Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Missing From Me
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of language to explain a feeling. Other languages often provide doorways into feelings not available in another language and this is one. Well done
July 5th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of language to explain a feeling. Other languages often provide doorways into feelings not available in another language and this is one. Well done
July 5th, 2026 11:44
Upon Deaf Ears
sorenbarrett said:
Drowning on truth is a hard thing to swallow. A wonderful write that speaks in symbols and metaphors. So true that others do not hear us and probably do not want to. Nicely done
June 26th, 2026 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Drowning on truth is a hard thing to swallow. A wonderful write that speaks in symbols and metaphors. So true that others do not hear us and probably do not want to. Nicely done
June 26th, 2026 12:31
A Bed I Choose
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of attachment to pain and hurt. Nicely written
June 24th, 2026 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of attachment to pain and hurt. Nicely written
June 24th, 2026 16:57
An Overcast Forever
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem that develops gradually as does distance in a relationship. Very nicely timed and written a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem that develops gradually as does distance in a relationship. Very nicely timed and written a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:44
The Question Without an Answer
sorenbarrett said:
The dilema of two doors neither of which is acceptable. A sad situation. Well written
June 16th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
The dilema of two doors neither of which is acceptable. A sad situation. Well written
June 16th, 2026 14:08
The Price Of Change
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful when a person desires change in another maybe they should consider change in themself. A lovely write an a fave for the message
June 13th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful when a person desires change in another maybe they should consider change in themself. A lovely write an a fave for the message
June 13th, 2026 12:34
When I Leave
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is an entangled heart poem where holding onto the anchor rope pulls one down and must be let go of. Very identifiable and well written a common experience for many it does not decrease the pain of loss. A sad and hopeful poem at the same time.
June 9th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This indeed is an entangled heart poem where holding onto the anchor rope pulls one down and must be let go of. Very identifiable and well written a common experience for many it does not decrease the pain of loss. A sad and hopeful poem at the same time.
June 9th, 2026 03:48
The Ache Of Holding On
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sadness that won\'t end. Well written
June 4th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sadness that won\'t end. Well written
June 4th, 2026 14:11
If Only
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and regretful feel to this poem that leaves the reader feeling in despair. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and regretful feel to this poem that leaves the reader feeling in despair. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 11:06
Hope Holds The Knife
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes turn expectations that grow to more than what can be hoped for and anxiety and sadness ensues with disappointment Well done
May 29th, 2026 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes turn expectations that grow to more than what can be hoped for and anxiety and sadness ensues with disappointment Well done
May 29th, 2026 18:36
The Cruelty Of Still Caring
Kevin Hulme said:
A very enjoyable Poem. Well written.
May 28th, 2026 09:36
Kevin Hulme said:
A very enjoyable Poem. Well written.
May 28th, 2026 09:36
The Cruelty Of Still Caring
sorenbarrett said:
A love rejected, unrequited is a sad situation and it is heard in this poem. Well written
May 27th, 2026 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
A love rejected, unrequited is a sad situation and it is heard in this poem. Well written
May 27th, 2026 16:34
Still I Stand
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents the dilema of sacrifice in the face of incompatibility recognized. Well done
May 25th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents the dilema of sacrifice in the face of incompatibility recognized. Well done
May 25th, 2026 04:24
Loving Beyond Return
sorenbarrett said:
It is the topic and message said poetically that gets the fave. Yes we all pretend within our bubble so as not to break it. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
It is the topic and message said poetically that gets the fave. Yes we all pretend within our bubble so as not to break it. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 10:50
Violent Forecast
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with a wonderful metaphor and very descriptive imagery where all details fall into line. Nicely done and a fave
May 22nd, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with a wonderful metaphor and very descriptive imagery where all details fall into line. Nicely done and a fave
May 22nd, 2026 03:36
Where my Worth Disappears
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love controlled. Well written
May 20th, 2026 21:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love controlled. Well written
May 20th, 2026 21:22
The Damage I Excuse
sorenbarrett said:
Worn down by another one has to question how much is left to give. Taking care of oneself first is paramount in any relationship or there will be no one to give. Well done
May 19th, 2026 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Worn down by another one has to question how much is left to give. Taking care of oneself first is paramount in any relationship or there will be no one to give. Well done
May 19th, 2026 18:18
Easier Left Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
Walking on egg shells so to speak. It is a difficult thing when one must watch every word. Well written
May 18th, 2026 20:19
sorenbarrett said:
Walking on egg shells so to speak. It is a difficult thing when one must watch every word. Well written
May 18th, 2026 20:19
Eroding
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic expression of agony over separation and sadness of loss. Well said
May 17th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic expression of agony over separation and sadness of loss. Well said
May 17th, 2026 04:43
Drowning In The Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
Time we all battle with it and live in it. A good write
May 15th, 2026 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Time we all battle with it and live in it. A good write
May 15th, 2026 18:46
Drowning In The Hourglass
Katie B. said:
Wow this is amazing and powerful. Way to write!!
May 15th, 2026 17:06
Katie B. said:
Wow this is amazing and powerful. Way to write!!
May 15th, 2026 17:06
A Familiar Feeling
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic the images are concrete and well chosen. A good write
May 15th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic the images are concrete and well chosen. A good write
May 15th, 2026 06:12
A Heart That Refuses Closure
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed a comment on the past and its relationship
May 14th, 2026 00:39
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed a comment on the past and its relationship
May 14th, 2026 00:39
Just Enough to shatter Again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dependent relationship where one loves more than the other and where abuse is prevalent. Well written
May 11th, 2026 22:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dependent relationship where one loves more than the other and where abuse is prevalent. Well written
May 11th, 2026 22:09
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