Comments received on poems by Louise Knight
Carried
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, you have the will to drive yourself on forever.
October 16th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, you have the will to drive yourself on forever.
October 16th, 2017 00:50
He never could dance
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may that ballet become beautiful.
August 31st, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may that ballet become beautiful.
August 31st, 2017 01:40
My Breakup
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. You are coming out from the sadness in which you found yourself and will go onwards in your life, life is there in front of you and is there to be enjoyed. Welcome to MPS.
August 30th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. You are coming out from the sadness in which you found yourself and will go onwards in your life, life is there in front of you and is there to be enjoyed. Welcome to MPS.
August 30th, 2017 01:23
My Breakup
mocuisle said:
I really enjoyed this , was a great write I can really relate to this I know what your going through .. I hope that your okay
August 29th, 2017 18:23
mocuisle said:
I really enjoyed this , was a great write I can really relate to this I know what your going through .. I hope that your okay
August 29th, 2017 18:23
My Breakup
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE ~ Thanks for your first and very poignant poem ! I\'m in the 25 ~ 35 age group and as I get older \"BREAKUPS\" hit you harder ~ especially when initially things were going well. I do have a GF (29) and things are OK at the moment ! I love the structure and pace of your elegant Poem and each verse increases your resolve to get back into equilibrium (healthy balance !) I can empathise with your experience ! Slipped grip ~ Broken heart ~ Crying ~ BUT THEN ~ Time to think ~ Coaxing ~ Bravery ~ Way to cope ~ Hope ~ Memories and eventually the HEALTHY BALANCE ~ AMEN ! Thinking of you ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 29th, 2017 13:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE ~ Thanks for your first and very poignant poem ! I\'m in the 25 ~ 35 age group and as I get older \"BREAKUPS\" hit you harder ~ especially when initially things were going well. I do have a GF (29) and things are OK at the moment ! I love the structure and pace of your elegant Poem and each verse increases your resolve to get back into equilibrium (healthy balance !) I can empathise with your experience ! Slipped grip ~ Broken heart ~ Crying ~ BUT THEN ~ Time to think ~ Coaxing ~ Bravery ~ Way to cope ~ Hope ~ Memories and eventually the HEALTHY BALANCE ~ AMEN ! Thinking of you ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 29th, 2017 13:53
