Comments received on poems by docstorm
Mother-in-law.
myself and me said:
She blocked your path, because you took her treasure.
Very nice writing, full of humor.
August 28th, 2017 21:07
myself and me said:
She blocked your path, because you took her treasure.
Very nice writing, full of humor.
August 28th, 2017 21:07
Early morning.
myself and me said:
That spider web is amazing. What a fresh morning.
Beautiful poem.
August 25th, 2017 20:43
myself and me said:
That spider web is amazing. What a fresh morning.
Beautiful poem.
August 25th, 2017 20:43
Early morning.
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful picture, and an excellent poem that goes with it!
August 25th, 2017 15:40
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful picture, and an excellent poem that goes with it!
August 25th, 2017 15:40
You can\'t take it with you.
myself and me said:
\"They don\'t cash cheques in heaven\"
Thank you for letting me know. I will make sure to take cash with me. Is there any label on the door, so that I won\'\'t go through the wrong one.
Thank you for the tips and such a straight forward poem.
August 24th, 2017 19:58
myself and me said:
\"They don\'t cash cheques in heaven\"
Thank you for letting me know. I will make sure to take cash with me. Is there any label on the door, so that I won\'\'t go through the wrong one.
Thank you for the tips and such a straight forward poem.
August 24th, 2017 19:58
You can\'t take it with you.
dusk arising said:
Gotta say that FredPeyer just said it all. Nice work.
August 24th, 2017 19:44
dusk arising said:
Gotta say that FredPeyer just said it all. Nice work.
August 24th, 2017 19:44
You can\'t take it with you.
FredPeyer said:
We arrive with nothing...we leave with nothing. Love your poem, docstorm.
Well written and well rhymed.
August 24th, 2017 18:47
FredPeyer said:
We arrive with nothing...we leave with nothing. Love your poem, docstorm.
Well written and well rhymed.
August 24th, 2017 18:47
You can\'t take it with you.
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! You are right, our account balances are all gonna be the same when we walk through those gates. Wonderful rhymes too. Great job!
August 24th, 2017 17:59
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! You are right, our account balances are all gonna be the same when we walk through those gates. Wonderful rhymes too. Great job!
August 24th, 2017 17:59
A lonely path.
myself and me said:
We all have to walk the lonely path in our time, while keep walking on it, the path will cross with your true love.
Well expressed.
August 23rd, 2017 16:27
myself and me said:
We all have to walk the lonely path in our time, while keep walking on it, the path will cross with your true love.
Well expressed.
August 23rd, 2017 16:27
Friendship.
Fay Slimm. said:
What a compelling tale doc - a good flow to the telling,, great sense of rhyme and that kitten stole into my mind too. Look forward to reading more of your work and welcome to this friendly site.
August 23rd, 2017 15:31
Fay Slimm. said:
What a compelling tale doc - a good flow to the telling,, great sense of rhyme and that kitten stole into my mind too. Look forward to reading more of your work and welcome to this friendly site.
August 23rd, 2017 15:31
Friendship.
burning-embers said:
You are some story teller sir! That was definately a gooddun and i guess theres plenty more in you. Here u have a very receptive audience. Be watching out for more fellah!
August 21st, 2017 22:20
burning-embers said:
You are some story teller sir! That was definately a gooddun and i guess theres plenty more in you. Here u have a very receptive audience. Be watching out for more fellah!
August 21st, 2017 22:20
Friendship.
myself and me said:
\"he gave a final act of pure grace,
and climbed onto my lap, and licked my face.\"
This get my eye wet. A lovely story told in a beautiful way.
August 21st, 2017 18:49
myself and me said:
\"he gave a final act of pure grace,
and climbed onto my lap, and licked my face.\"
This get my eye wet. A lovely story told in a beautiful way.
August 21st, 2017 18:49
Friendship.
Accidental Poet said:
The kitten may have been afraid of you at first, but it\'s clear from your so well written poem that yes, you did win. And the cat left the proof on your chin. ; )
August 21st, 2017 18:02
Accidental Poet said:
The kitten may have been afraid of you at first, but it\'s clear from your so well written poem that yes, you did win. And the cat left the proof on your chin. ; )
August 21st, 2017 18:02
Friendship.
a__pott said:
Amazing how well things flowed and rhymed! Really great!!!
August 21st, 2017 17:45
a__pott said:
Amazing how well things flowed and rhymed! Really great!!!
August 21st, 2017 17:45
