Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Still I Stand
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents the dilema of sacrifice in the face of incompatibility recognized. Well done
May 25th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents the dilema of sacrifice in the face of incompatibility recognized. Well done
May 25th, 2026 04:24
Loving Beyond Return
sorenbarrett said:
It is the topic and message said poetically that gets the fave. Yes we all pretend within our bubble so as not to break it. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
It is the topic and message said poetically that gets the fave. Yes we all pretend within our bubble so as not to break it. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 10:50
Violent Forecast
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with a wonderful metaphor and very descriptive imagery where all details fall into line. Nicely done and a fave
May 22nd, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with a wonderful metaphor and very descriptive imagery where all details fall into line. Nicely done and a fave
May 22nd, 2026 03:36
Where my Worth Disappears
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love controlled. Well written
May 20th, 2026 21:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love controlled. Well written
May 20th, 2026 21:22
The Damage I Excuse
sorenbarrett said:
Worn down by another one has to question how much is left to give. Taking care of oneself first is paramount in any relationship or there will be no one to give. Well done
May 19th, 2026 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Worn down by another one has to question how much is left to give. Taking care of oneself first is paramount in any relationship or there will be no one to give. Well done
May 19th, 2026 18:18
Easier Left Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
Walking on egg shells so to speak. It is a difficult thing when one must watch every word. Well written
May 18th, 2026 20:19
sorenbarrett said:
Walking on egg shells so to speak. It is a difficult thing when one must watch every word. Well written
May 18th, 2026 20:19
Eroding
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic expression of agony over separation and sadness of loss. Well said
May 17th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic expression of agony over separation and sadness of loss. Well said
May 17th, 2026 04:43
Drowning In The Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
Time we all battle with it and live in it. A good write
May 15th, 2026 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Time we all battle with it and live in it. A good write
May 15th, 2026 18:46
Drowning In The Hourglass
Katie B. said:
Wow this is amazing and powerful. Way to write!!
May 15th, 2026 17:06
Katie B. said:
Wow this is amazing and powerful. Way to write!!
May 15th, 2026 17:06
A Familiar Feeling
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic the images are concrete and well chosen. A good write
May 15th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic the images are concrete and well chosen. A good write
May 15th, 2026 06:12
A Heart That Refuses Closure
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed a comment on the past and its relationship
May 14th, 2026 00:39
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed a comment on the past and its relationship
May 14th, 2026 00:39
Just Enough to shatter Again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dependent relationship where one loves more than the other and where abuse is prevalent. Well written
May 11th, 2026 22:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dependent relationship where one loves more than the other and where abuse is prevalent. Well written
May 11th, 2026 22:09
Echoes I Cant Silence
Jamiano said:
The voice one hears,
before one sleeps,
quickens dtreams...
May 9th, 2026 23:47
Jamiano said:
The voice one hears,
before one sleeps,
quickens dtreams...
May 9th, 2026 23:47
A Soul That Flickers
sorenbarrett said:
There is sadness and loneliness in this poem, a loss of meaning. Well written
May 9th, 2026 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
There is sadness and loneliness in this poem, a loss of meaning. Well written
May 9th, 2026 18:58
Only Me In The End
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misled one fails to learn from the past and falls for the same lines again with the same result. Dependency and wishing that things were different or changed does not make them so. Well written
May 7th, 2026 21:30
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misled one fails to learn from the past and falls for the same lines again with the same result. Dependency and wishing that things were different or changed does not make them so. Well written
May 7th, 2026 21:30
Buried Beneath the Ruin
sorenbarrett said:
Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
Hope buried and now unearthed. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:48
Enough This Time?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely written in a type of soliloquy style
May 6th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions where resolution comes in the last stanza. Nicely written in a type of soliloquy style
May 6th, 2026 04:32
Gravity Between Us
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into the dynamics of attraction, miscommunication, and the paradox of feeling simultaneously close and distant from another person.
May 4th, 2026 13:47
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into the dynamics of attraction, miscommunication, and the paradox of feeling simultaneously close and distant from another person.
May 4th, 2026 13:47
Gravity Between Us
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of reality in this write that touches what is human in us the imperfection that never quite comes up to expectation that falls just short. A most human write and that is poetry to me and so a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of reality in this write that touches what is human in us the imperfection that never quite comes up to expectation that falls just short. A most human write and that is poetry to me and so a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:13
A Habit I Can’t Outrun
sorenbarrett said:
A relationship that feels like an addiction. Nicely written it is soft and alluring but not easy to escape. Well done
May 2nd, 2026 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A relationship that feels like an addiction. Nicely written it is soft and alluring but not easy to escape. Well done
May 2nd, 2026 20:07
If We Were Ready
sorenbarrett said:
Love that takes its time and makes no demands allowed to grow on its own would definitely be a stronger one. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Love that takes its time and makes no demands allowed to grow on its own would definitely be a stronger one. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:25
Convenient
sorenbarrett said:
Hope dies hard and yet little changes. Nice write
April 29th, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
Hope dies hard and yet little changes. Nice write
April 29th, 2026 20:23
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