Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
A Lifetime Trained For No One
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
Carried Away With The Candle Smoke
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
Ashes of an Empire
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
Ashes of an Empire
Lorenz said:
That deadly erruption of Vesuvius was merely a minor event that did not shakes the power of an empire at its zenith .
April 3rd, 2026 04:49
Lorenz said:
That deadly erruption of Vesuvius was merely a minor event that did not shakes the power of an empire at its zenith .
April 3rd, 2026 04:49
Ashes of an Empire
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that uses historical analogy through simile to make its point. Well fit the example is powerful
April 3rd, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that uses historical analogy through simile to make its point. Well fit the example is powerful
April 3rd, 2026 04:08
A Candle Snuffed By Your Absence
sorenbarrett said:
Finding value in life and finding oneself and being true to it important elements in being able to love oneself and life too. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Finding value in life and finding oneself and being true to it important elements in being able to love oneself and life too. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2026 04:25
A Candle Lit For Your Return
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses regret in a relationship and desire to make amends but the lack of knowing how. I will await the next view tomorrow. Well written
April 1st, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses regret in a relationship and desire to make amends but the lack of knowing how. I will await the next view tomorrow. Well written
April 1st, 2026 03:52
Hollowed and Named
MendedFences27 said:
Love this simple and straight forward poem. The images it creates in the reader reach deep. The pain of a lost romance is apparent, yet the words reflect on what is left. This one\'s a keeper. - Phil A.
March 31st, 2026 21:21
MendedFences27 said:
Love this simple and straight forward poem. The images it creates in the reader reach deep. The pain of a lost romance is apparent, yet the words reflect on what is left. This one\'s a keeper. - Phil A.
March 31st, 2026 21:21
Hollowed and Named
sorenbarrett said:
This carries a sad feel both at the self deprecation and at the loss. Nicely written
March 31st, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This carries a sad feel both at the self deprecation and at the loss. Nicely written
March 31st, 2026 04:04
A Mind Divided Against the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic this poem speaks of loss of something past or maybe that never was. It cries out of a love now gone not in the heart but in what can be grasped. An imprint left in the mud of the soul that needs to be filled. It is sad and wistful in hope. Nicely crafted it is a tune on the breeze who\'s direction can not be determined. Nicely done
March 29th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic this poem speaks of loss of something past or maybe that never was. It cries out of a love now gone not in the heart but in what can be grasped. An imprint left in the mud of the soul that needs to be filled. It is sad and wistful in hope. Nicely crafted it is a tune on the breeze who\'s direction can not be determined. Nicely done
March 29th, 2026 04:57
Two Truths That Couldn’t Live Together
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy presented in this poem about love and time itself. Nicely worded in its monologue it argues its point. Very nice
March 27th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy presented in this poem about love and time itself. Nicely worded in its monologue it argues its point. Very nice
March 27th, 2026 04:21
Eight Ball, Corner Pocket
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that works well in the game of love. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that works well in the game of love. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 06:48
Our Tomorrow, Given Away
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of sad isolation in this poem that cries out but seems not to be heard. Well written
March 25th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of sad isolation in this poem that cries out but seems not to be heard. Well written
March 25th, 2026 03:54
You Fed Me Forever While Planning Never
Doggerel Dave said:
Not done this for a long while... but here presented once more with feeling:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 24th, 2026 04:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Not done this for a long while... but here presented once more with feeling:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
March 24th, 2026 04:45
You Fed Me Forever While Planning Never
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad mood it is melancholic and has a tinge of resentment. Nicely written it lays out its story line upon line.
March 24th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad mood it is melancholic and has a tinge of resentment. Nicely written it lays out its story line upon line.
March 24th, 2026 04:31
Uncharted, Unheld
sorenbarrett said:
This is so poetic just enough left to interpretation so that it can be taken many ways and explicit enough to evoke definite ideas with enough incongruous pairings to be poetic. Lovely and a fave
March 23rd, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This is so poetic just enough left to interpretation so that it can be taken many ways and explicit enough to evoke definite ideas with enough incongruous pairings to be poetic. Lovely and a fave
March 23rd, 2026 04:19
A Thought That Doesn\'t Return
sorenbarrett said:
To be edited out of one\'s book is a frightening thought like unto being erased from history your own relevance questioned. Strong thoughts in this poem
March 22nd, 2026 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
To be edited out of one\'s book is a frightening thought like unto being erased from history your own relevance questioned. Strong thoughts in this poem
March 22nd, 2026 09:42
Easy For You
sorenbarrett said:
Once feeling important transforms into a lack of present importance. Nicely said
March 21st, 2026 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Once feeling important transforms into a lack of present importance. Nicely said
March 21st, 2026 20:04
Still yours, Just Not Beside You
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes letting go is the best for both people and sometime is better just for one to let go for the sake of the other is a noble sacrifice and to let go for one\'s own sake may be the most logical. Well written
March 20th, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes letting go is the best for both people and sometime is better just for one to let go for the sake of the other is a noble sacrifice and to let go for one\'s own sake may be the most logical. Well written
March 20th, 2026 19:04
Drenched in Your Absence
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors fall in drops in this poem and the water level raises until one drowns. Nicely done
March 19th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors fall in drops in this poem and the water level raises until one drowns. Nicely done
March 19th, 2026 04:52
Note to Self: Love\'s Unseen Battle
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this poem. A warning to others it tells of the need for unity and the result of division. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this poem. A warning to others it tells of the need for unity and the result of division. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:06
The Hours That Haunt Me
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and dark this poem casts shadows of the past and leaves the reader shuddering and cold. Well written
March 16th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and dark this poem casts shadows of the past and leaves the reader shuddering and cold. Well written
March 16th, 2026 03:14
Seismic Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of nature and its force for a relationship well worded and powerful. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of nature and its force for a relationship well worded and powerful. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 20:48
Seismic Goodbye
HerTime said:
Describing emotions tied to love and loss through the beauty and harshness of mother nature. Very well done. A fav for sure.
March 15th, 2026 19:47
HerTime said:
Describing emotions tied to love and loss through the beauty and harshness of mother nature. Very well done. A fav for sure.
March 15th, 2026 19:47
When Words Become Useless
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love made in this poem. Well worded it calls out for a response. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love made in this poem. Well worded it calls out for a response. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 09:51
Where Love was Only Rehearsed
sorenbarrett said:
When love becomes a play where the actors have to learn their lines and kisses are no more than a job well done then it is the audience that applauds when the curtain falls and the actors take off their costumes in private dressing rooms. Very nicely inked
March 13th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
When love becomes a play where the actors have to learn their lines and kisses are no more than a job well done then it is the audience that applauds when the curtain falls and the actors take off their costumes in private dressing rooms. Very nicely inked
March 13th, 2026 11:30
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