Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
What You Took With You
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love one of the saddest topics in poetry. Well written
April 22nd, 2026 16:24
Someone Else’s Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling permeates this poem a settling sense of finality on something not yet finished and ache that reminds one of what it was to not have pain. Most dysthymic and softly melancholy. Well written
April 21st, 2026 20:11
Better With You, Broken Without
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
That feeling of dependence that one feels when smitten is in this poem and although not advisable is normal for anyone obsessed with another.
April 20th, 2026 18:31
The Names I Became
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
marissa said:
There’s no other way to call this but perfect,i really resonate with the way you described them individually and almost connected them back to one another.I love this.
April 18th, 2026 14:55
The Names I Became
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Many feelings personified in this poem leaving each its touch. Well done
April 18th, 2026 14:09
Temporary, But Enough
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Katie B. said:
Wow! Deep, heavy and moving. So powerful and well written. You conveyed your message well. Job well done! Kudos
April 17th, 2026 05:00
Temporary, But Enough
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem lays bare decisions made about a relationship and its importance. Nicely written it exposes the author making them vulnerable to exploitation. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 04:51
Echoes I Cant Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is such a hard task master and here it is heard in the voice of the poet
April 15th, 2026 15:40
The Aftermath of Everything
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this a fave taking a well known religious image of the fall from Eden and incorporating it into everyday and personal happenings. It falls hard at the end of this poem. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:43
The Aftermath of Everything
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
Kora said:
This resonated so deeply with me.
The line \'as if time blinked and decided I no longer belonged to it\'...
I think this might be my favourite out of all the poems I\'ve read on this site.
No words, just wow ♥️
April 14th, 2026 03:19
The Things I Wish Were Lies
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
What we say and what we feel or mean are not always the same. Nicely said
April 13th, 2026 06:41
Wax Wings
sorenbarrett said:
A nice turn on mythology made metaphor. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A nice turn on mythology made metaphor. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:03
Observer of What Was Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a reflection in this poem. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a reflection in this poem. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:53
Grieving The Ghost Of Us
sorenbarrett said:
We all seem to have a gap between expectations and reality here demonstrated in a relationship. Well done
April 9th, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all seem to have a gap between expectations and reality here demonstrated in a relationship. Well done
April 9th, 2026 03:07
What\'s Left To Give
Katie B. said:
Love \".softened edges.\" Love can be messy and those you love can disappoint in any relationship. Powerful write.
April 8th, 2026 04:41
Katie B. said:
Love \".softened edges.\" Love can be messy and those you love can disappoint in any relationship. Powerful write.
April 8th, 2026 04:41
The Burden I\'m Now Condemned To Hold
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells its tail with good flow. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 02:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells its tail with good flow. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 02:36
A Lifetime Trained For No One
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A point well made in poetic form of an obsessive drive punctuated by a phone. Well done
April 6th, 2026 04:47
Carried Away With The Candle Smoke
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Memories take the forefront in this poem of a longing and wistful poem. Lovely
April 5th, 2026 03:57
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
Bragee said:
Deep poetry!
Sadly many ppl have no idea what love is supposed to look and feel like so we mistreat it unnecessarily.
April 4th, 2026 09:02
You Called It Boring, I Called It Home
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is duality in this poem and in life as well. Nicely written it speaks of love and its pain. Well done
April 4th, 2026 03:59
Ashes of an Empire
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
No one can accuse you of inconsistency. From the selection of a moniker, through to the content of your poems there is no doubt………. Not a topic I engage with much, in fact actively try to avoid, but your poem here and several others overcome that resistance to a degree….. only to a degree, mind.
Let’s see you out in the world sometime (when you are ready).
April 3rd, 2026 16:31
Ashes of an Empire
Lorenz said:
That deadly erruption of Vesuvius was merely a minor event that did not shakes the power of an empire at its zenith .
April 3rd, 2026 04:49
Lorenz said:
That deadly erruption of Vesuvius was merely a minor event that did not shakes the power of an empire at its zenith .
April 3rd, 2026 04:49
Ashes of an Empire
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that uses historical analogy through simile to make its point. Well fit the example is powerful
April 3rd, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that uses historical analogy through simile to make its point. Well fit the example is powerful
April 3rd, 2026 04:08
A Candle Snuffed By Your Absence
sorenbarrett said:
Finding value in life and finding oneself and being true to it important elements in being able to love oneself and life too. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Finding value in life and finding oneself and being true to it important elements in being able to love oneself and life too. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2026 04:25
A Candle Lit For Your Return
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses regret in a relationship and desire to make amends but the lack of knowing how. I will await the next view tomorrow. Well written
April 1st, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses regret in a relationship and desire to make amends but the lack of knowing how. I will await the next view tomorrow. Well written
April 1st, 2026 03:52
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