Comments received on poems by Egyptianqt79
Between here and there
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah I find a fondness to your writing which is rare for me, your voice is developing very gracefully, blessings to u:)
October 17th, 2017 11:45
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah I find a fondness to your writing which is rare for me, your voice is developing very gracefully, blessings to u:)
October 17th, 2017 11:45
Painting colors with words
germanamericanchurch said:
Very smooth and descriptive, made me read out loud, which usually means it\'s true expressions
October 17th, 2017 11:41
germanamericanchurch said:
Very smooth and descriptive, made me read out loud, which usually means it\'s true expressions
October 17th, 2017 11:41
Broken
germanamericanchurch said:
Broken in the mind is almost more real then a body that u can see to heal:) that low place is where sad beautiful songs are born
October 17th, 2017 11:38
germanamericanchurch said:
Broken in the mind is almost more real then a body that u can see to heal:) that low place is where sad beautiful songs are born
October 17th, 2017 11:38
Josh
germanamericanchurch said:
Death gives what life took away, maybe answers to the mystery of life and meaning
October 17th, 2017 09:47
germanamericanchurch said:
Death gives what life took away, maybe answers to the mystery of life and meaning
October 17th, 2017 09:47
Mad Universe
germanamericanchurch said:
Like the voice, flow and concept, blessings :)
October 17th, 2017 09:43
germanamericanchurch said:
Like the voice, flow and concept, blessings :)
October 17th, 2017 09:43
Mad Universe
lucaso said:
This is awesome! Im 17 and I feel exactly the same -- synchronised quite well!
I\'m currently working on a poem called \'Archeology of the Chesire Cat\' which explores similar ideas, so glad to read similar stuff. Great writing, hope to read more soon! x
October 2nd, 2017 13:35
lucaso said:
This is awesome! Im 17 and I feel exactly the same -- synchronised quite well!
I\'m currently working on a poem called \'Archeology of the Chesire Cat\' which explores similar ideas, so glad to read similar stuff. Great writing, hope to read more soon! x
October 2nd, 2017 13:35
Mad Universe
FredPeyer said:
Aysha, what a wonderfully written tale! I like how you weave references to for example Alice in Wonderland, the Cheshire cat, looking glass, etc., into your poem in a very subtle way. Some very beautiful choices of words and expressions here!
Great poem!
September 29th, 2017 22:43
FredPeyer said:
Aysha, what a wonderfully written tale! I like how you weave references to for example Alice in Wonderland, the Cheshire cat, looking glass, etc., into your poem in a very subtle way. Some very beautiful choices of words and expressions here!
Great poem!
September 29th, 2017 22:43
Broken
drchito fl said:
I feel the words and feel your pain!
Well written
drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 20:05
drchito fl said:
I feel the words and feel your pain!
Well written
drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 20:05
Broken
b-LAH-que said:
DARK! And vivid. It\'s like like witnessing a horrible transformation into what it was that changed you in the first place. I like it!
September 7th, 2017 23:44
b-LAH-que said:
DARK! And vivid. It\'s like like witnessing a horrible transformation into what it was that changed you in the first place. I like it!
September 7th, 2017 23:44
Painting colors with words
BlueDays said:
Sorry to comment so much but I\'m really enjoying your poems. They\'re big and bold as well as moving and beautiful. Thank you 😊
September 3rd, 2017 15:26
BlueDays said:
Sorry to comment so much but I\'m really enjoying your poems. They\'re big and bold as well as moving and beautiful. Thank you 😊
September 3rd, 2017 15:26
Unattainable Love
BlueDays said:
Raw and really powerful. Was a compelling read
September 3rd, 2017 15:24
BlueDays said:
Raw and really powerful. Was a compelling read
September 3rd, 2017 15:24
Depression
BlueDays said:
Excuse my language but fuck yes!! I can so bloody relate to this.
\'You analytically eliminate me with the press of a button,
Send me to a doctor and take away the knife.\'
Thank you for giving a voice to my thoughts.
September 3rd, 2017 15:17
BlueDays said:
Excuse my language but fuck yes!! I can so bloody relate to this.
\'You analytically eliminate me with the press of a button,
Send me to a doctor and take away the knife.\'
Thank you for giving a voice to my thoughts.
September 3rd, 2017 15:17
Josh
Egyptianqt79 said:
Thank u every one for your thoughtful words ... I appreciate it so much.
September 2nd, 2017 20:10
Egyptianqt79 said:
Thank u every one for your thoughtful words ... I appreciate it so much.
September 2nd, 2017 20:10
Josh
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing your story. Sorry for your loss! I\'ve had a loved one commit suicide too and the void is immeasurable. I hope your heart heals soon...
September 2nd, 2017 01:09
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing your story. Sorry for your loss! I\'ve had a loved one commit suicide too and the void is immeasurable. I hope your heart heals soon...
September 2nd, 2017 01:09
Josh
Heather T said:
What an immeasurable loss. Just as your sorrowful poem points out, sometimes we just don\'t know what someone is going through and there are no signs. Kudos to you for your work!
September 1st, 2017 10:47
Heather T said:
What an immeasurable loss. Just as your sorrowful poem points out, sometimes we just don\'t know what someone is going through and there are no signs. Kudos to you for your work!
September 1st, 2017 10:47
Depression
TN96 said:
\'In your emotionless world,
depression is a sickness
Your biggest fear is youll catch it if you touch me
What if its contagious?\'
I love your ending! Summarises the entire poem perfectly and puts a very real, thought provoking but under looked spin on depression in the modern world.
August 31st, 2017 12:24
TN96 said:
\'In your emotionless world,
depression is a sickness
Your biggest fear is youll catch it if you touch me
What if its contagious?\'
I love your ending! Summarises the entire poem perfectly and puts a very real, thought provoking but under looked spin on depression in the modern world.
August 31st, 2017 12:24
Painting colors with words
malubotelho said:
So beautiful your writing. A lovely reading. Enjoyed very much.
August 29th, 2017 16:48
malubotelho said:
So beautiful your writing. A lovely reading. Enjoyed very much.
August 29th, 2017 16:48
Painting colors with words
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - by coincidence (and being a practising artist) I called one of my poetry collections \'Painting with Words\'. Quite apt.I
August 29th, 2017 00:35
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - by coincidence (and being a practising artist) I called one of my poetry collections \'Painting with Words\'. Quite apt.I
August 29th, 2017 00:35
Cleaning my room today
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It is amazing how many hidden secrets we find in our lives, sometimes they come back to us in the most unexpected circumstances.
August 25th, 2017 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It is amazing how many hidden secrets we find in our lives, sometimes they come back to us in the most unexpected circumstances.
August 25th, 2017 00:35
Cleaning my room today
Faye99 said:
This is a beautiful poem, your a very talented poet.
August 24th, 2017 20:18
Faye99 said:
This is a beautiful poem, your a very talented poet.
August 24th, 2017 20:18
Cleaning my room today
dusk arising said:
OK so at least you\'re thinking about it. Have you put the rubbish out - yes she says i booted him out last week. Enthralling writing.
August 24th, 2017 20:12
dusk arising said:
OK so at least you\'re thinking about it. Have you put the rubbish out - yes she says i booted him out last week. Enthralling writing.
August 24th, 2017 20:12
Cleaning my room today
malubotelho said:
Another awesome strong writing. You are a queen of your style and I love it.
August 24th, 2017 13:26
malubotelho said:
Another awesome strong writing. You are a queen of your style and I love it.
August 24th, 2017 13:26
A Reflection\'s Perception
malubotelho said:
Oh so beautiful. I like the way to express yourself and in this poem hoe you relate about you to yourself. It is almost insane but it is truly the way we are.
August 23rd, 2017 19:43
malubotelho said:
Oh so beautiful. I like the way to express yourself and in this poem hoe you relate about you to yourself. It is almost insane but it is truly the way we are.
August 23rd, 2017 19:43
Between here and there
malubotelho said:
Aysha, you are an awesome writer. I\'m impressed how you express your feelings so deeply. Thanks for sharing.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
malubotelho said:
Aysha, you are an awesome writer. I\'m impressed how you express your feelings so deeply. Thanks for sharing.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
My demons
malubotelho said:
Aysha, it is very strong the way you wrote this. If you feel all that it is because you have no ilusion. It is great because you see things the way they are. You are very close to find your way out. Great writing I must say.
August 22nd, 2017 14:22
malubotelho said:
Aysha, it is very strong the way you wrote this. If you feel all that it is because you have no ilusion. It is great because you see things the way they are. You are very close to find your way out. Great writing I must say.
August 22nd, 2017 14:22
My demons
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Aysha! So many of us build walls, not only against demons, but against all kinds of real or imagined \'enemies\'. But even the great wall of China did not work. Eventually we have to go out to confront and fight.
You are a beautiful writer!
August 21st, 2017 15:53
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Aysha! So many of us build walls, not only against demons, but against all kinds of real or imagined \'enemies\'. But even the great wall of China did not work. Eventually we have to go out to confront and fight.
You are a beautiful writer!
August 21st, 2017 15:53
My demons
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Being locked in a prison that you yourself own... speaks volumes.. Great Selection of words.
August 20th, 2017 23:52
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Being locked in a prison that you yourself own... speaks volumes.. Great Selection of words.
August 20th, 2017 23:52
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