Comments received on poems by Rj1way

Amber Alert
L. B. Mek said:

wise words
\'there is yet grace in our fallible humanity\'
we need but do our part, to stem
this societal moral demise..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

November 14th, 2022 04:32

Give & Recieve
a thousand wishes said:

I love this one, its an honor to read your work keep it up

August 30th, 2022 22:04

What\'s Left
L. B. Mek said:

I read the first two lines and favourited
I laud the rewrites and effort
that went into creating such a tight
what a privilege it is
to read your work, dear Poet
thank you!

August 9th, 2022 01:38

Way To Life
L. B. Mek said:

even devoid of theological alignment;
this is easily one of the most powerful
works I\'ve read this year:
\'Much good blocks the view, your unprepared for the end,

This feeling, this feeling, it hurts actors to pretend,\'
I could spend hours unpacking this
succinct and layered lines..
just a privilege to read and contemplate
thank you! for choosing to share
really like your refinement and choice wording
dear Poet
a great write!

August 2nd, 2022 03:35

Fooled Renew
L. B. Mek said:

I laud the time and care
you\'ve invested in this brilliant poem
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
\'The heart is so treacherous, as straighten it bends,

And then it breaks, oh forgiveness sake,
The false love that\'s fed, its refusing to take,

Refusing to face, refusing to make,
This outline I\'ve been giving, I\'m refusing to trace,

To choose, to pace, and notice\'

June 6th, 2022 04:33

Has Finally Past
L. B. Mek said:

sorry for the suffering you\'ve had to go through
so happy you have loved ones nearby, to help
and that you have wisdom enough, to cherish them...
\'As the condition, ourselves, we refuse to quit,
With this faithful suit of amor, we believe, and equip,\'
yes, I like the thought of intrusting in love
(whatever your translation of love is,
at the very least
it should be better than hate)
thanks for sharing..
\'stay strong, dear poet!\'

February 1st, 2022 05:53

See You Soon
Goldfinch60 said:

We certainly will see our departed loved ones in time, I know that I will.


September 23rd, 2020 00:07

Let Go
Nemo said:

Wow.. An amazing piece RKBAYB, very emotional love it 👍

January 1st, 2020 00:30

psychofemale said:

The fourth set of lines were my fav :)

January 6th, 2019 22:38

David De La Cruz said:

Nice words, and your feelings are heard clearly... but you\'re not alone, just keep writing. With words like that you\'ll always be seen...

August 20th, 2017 10:58

Cry Of Confusion
Nicholas Browning said:

Yeah. Too much, or not enough of something will do that to you. Best regards.

August 18th, 2017 10:53

Just Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

August 17th, 2017 00:58

Just Waiting
burning-embers said:

Good writing, your heart in words.

August 17th, 2017 00:01

Just Waiting
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 16th, 2017 13:33