Comments received on poems by CSS20013
Your Eyes
Accidental Poet said:
Oh man, I\'ve been down this road before. As hard as it may seem, don\'t let them bring you down. They obviously have been caught up in their own dilemma for many many years and all they know is to unleash their frustrations in your direction. But you are not wrong, they just want you to be wrong instead of the self guilt they feel themselves. Well written piece CSS.
August 21st, 2017 19:05
Accidental Poet said:
Oh man, I\'ve been down this road before. As hard as it may seem, don\'t let them bring you down. They obviously have been caught up in their own dilemma for many many years and all they know is to unleash their frustrations in your direction. But you are not wrong, they just want you to be wrong instead of the self guilt they feel themselves. Well written piece CSS.
August 21st, 2017 19:05
Your Eyes
myself and me said:
Why the people we love hurt us the deepest.
You are not wrong. They are the ones that got lost, they need to be saved. With the challenging life you already in, this is a bigger challenge. May God give you the courage and strength.
Well done.
August 21st, 2017 14:41
myself and me said:
Why the people we love hurt us the deepest.
You are not wrong. They are the ones that got lost, they need to be saved. With the challenging life you already in, this is a bigger challenge. May God give you the courage and strength.
Well done.
August 21st, 2017 14:41
Your Eyes
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that was from the heart great write bthank you.
How many of us have felt that? and disn\'t have the strength to speak up when it happened?
August 21st, 2017 14:29
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that was from the heart great write bthank you.
How many of us have felt that? and disn\'t have the strength to speak up when it happened?
August 21st, 2017 14:29
Glass Bottle
burning-embers said:
Young you may be but this is incredibly good. Excellent theme and beautifully written. This is one of the best pieces i have seen on here and it goes straight into my favourites.
Exceptional!
August 16th, 2017 14:06
burning-embers said:
Young you may be but this is incredibly good. Excellent theme and beautifully written. This is one of the best pieces i have seen on here and it goes straight into my favourites.
Exceptional!
August 16th, 2017 14:06
Glass Bottle
FredPeyer said:
CSS, another great poem! And I agree completely with \'myself and me\' that you are much better than glass, that you are a rare crystal, to be treasured!
August 16th, 2017 01:40
FredPeyer said:
CSS, another great poem! And I agree completely with \'myself and me\' that you are much better than glass, that you are a rare crystal, to be treasured!
August 16th, 2017 01:40
Little Sister
FredPeyer said:
After reading your excellent poem and your comments about your situation, my heart goes out to you. You are a very very strong, and a shining example. Keep on going like this, and please, keep on writing!
August 16th, 2017 01:37
FredPeyer said:
After reading your excellent poem and your comments about your situation, my heart goes out to you. You are a very very strong, and a shining example. Keep on going like this, and please, keep on writing!
August 16th, 2017 01:37
Glass Bottle
Nicholas Browning said:
I tend to think that we\'re all just vessels of some sort. I\'ve found no name to accurately describes it yet, but your take on the matter is indeed interesting. Thanks for this.
August 16th, 2017 00:06
Nicholas Browning said:
I tend to think that we\'re all just vessels of some sort. I\'ve found no name to accurately describes it yet, but your take on the matter is indeed interesting. Thanks for this.
August 16th, 2017 00:06
Glass Bottle
CSS20013 said:
Thank you so much for your input and time Frank, it means a lot to me when someone takes the time to read my poems and actually likes them.
August 15th, 2017 21:21
CSS20013 said:
Thank you so much for your input and time Frank, it means a lot to me when someone takes the time to read my poems and actually likes them.
August 15th, 2017 21:21
Glass Bottle
myself and me said:
you are not glass, you are crystal, beautiful and strong.
August 15th, 2017 21:20
myself and me said:
you are not glass, you are crystal, beautiful and strong.
August 15th, 2017 21:20
Little Sister
Michael Edwards said:
You are a wonderful young lady - cherish your sister always and help keep her on the straight and narrow - why am I saying this as I know you will and - do please - keep writing great poetry.
August 14th, 2017 23:39
Michael Edwards said:
You are a wonderful young lady - cherish your sister always and help keep her on the straight and narrow - why am I saying this as I know you will and - do please - keep writing great poetry.
August 14th, 2017 23:39
Little Sister
myself and me said:
You are such a wonderful young girl, full of love, full of care, full of energy, and most important, you have such a strong heart.
I am deeply moved, not only by your poem, but also by what you are doing. Your little sister is so lucky to have you.
August 14th, 2017 22:53
myself and me said:
You are such a wonderful young girl, full of love, full of care, full of energy, and most important, you have such a strong heart.
I am deeply moved, not only by your poem, but also by what you are doing. Your little sister is so lucky to have you.
August 14th, 2017 22:53
Little Sister
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Beautiful testimony of your love for your sister - she is lucky to have a big sister like you. I grew up with three brothers and just one little sister. With so many of us we didn\'t have a whole lot of money but I wouldn\'t trade the good times we had (and still have) together for all the money in the world. Keep writing these poems to her and one day, you will be able to present a stack of them for her to read and she will see for herself your great love for her. Nice rhyming pair in \"energetic\" and \"magnetic\"...
August 14th, 2017 22:28
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Beautiful testimony of your love for your sister - she is lucky to have a big sister like you. I grew up with three brothers and just one little sister. With so many of us we didn\'t have a whole lot of money but I wouldn\'t trade the good times we had (and still have) together for all the money in the world. Keep writing these poems to her and one day, you will be able to present a stack of them for her to read and she will see for herself your great love for her. Nice rhyming pair in \"energetic\" and \"magnetic\"...
August 14th, 2017 22:28
The Girl
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the wonderful world of MPS, CSS.
This poem is well written, honest, full of emotion. The repetition of \"I am the girl\" is well chosen and helps to drive home the points made. There is only one thing wrong with it, it is the second to last line. I don\'t know how old you are, and it does not matter, anybody who can write like you do has a lot to give. There is sadness in your poem, but there is also beauty (yours), honesty, and strength. Well done, I would like to read more of your work.
August 13th, 2017 22:15
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the wonderful world of MPS, CSS.
This poem is well written, honest, full of emotion. The repetition of \"I am the girl\" is well chosen and helps to drive home the points made. There is only one thing wrong with it, it is the second to last line. I don\'t know how old you are, and it does not matter, anybody who can write like you do has a lot to give. There is sadness in your poem, but there is also beauty (yours), honesty, and strength. Well done, I would like to read more of your work.
August 13th, 2017 22:15
The Girl
Louis Gibbs said:
And you are the girl who is a poet. A touching, well expressed first poem on the site CSS! Welcome to MPS! Keep them coming.
August 13th, 2017 20:38
Louis Gibbs said:
And you are the girl who is a poet. A touching, well expressed first poem on the site CSS! Welcome to MPS! Keep them coming.
August 13th, 2017 20:38
