Comments received on poems by dark_energy
Casualty of Words
Hopey_xx said:
I really felt the strength and power in this. I love the picture too..Great job!
September 10th, 2017 13:47
Hopey_xx said:
I really felt the strength and power in this. I love the picture too..Great job!
September 10th, 2017 13:47
Casualty of Words
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine portrayal of the damaging power of words. Well done, d-e!
September 10th, 2017 07:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine portrayal of the damaging power of words. Well done, d-e!
September 10th, 2017 07:01
For the love of Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year, the colours it produces are astounding. Welcome to MPS.
September 10th, 2017 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year, the colours it produces are astounding. Welcome to MPS.
September 10th, 2017 00:48
For the love of Autumn
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! First let me congratulate you on its STRUCTURE Five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent Rhyme Pattern ~ abab cdcd etc. This makes it perfect to recite ~ I am a Performance Poet ! The verbal content is perfect ans as good Love Poem should it shares a progressive love story Verse 1. Sets the Autumnal Scene and a blast from the past V2. The symbiosis of two Lovers V3, OMG I love this verse ! I once made love al~fresco and al nudo in the snow ! I caught a cold ~ but she was worth it ! V4. Progressive Love \"sharing warmth chest to chest !\" V5, Satiated by love ~ PERFECTION ! I know you will be an asset to MPS ! The way it works ~ if you enjoy certain Poets comment on their work and they will comment on yours and you can add them to your MPS Friends list OK ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B. Ohhhhh and thanks for your excellent autumnal photograph which resonates in perfect harmony with your elegant Poem ~ B,
September 9th, 2017 14:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! First let me congratulate you on its STRUCTURE Five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent Rhyme Pattern ~ abab cdcd etc. This makes it perfect to recite ~ I am a Performance Poet ! The verbal content is perfect ans as good Love Poem should it shares a progressive love story Verse 1. Sets the Autumnal Scene and a blast from the past V2. The symbiosis of two Lovers V3, OMG I love this verse ! I once made love al~fresco and al nudo in the snow ! I caught a cold ~ but she was worth it ! V4. Progressive Love \"sharing warmth chest to chest !\" V5, Satiated by love ~ PERFECTION ! I know you will be an asset to MPS ! The way it works ~ if you enjoy certain Poets comment on their work and they will comment on yours and you can add them to your MPS Friends list OK ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B. Ohhhhh and thanks for your excellent autumnal photograph which resonates in perfect harmony with your elegant Poem ~ B,
September 9th, 2017 14:18
For the love of Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
So enjoyable this expression of autumnal love - -the chosen image really emphasizes the feel of the piece - - welcome to MPS - -look forward to reading more of your work.
September 9th, 2017 11:06
Fay Slimm. said:
So enjoyable this expression of autumnal love - -the chosen image really emphasizes the feel of the piece - - welcome to MPS - -look forward to reading more of your work.
September 9th, 2017 11:06
For the love of Autumn
Louis Gibbs said:
Enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a Fall Fling, de. Welcome to MPS!
September 9th, 2017 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a Fall Fling, de. Welcome to MPS!
September 9th, 2017 10:49
For the love of Autumn
WL Schuett said:
Very cool poem nice imagery could see and feel autumn love how you brought it home snuggled into a lovers embraced to feel no chill ....fine art
September 9th, 2017 10:30
WL Schuett said:
Very cool poem nice imagery could see and feel autumn love how you brought it home snuggled into a lovers embraced to feel no chill ....fine art
September 9th, 2017 10:30
