32
Gravity Between Us
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into the dynamics of attraction, miscommunication, and the paradox of feeling simultaneously close and distant from another person.
May 4th, 2026 13:47
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into the dynamics of attraction, miscommunication, and the paradox of feeling simultaneously close and distant from another person.
May 4th, 2026 13:47
Gravity Between Us
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of reality in this write that touches what is human in us the imperfection that never quite comes up to expectation that falls just short. A most human write and that is poetry to me and so a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of reality in this write that touches what is human in us the imperfection that never quite comes up to expectation that falls just short. A most human write and that is poetry to me and so a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:13
A Habit I Can’t Outrun
sorenbarrett said:
A relationship that feels like an addiction. Nicely written it is soft and alluring but not easy to escape. Well done
May 2nd, 2026 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A relationship that feels like an addiction. Nicely written it is soft and alluring but not easy to escape. Well done
May 2nd, 2026 20:07
If We Were Ready
sorenbarrett said:
Love that takes its time and makes no demands allowed to grow on its own would definitely be a stronger one. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Love that takes its time and makes no demands allowed to grow on its own would definitely be a stronger one. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:25
Convenient
sorenbarrett said:
Hope dies hard and yet little changes. Nice write
April 29th, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
Hope dies hard and yet little changes. Nice write
April 29th, 2026 20:23
Borrowed Color
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely and nostalgic poem of love and proximity to another. I would trade all my tomorrows for a single yesterday (line from Kris Kristofferson\'s Me and Bobbie McGee)
April 28th, 2026 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely and nostalgic poem of love and proximity to another. I would trade all my tomorrows for a single yesterday (line from Kris Kristofferson\'s Me and Bobbie McGee)
April 28th, 2026 19:35
Right Here Is Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that ends in incompletion. Nicely written
April 26th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that ends in incompletion. Nicely written
April 26th, 2026 13:52
We Were Just Early
Katie B. said:
This is excellent, moving, with a gentle power. Expressed so well!! Kudos
April 25th, 2026 07:57
Katie B. said:
This is excellent, moving, with a gentle power. Expressed so well!! Kudos
April 25th, 2026 07:57
We Were Just Early
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply insightful in its psychological views of a relationship while also most poetic with my favorite line being the last. A fave
April 25th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply insightful in its psychological views of a relationship while also most poetic with my favorite line being the last. A fave
April 25th, 2026 06:35
Enough To Be Seen
Friendship said:
A sad poem, your poem revolves around longing and the desire for significance in a relationship that has faded. The poet expresses feelings of inadequacy and heartbreak, wishing to matter deeply to someone who no longer values them as they once did. nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 19:03
Friendship said:
A sad poem, your poem revolves around longing and the desire for significance in a relationship that has faded. The poet expresses feelings of inadequacy and heartbreak, wishing to matter deeply to someone who no longer values them as they once did. nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 19:03
What You Took With You
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
Someone Else’s Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
Better With You, Broken Without
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
The Names I Became
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
The Names I Became
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
Temporary, But Enough
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Temporary, But Enough
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
Echoes I Cant Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
The Aftermath of Everything
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
The Aftermath of Everything
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
The Things I Wish Were Lies
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
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