Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Garden of Eden
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
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