Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
An Endless Return to You
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mobius strip analogy used here. This write tells it as it is in such a push pull situation. A fave
September 30th, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mobius strip analogy used here. This write tells it as it is in such a push pull situation. A fave
September 30th, 2026 09:33
An Endless Return to You
Paul Bell said:
Love, should come with a health warning.
When you\'re in it, it\'s great.
When you\'re in and out, it\'s confusing.
September 30th, 2026 09:18
Paul Bell said:
Love, should come with a health warning.
When you\'re in it, it\'s great.
When you\'re in and out, it\'s confusing.
September 30th, 2026 09:18
The Lifeline Turned Noose
sorenbarrett said:
Lack of commitment is the evident point in this poem. Nicely done
September 24th, 2026 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
Lack of commitment is the evident point in this poem. Nicely done
September 24th, 2026 20:18
An Elegy for What Never Was
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships are built on overwhelming desire and little more. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships are built on overwhelming desire and little more. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 14:55
Not The Man I Used To Be
sorenbarrett said:
Changes bring growth pains they say and it appears so here. well written my friend
August 31st, 2026 20:34
sorenbarrett said:
Changes bring growth pains they say and it appears so here. well written my friend
August 31st, 2026 20:34
The Fall From The Sun
sorenbarrett said:
A great mythological metaphor with good imagery used to depict a relationship gone bad for lack of noticing. Now burnt it falls. Well written
August 26th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A great mythological metaphor with good imagery used to depict a relationship gone bad for lack of noticing. Now burnt it falls. Well written
August 26th, 2026 03:59
Wasted
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of lost time and effort in this write but then an acknowledgement that it is not all in vain that one thing was not lost and that is the relationship. A cry of gratitude and a great love poem.
August 19th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of lost time and effort in this write but then an acknowledgement that it is not all in vain that one thing was not lost and that is the relationship. A cry of gratitude and a great love poem.
August 19th, 2026 04:05
Adrift in the Dark
sorenbarrett said:
There is a loneliness to this write and a feeling of hopelessness. Well done with good rhyme and meter.
August 16th, 2026 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
There is a loneliness to this write and a feeling of hopelessness. Well done with good rhyme and meter.
August 16th, 2026 15:04
Temporary Oxygen
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of being used in this poem and a desire to mean something. Well done
August 9th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of being used in this poem and a desire to mean something. Well done
August 9th, 2026 15:55
Out Of Frame
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to be a factor of aging as we all grow older we grow less important. Nicely done
August 8th, 2026 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to be a factor of aging as we all grow older we grow less important. Nicely done
August 8th, 2026 19:07
Charcoal Horizons
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is all too real with fires in Europe and the West of the U.S. but also metaphoric. Periodic fires are healthy for the forest but not when mismanagement has left heavy undergrowth that fuels the inferno. Some seeds need fire to germinate but when too hot they incinerate. So with life as well. A lovely write and a fave
August 1st, 2026 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is all too real with fires in Europe and the West of the U.S. but also metaphoric. Periodic fires are healthy for the forest but not when mismanagement has left heavy undergrowth that fuels the inferno. Some seeds need fire to germinate but when too hot they incinerate. So with life as well. A lovely write and a fave
August 1st, 2026 09:38
Where The Ivy Found Me
sorenbarrett said:
Patience is demonstrated in this poem of waiting despite another not paying attention. Nicely worded
July 25th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Patience is demonstrated in this poem of waiting despite another not paying attention. Nicely worded
July 25th, 2026 10:56
The Ache That Cannot Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A good write of a present situation for an old feeling.
July 24th, 2026 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
A good write of a present situation for an old feeling.
July 24th, 2026 20:36
The Weight Of Your Current
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are sometime one sided and this seems to be one. Well written
July 23rd, 2026 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are sometime one sided and this seems to be one. Well written
July 23rd, 2026 18:59
Wrong time, Wrong choice
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of someone that did not put in the effort. Well written
July 21st, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of someone that did not put in the effort. Well written
July 21st, 2026 20:23
The Would I Reopened
sorenbarrett said:
Turning the blame inward this poem speaks of pain being self inflicted due to an inability to turn their back on a relationship. Well written
July 20th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
Turning the blame inward this poem speaks of pain being self inflicted due to an inability to turn their back on a relationship. Well written
July 20th, 2026 20:08
Missing From Me
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of language to explain a feeling. Other languages often provide doorways into feelings not available in another language and this is one. Well done
July 5th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of language to explain a feeling. Other languages often provide doorways into feelings not available in another language and this is one. Well done
July 5th, 2026 11:44
Upon Deaf Ears
sorenbarrett said:
Drowning on truth is a hard thing to swallow. A wonderful write that speaks in symbols and metaphors. So true that others do not hear us and probably do not want to. Nicely done
June 26th, 2026 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Drowning on truth is a hard thing to swallow. A wonderful write that speaks in symbols and metaphors. So true that others do not hear us and probably do not want to. Nicely done
June 26th, 2026 12:31
A Bed I Choose
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of attachment to pain and hurt. Nicely written
June 24th, 2026 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of attachment to pain and hurt. Nicely written
June 24th, 2026 16:57
An Overcast Forever
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem that develops gradually as does distance in a relationship. Very nicely timed and written a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem that develops gradually as does distance in a relationship. Very nicely timed and written a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:44
The Question Without an Answer
sorenbarrett said:
The dilema of two doors neither of which is acceptable. A sad situation. Well written
June 16th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
The dilema of two doors neither of which is acceptable. A sad situation. Well written
June 16th, 2026 14:08
The Price Of Change
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful when a person desires change in another maybe they should consider change in themself. A lovely write an a fave for the message
June 13th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful when a person desires change in another maybe they should consider change in themself. A lovely write an a fave for the message
June 13th, 2026 12:34
When I Leave
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is an entangled heart poem where holding onto the anchor rope pulls one down and must be let go of. Very identifiable and well written a common experience for many it does not decrease the pain of loss. A sad and hopeful poem at the same time.
June 9th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is an entangled heart poem where holding onto the anchor rope pulls one down and must be let go of. Very identifiable and well written a common experience for many it does not decrease the pain of loss. A sad and hopeful poem at the same time.
June 9th, 2026 03:48
The Ache Of Holding On
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sadness that won\'t end. Well written
June 4th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sadness that won\'t end. Well written
June 4th, 2026 14:11
If Only
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and regretful feel to this poem that leaves the reader feeling in despair. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and regretful feel to this poem that leaves the reader feeling in despair. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 11:06
Hope Holds The Knife
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes turn expectations that grow to more than what can be hoped for and anxiety and sadness ensues with disappointment Well done
May 29th, 2026 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes turn expectations that grow to more than what can be hoped for and anxiety and sadness ensues with disappointment Well done
May 29th, 2026 18:36
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