Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Right Here Is Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that ends in incompletion. Nicely written
April 26th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that ends in incompletion. Nicely written
April 26th, 2026 13:52
We Were Just Early
Katie B. said:
This is excellent, moving, with a gentle power. Expressed so well!! Kudos
April 25th, 2026 07:57
Katie B. said:
This is excellent, moving, with a gentle power. Expressed so well!! Kudos
April 25th, 2026 07:57
We Were Just Early
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply insightful in its psychological views of a relationship while also most poetic with my favorite line being the last. A fave
April 25th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply insightful in its psychological views of a relationship while also most poetic with my favorite line being the last. A fave
April 25th, 2026 06:35
Enough To Be Seen
Friendship said:
A sad poem, your poem revolves around longing and the desire for significance in a relationship that has faded. The poet expresses feelings of inadequacy and heartbreak, wishing to matter deeply to someone who no longer values them as they once did. nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 19:03
Friendship said:
A sad poem, your poem revolves around longing and the desire for significance in a relationship that has faded. The poet expresses feelings of inadequacy and heartbreak, wishing to matter deeply to someone who no longer values them as they once did. nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 19:03
What You Took With You
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
Someone Else’s Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
Better With You, Broken Without
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
The Names I Became
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
The Names I Became
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
Temporary, But Enough
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Temporary, But Enough
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
Echoes I Cant Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
The Aftermath of Everything
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
The Aftermath of Everything
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
The Things I Wish Were Lies
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
Wax Wings
sorenbarrett said:
A nice turn on mythology made metaphor. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A nice turn on mythology made metaphor. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:03
Observer of What Was Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a reflection in this poem. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a reflection in this poem. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:53
Grieving The Ghost Of Us
sorenbarrett said:
We all seem to have a gap between expectations and reality here demonstrated in a relationship. Well done
April 9th, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all seem to have a gap between expectations and reality here demonstrated in a relationship. Well done
April 9th, 2026 03:07
What\'s Left To Give
Katie B. said:
Love \".softened edges.\" Love can be messy and those you love can disappoint in any relationship. Powerful write.
April 8th, 2026 04:41
Katie B. said:
Love \".softened edges.\" Love can be messy and those you love can disappoint in any relationship. Powerful write.
April 8th, 2026 04:41
The Burden I\'m Now Condemned To Hold
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells its tail with good flow. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 02:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells its tail with good flow. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 02:36
A Lifetime Trained For No One
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
Carried Away With The Candle Smoke
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
Ashes of an Empire
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
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