Comments received on poems by Caden
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dusk arising said:
Got to love yourself yep. These days we seem to try to love before we even know much about ourselves, no wonder love gets confusing. Thought provoking writing.
August 25th, 2017 03:36
dusk arising said:
Got to love yourself yep. These days we seem to try to love before we even know much about ourselves, no wonder love gets confusing. Thought provoking writing.
August 25th, 2017 03:36
Safe Place
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, that one person who we go to at all times is always there.
August 19th, 2017 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, that one person who we go to at all times is always there.
August 19th, 2017 00:23
Safe Place
Louis Gibbs said:
Blissful, but risky, that feeling ... basing one\'s \"entire world\" on another. None-the-less, a beautifully expressed poem, Caden!
August 18th, 2017 11:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Blissful, but risky, that feeling ... basing one\'s \"entire world\" on another. None-the-less, a beautifully expressed poem, Caden!
August 18th, 2017 11:43
Your Light
myself and me said:
\"though is that you\'re fighting\", and I never win. So I accept my though and hurt my heart.
Love this one.
August 17th, 2017 22:37
myself and me said:
\"though is that you\'re fighting\", and I never win. So I accept my though and hurt my heart.
Love this one.
August 17th, 2017 22:37
The Question
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. All can be seen within peoples eyes.
August 17th, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. All can be seen within peoples eyes.
August 17th, 2017 00:44
The Question
MaddieJ said:
Good write! Love the way you talk about this person and the way they change you.
August 16th, 2017 23:54
MaddieJ said:
Good write! Love the way you talk about this person and the way they change you.
August 16th, 2017 23:54
The Question
FredPeyer said:
Nice one, Caden!
You are looking at a beautiful person who will find happiness again!
August 16th, 2017 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Nice one, Caden!
You are looking at a beautiful person who will find happiness again!
August 16th, 2017 12:04
The Cycle
Louis Gibbs said:
Well done portrayal of the cycle, Caden! Nicely and neatly presented. Kudos!
August 15th, 2017 16:25
Louis Gibbs said:
Well done portrayal of the cycle, Caden! Nicely and neatly presented. Kudos!
August 15th, 2017 16:25
To Her
malubotelho said:
Beautiful writing Caden. I just love love poem and you did a great job here showing your emotions from the beginning to the end. Welcome and thanks for sharing.
August 15th, 2017 10:41
malubotelho said:
Beautiful writing Caden. I just love love poem and you did a great job here showing your emotions from the beginning to the end. Welcome and thanks for sharing.
August 15th, 2017 10:41
To Her
FredPeyer said:
As Neil Sedaka so aptly said: Breaking up is hard to do.
Welcome to MPS, Caden.
You wrote a very honest and emotional poem, with a bit of melancholy seeping through. Good work! Would like to read more from you.
August 14th, 2017 16:48
FredPeyer said:
As Neil Sedaka so aptly said: Breaking up is hard to do.
Welcome to MPS, Caden.
You wrote a very honest and emotional poem, with a bit of melancholy seeping through. Good work! Would like to read more from you.
August 14th, 2017 16:48
To Her
Lizzy Renee said:
Nice write!!! :) And welcome to my Poetic Side! A beautiful poem you have here.
August 14th, 2017 13:44
Lizzy Renee said:
Nice write!!! :) And welcome to my Poetic Side! A beautiful poem you have here.
August 14th, 2017 13:44
