Comments received on poems by Entangled heart
Note to Self: Love\'s Unseen Battle
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this poem. A warning to others it tells of the need for unity and the result of division. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this poem. A warning to others it tells of the need for unity and the result of division. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:06
The Hours That Haunt Me
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and dark this poem casts shadows of the past and leaves the reader shuddering and cold. Well written
March 16th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and dark this poem casts shadows of the past and leaves the reader shuddering and cold. Well written
March 16th, 2026 03:14
Seismic Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of nature and its force for a relationship well worded and powerful. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of nature and its force for a relationship well worded and powerful. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 20:48
Seismic Goodbye
HerTime said:
Describing emotions tied to love and loss through the beauty and harshness of mother nature. Very well done. A fav for sure.
March 15th, 2026 19:47
HerTime said:
Describing emotions tied to love and loss through the beauty and harshness of mother nature. Very well done. A fav for sure.
March 15th, 2026 19:47
When Words Become Useless
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love made in this poem. Well worded it calls out for a response. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love made in this poem. Well worded it calls out for a response. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 09:51
Where Love was Only Rehearsed
sorenbarrett said:
When love becomes a play where the actors have to learn their lines and kisses are no more than a job well done then it is the audience that applauds when the curtain falls and the actors take off their costumes in private dressing rooms. Very nicely inked
March 13th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
When love becomes a play where the actors have to learn their lines and kisses are no more than a job well done then it is the audience that applauds when the curtain falls and the actors take off their costumes in private dressing rooms. Very nicely inked
March 13th, 2026 11:30
The Elegy of the Fading Second
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the protraction of love\'s dissolution and fading. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the protraction of love\'s dissolution and fading. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 18:33
When the Core broke
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor expanded on so well. It applies nicely to many failed relationships. Very nice
March 11th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor expanded on so well. It applies nicely to many failed relationships. Very nice
March 11th, 2026 03:48
Echoes, Shadows, and Cruel Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being trapped in the past. Nicely written in most poetic form. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being trapped in the past. Nicely written in most poetic form. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 03:50
Hope Against the Ending
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is the first time that I have seen that format intended or not it caught my eye. A sad poem that speaks of love loss over time and the end result. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is the first time that I have seen that format intended or not it caught my eye. A sad poem that speaks of love loss over time and the end result. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:39
Seasons Fleeting
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here that applies to many in that people are as unpredictable as the weather. Well said
March 5th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here that applies to many in that people are as unpredictable as the weather. Well said
March 5th, 2026 19:38
Garden of Eden
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up line is kind of \'cheesy\', it fits perfectly into the poem. Except for a few typos, I don\'t see how you can make it better.
December 21st, 2017 11:27
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