Comments received on poems by Vincent jodi
Beauty like you
FredPeyer said:
Whether or not you have a future in writing is entirely up to you Vincent. As far as I am concerned, this poem is pretty much perfect. Maybe you could improve on the rhyming a bit, but that is only my opinion. Giving you all that because of your comment.
All in all, I really love your poem. It is a beautiful declaration of love!
August 27th, 2017 02:36
FredPeyer said:
Whether or not you have a future in writing is entirely up to you Vincent. As far as I am concerned, this poem is pretty much perfect. Maybe you could improve on the rhyming a bit, but that is only my opinion. Giving you all that because of your comment.
All in all, I really love your poem. It is a beautiful declaration of love!
August 27th, 2017 02:36
Beauty like you
Vincent jodi said:
Thank u for liking my work do u think I have a future in writing and where do u think I can improve I would really like ur opinion and feedback
August 27th, 2017 02:21
Vincent jodi said:
Thank u for liking my work do u think I have a future in writing and where do u think I can improve I would really like ur opinion and feedback
August 27th, 2017 02:21
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myself and me said:
What to say? Want to comfort you but don\'t know how. At least you know the mistake you made, a lesson learned in a hard way. Good luck.
August 26th, 2017 18:48
myself and me said:
What to say? Want to comfort you but don\'t know how. At least you know the mistake you made, a lesson learned in a hard way. Good luck.
August 26th, 2017 18:48
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FredPeyer said:
Very good writing, but once a lady makes up her mind, it is very hard to get her to change. Wish you all the best though!
August 26th, 2017 03:44
FredPeyer said:
Very good writing, but once a lady makes up her mind, it is very hard to get her to change. Wish you all the best though!
August 26th, 2017 03:44
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Vincent, I do hope that you get that \'one last try\'.
August 26th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Vincent, I do hope that you get that \'one last try\'.
August 26th, 2017 00:56
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Vincent jodi said:
Thank u I just published another one called story untold
August 26th, 2017 00:24
Vincent jodi said:
Thank u I just published another one called story untold
August 26th, 2017 00:24
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Christina8 said:
First of all, welcome to MPS! I loved your poem, it was very heartfelt. So sorry your heart is broken. But we try to encourage each other on this site. I hope you continue to write more. Thanks for sharing!
August 25th, 2017 18:00
Christina8 said:
First of all, welcome to MPS! I loved your poem, it was very heartfelt. So sorry your heart is broken. But we try to encourage each other on this site. I hope you continue to write more. Thanks for sharing!
August 25th, 2017 18:00
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dusk arising said:
Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
August 25th, 2017 03:10
dusk arising said:
Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
August 25th, 2017 03:10
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FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Vincent!
I like the way you write, honest and from the heart.
And as far as the site is concerned, we are all writers, we read each others work, comment if we feel like it, and that is about it.
If somebody comments on one of your poems, it is common courtesy to say thank you and to read that other person\'s poetry as well and to comment on it.
That\'s about it. Would love to read more from you!
August 25th, 2017 02:21
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Vincent!
I like the way you write, honest and from the heart.
And as far as the site is concerned, we are all writers, we read each others work, comment if we feel like it, and that is about it.
If somebody comments on one of your poems, it is common courtesy to say thank you and to read that other person\'s poetry as well and to comment on it.
That\'s about it. Would love to read more from you!
August 25th, 2017 02:21
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Vincent jodi said:
Do poets on here usually get recognized for their writings
August 25th, 2017 01:34
Vincent jodi said:
Do poets on here usually get recognized for their writings
August 25th, 2017 01:34
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, may that light shine forever. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, may that light shine forever. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 01:26
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Vincent jodi said:
I have alot of poems I wrote from my heart for my one and only love of my life Jodi denae frost
August 25th, 2017 01:24
Vincent jodi said:
I have alot of poems I wrote from my heart for my one and only love of my life Jodi denae frost
August 25th, 2017 01:24
