Comments received on poems by alissa
Give it Time
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely penned - great imagery - truly enjoyed your poem - thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 17:44
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely penned - great imagery - truly enjoyed your poem - thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 17:44
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FredPeyer said:
Alissa, I like this one a lot. It is very subtle, great metaphor, very well written.
September 4th, 2017 19:29
FredPeyer said:
Alissa, I like this one a lot. It is very subtle, great metaphor, very well written.
September 4th, 2017 19:29
dear you
FredPeyer said:
As beautiful as friendship is, it can and often does become a burden. You wrote a great poem here, Alissa, about a subject that many experience, but don\'t know how to handle.
August 25th, 2017 15:43
FredPeyer said:
As beautiful as friendship is, it can and often does become a burden. You wrote a great poem here, Alissa, about a subject that many experience, but don\'t know how to handle.
August 25th, 2017 15:43
dear you
Clark said:
You are such a good friend and please do not think you weren\'t. Sometimes the people we love walk on us like we have backs made of concrete and as much as we want to be there, we just can\'t keep breaking ourselves. I just really wanted you to know that I am sorry for the loss of a good friend and that you did the right thing. I really loved this by the way!
August 25th, 2017 13:50
Clark said:
You are such a good friend and please do not think you weren\'t. Sometimes the people we love walk on us like we have backs made of concrete and as much as we want to be there, we just can\'t keep breaking ourselves. I just really wanted you to know that I am sorry for the loss of a good friend and that you did the right thing. I really loved this by the way!
August 25th, 2017 13:50
The Snowstorms of the Heart
private poet said:
I wish that I had been able to express myself like you have have when I was seventeen. I am sixty two and still not sure I am as wise as you xx
August 17th, 2017 06:48
private poet said:
I wish that I had been able to express myself like you have have when I was seventeen. I am sixty two and still not sure I am as wise as you xx
August 17th, 2017 06:48
Dead love
private poet said:
Short but noteworthy! Economic use of words but got your message out there. Xx
August 17th, 2017 06:05
private poet said:
Short but noteworthy! Economic use of words but got your message out there. Xx
August 17th, 2017 06:05
The Snowstorms of the Heart
Caden said:
Finding yourself is the hard part unfortunately, very nice poem.
August 17th, 2017 03:53
Caden said:
Finding yourself is the hard part unfortunately, very nice poem.
August 17th, 2017 03:53
Dead love
myself and me said:
The message come in at the wrong time, did not do the magic but the opposite.
Love your short but penetrating expression.
August 16th, 2017 22:18
myself and me said:
The message come in at the wrong time, did not do the magic but the opposite.
Love your short but penetrating expression.
August 16th, 2017 22:18
Dead love
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. On the other end of the spectrum, their was a time I\'d kill for a 2am message.
Very well done Alissa.
August 16th, 2017 15:00
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. On the other end of the spectrum, their was a time I\'d kill for a 2am message.
Very well done Alissa.
August 16th, 2017 15:00
Dead love
FredPeyer said:
I just love these shorties! Very well written, Alissa.
Now I know why I always turn off the phone at night.
August 16th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
I just love these shorties! Very well written, Alissa.
Now I know why I always turn off the phone at night.
August 16th, 2017 12:16
The Snowstorms of the Heart
FredPeyer said:
A very powerful, yet thoughtful poem, nicely penned, Alissa.
I think you need to do both, find yourself first, then find somebody else.
August 16th, 2017 12:13
FredPeyer said:
A very powerful, yet thoughtful poem, nicely penned, Alissa.
I think you need to do both, find yourself first, then find somebody else.
August 16th, 2017 12:13
Saved.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Alissa! The hardest part is walking out.
August 16th, 2017 12:11
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Alissa! The hardest part is walking out.
August 16th, 2017 12:11
The Snowstorms of the Heart
private poet said:
I wish that I had been able to express myself like you have have when I was seventeen. I am sixty two and still not sure I am as wise as you xx
August 16th, 2017 11:34
private poet said:
I wish that I had been able to express myself like you have have when I was seventeen. I am sixty two and still not sure I am as wise as you xx
August 16th, 2017 11:34
The Snowstorms of the Heart
myself and me said:
My heart survived a similar snowstorm. Very powerful expression.
August 14th, 2017 20:15
myself and me said:
My heart survived a similar snowstorm. Very powerful expression.
August 14th, 2017 20:15
Draining.
Heather T said:
This emotion is very well articulated in your poem. Some people can\'t be saved from themselves, and often they try to take us down with their sinking ship. Good work.
August 7th, 2017 19:57
Heather T said:
This emotion is very well articulated in your poem. Some people can\'t be saved from themselves, and often they try to take us down with their sinking ship. Good work.
August 7th, 2017 19:57
The Art of Living
Night Owl said:
Well that\'s just plain out beautiful! TY
for your art and inspiration.
August 7th, 2017 18:00
Night Owl said:
Well that\'s just plain out beautiful! TY
for your art and inspiration.
August 7th, 2017 18:00
The Art of Living
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME B & B Thanks for another lovely poem ~ Love your Philosophy ~ LIVE FOR LOVE ! I do my best ~ don\'t always succeed ! My MANTRA in Life & love has always been \"Better to have Loved & Lost ~Than never to have Loved at all !\" This seems to echo your lovely Poem ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK)
August 7th, 2017 16:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME B & B Thanks for another lovely poem ~ Love your Philosophy ~ LIVE FOR LOVE ! I do my best ~ don\'t always succeed ! My MANTRA in Life & love has always been \"Better to have Loved & Lost ~Than never to have Loved at all !\" This seems to echo your lovely Poem ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK)
August 7th, 2017 16:33
The Art of Living
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each moment of our lives is special, treasure them all.
August 6th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each moment of our lives is special, treasure them all.
August 6th, 2017 02:01
The Art of Living
Louis Gibbs said:
A truly beautiful, wisdom-filled poem, BfB! Great understanding of the journey of life displayed here. Congratulations1
August 5th, 2017 19:34
Louis Gibbs said:
A truly beautiful, wisdom-filled poem, BfB! Great understanding of the journey of life displayed here. Congratulations1
August 5th, 2017 19:34
The Bittersweet Moment of Letting Him Go.
Thewildfire said:
\"The devil is a master of disguise\",,,That was my favorite part of the poem because it shows how people who you\'ve once had so much love for, can break your heart just as easily as they mended it.
August 4th, 2017 03:18
Thewildfire said:
\"The devil is a master of disguise\",,,That was my favorite part of the poem because it shows how people who you\'ve once had so much love for, can break your heart just as easily as they mended it.
August 4th, 2017 03:18
