Comments received on poems by Hidden
Below The Surface
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the parallelism you incorporated and the message is so real! Continue writing marvels! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the parallelism you incorporated and the message is so real! Continue writing marvels! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:18
Still waiting for Guts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'guts\' are within you your words show that they are there and need to come out. Don\'t accept the norm in your life push through it and show people who you really are.
November 8th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'guts\' are within you your words show that they are there and need to come out. Don\'t accept the norm in your life push through it and show people who you really are.
November 8th, 2019 01:27
May I Kindly
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write that sounds like a proposal, do you have the ring.
September 21st, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write that sounds like a proposal, do you have the ring.
September 21st, 2019 00:26
May I Kindly
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an appealingly written set of reasons for a lady to say Yes to the questions. A lovely read ..........
September 20th, 2019 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an appealingly written set of reasons for a lady to say Yes to the questions. A lovely read ..........
September 20th, 2019 04:47
May I Kindly
orchidee said:
Why, yes of course you may - and I thank you kindly too! (heehee).
September 20th, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
Why, yes of course you may - and I thank you kindly too! (heehee).
September 20th, 2019 04:10
May I Kindly
dusk arising said:
This reads like the writer has fallen in love from afar. May not even have spoken to the person they desire, or is it a friend and writer cannot bring themselves to voice these emotions?
Either way, danger ahead for it is better to get to know someone slowly in a relationship before falling in love. They may turn out to be quite unsuitable and the writer will be trapped in an unsuitable relationship by their own emotions, probably unshared.
Stimulating writing in the form of a declaration of love.
September 20th, 2019 03:40
dusk arising said:
This reads like the writer has fallen in love from afar. May not even have spoken to the person they desire, or is it a friend and writer cannot bring themselves to voice these emotions?
Either way, danger ahead for it is better to get to know someone slowly in a relationship before falling in love. They may turn out to be quite unsuitable and the writer will be trapped in an unsuitable relationship by their own emotions, probably unshared.
Stimulating writing in the form of a declaration of love.
September 20th, 2019 03:40
Chapters
Clara said:
Wow this is excellent. I\'ve read it a few times now just to let it sink in. Thank you for sharing this!
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 12:54
Clara said:
Wow this is excellent. I\'ve read it a few times now just to let it sink in. Thank you for sharing this!
CLARA X
September 5th, 2019 12:54
Chapters
Bragee said:
Truly knowing oneself is the true key to a hopeful future!
Great Write
September 5th, 2019 12:27
Bragee said:
Truly knowing oneself is the true key to a hopeful future!
Great Write
September 5th, 2019 12:27
Chapters
Seek said:
Your understanding of yourself and all the burdens weighing down on you that you described are brushed aside by the message of hope and optimism. Great write!
September 5th, 2019 08:32
Seek said:
Your understanding of yourself and all the burdens weighing down on you that you described are brushed aside by the message of hope and optimism. Great write!
September 5th, 2019 08:32
Bittersweet
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweetness will always overcome the bitterness in life.
August 30th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweetness will always overcome the bitterness in life.
August 30th, 2019 01:06
Dear Cancer
Christina8 said:
I too had the misfortune of dealing with the thief when I lost my mother to pancreatic cancer. F@*k cancer! Thank you for sharing this brave and courageous piece with us today!
August 12th, 2019 13:19
Christina8 said:
I too had the misfortune of dealing with the thief when I lost my mother to pancreatic cancer. F@*k cancer! Thank you for sharing this brave and courageous piece with us today!
August 12th, 2019 13:19
Dear Cancer
dusk arising said:
I\'m suffering the effects of chemotherapy at the moment and being very positive that i will be one of the lucky ones with the outcome.
Having already lost my brother to this thief i really take to heart you piece today.
August 12th, 2019 12:21
dusk arising said:
I\'m suffering the effects of chemotherapy at the moment and being very positive that i will be one of the lucky ones with the outcome.
Having already lost my brother to this thief i really take to heart you piece today.
August 12th, 2019 12:21
Know Thy Worth
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I do! And a massive thank you!
Brilliantly done!
June 9th, 2019 04:17
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I do! And a massive thank you!
Brilliantly done!
June 9th, 2019 04:17
The Wound
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I huge breath was taken after this. I felt every word and still feel those daggers of burden on my back. I recently wrote a piece called \"believe it real\" and from your words I see more of what I\'ve been doing to me.
Thank you so much to this soulful message, we are all dealing with something.
Much peace and respect
June 9th, 2019 04:12
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I huge breath was taken after this. I felt every word and still feel those daggers of burden on my back. I recently wrote a piece called \"believe it real\" and from your words I see more of what I\'ve been doing to me.
Thank you so much to this soulful message, we are all dealing with something.
Much peace and respect
June 9th, 2019 04:12
Know Thy Worth
dusk arising said:
A lot of good stuff in there sir and nicely written.
A pleasure to read.
May 20th, 2019 08:25
dusk arising said:
A lot of good stuff in there sir and nicely written.
A pleasure to read.
May 20th, 2019 08:25
I Knew Better
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... This was so beautifully sad and let powerful
Thank you so much
April 18th, 2019 11:31
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... This was so beautifully sad and let powerful
Thank you so much
April 18th, 2019 11:31
I Knew Better
Lorna said:
Very touching and wise....... a lot all comes to nothing much later on but the memories are there.
April 18th, 2019 04:54
Lorna said:
Very touching and wise....... a lot all comes to nothing much later on but the memories are there.
April 18th, 2019 04:54
Loved Better
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'re doing some cool things, Hidden.
Looking forward to more from you.
March 24th, 2019 20:49
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'re doing some cool things, Hidden.
Looking forward to more from you.
March 24th, 2019 20:49
Reassurance Insurance
b-LAH-que said:
The support of family is one of my favorite lessons adulthood has taught me. Nice write, thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
b-LAH-que said:
The support of family is one of my favorite lessons adulthood has taught me. Nice write, thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
Fears of Tears
Nicholas Browning said:
A lonely, bittersweet piece in my eyes.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 05:31
Nicholas Browning said:
A lonely, bittersweet piece in my eyes.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 05:31
Not my weakness
Hidden said:
Thank you so much. I\'ve been living a jump rope kind of life and I\'m ready for a plateau to set. I needed this to be written somehow. Thank you for your time reading this.
March 13th, 2019 14:28
Hidden said:
Thank you so much. I\'ve been living a jump rope kind of life and I\'m ready for a plateau to set. I needed this to be written somehow. Thank you for your time reading this.
March 13th, 2019 14:28
Season
Hidden said:
UK gets cold year round though doesn\'t it? Like around February is your ice fun time right?
December 11th, 2018 06:19
Hidden said:
UK gets cold year round though doesn\'t it? Like around February is your ice fun time right?
December 11th, 2018 06:19
Season
orchidee said:
But we have not started Winter yet properly! lol. Well, you may have it more wintry sometimes in the U.S. than we in the U.K.
December 11th, 2018 03:41
orchidee said:
But we have not started Winter yet properly! lol. Well, you may have it more wintry sometimes in the U.S. than we in the U.K.
December 11th, 2018 03:41
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