Comments received on poems by Broken_kingdom
Thoughts...
lauraoverxo said:
keep on battling! Remember, your thoughts are not a reflection of who you are! X
January 8th, 2020 18:33
lauraoverxo said:
keep on battling! Remember, your thoughts are not a reflection of who you are! X
January 8th, 2020 18:33
Thoughts...
myself and me said:
I can totally get your feelings. The battle within is the hardest. All I could say is be stronger. Eventually, you will overcome it. Well expressed.
January 8th, 2020 18:01
myself and me said:
I can totally get your feelings. The battle within is the hardest. All I could say is be stronger. Eventually, you will overcome it. Well expressed.
January 8th, 2020 18:01
Thoughts...
orchidee said:
Yes, hope you get through OK.
Meanwhile - as if brushing it all aside - \'Oohhh, you\'ll get through it gal!\'. (heehee). But it\'s no joke really, being in the middle of this.
January 8th, 2020 04:29
orchidee said:
Yes, hope you get through OK.
Meanwhile - as if brushing it all aside - \'Oohhh, you\'ll get through it gal!\'. (heehee). But it\'s no joke really, being in the middle of this.
January 8th, 2020 04:29
Thoughts...
dusk arising said:
Distressing to read this. Keep writing, letting all out. For me becoming a poet became theraputic. Do you find that writing does the same for you?
January 8th, 2020 00:09
dusk arising said:
Distressing to read this. Keep writing, letting all out. For me becoming a poet became theraputic. Do you find that writing does the same for you?
January 8th, 2020 00:09
Little Baby
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What a lovely poem about your soon-to-be baby.
Enjoy this gift and life, as well.
Thanks for sharing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:45
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What a lovely poem about your soon-to-be baby.
Enjoy this gift and life, as well.
Thanks for sharing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:45
HIM
Lauraπ» said:
Violet,
A super emotive write that
resonates loud and clear!
You may be broken,
BUT YOU ARE FREE ...
You are free to be YOU!
Donβt look back...
Take a deep breath
and go forward!
All the best!
~Laura~
May 29th, 2018 10:29
Lauraπ» said:
Violet,
A super emotive write that
resonates loud and clear!
You may be broken,
BUT YOU ARE FREE ...
You are free to be YOU!
Donβt look back...
Take a deep breath
and go forward!
All the best!
~Laura~
May 29th, 2018 10:29
ME
SLR said:
Believe it or not, I do know how you feel. I\'ve been there. All I can say is that I knew I couldn\'t keep trying and hurt my family like that anymore. I decided to just live my life and wait for happiness and contentment to find me. It took a while but it did happen. This is a very heart wrenching post for me. But thank you for posting. Keep writing, that helped too.
May 17th, 2018 21:54
SLR said:
Believe it or not, I do know how you feel. I\'ve been there. All I can say is that I knew I couldn\'t keep trying and hurt my family like that anymore. I decided to just live my life and wait for happiness and contentment to find me. It took a while but it did happen. This is a very heart wrenching post for me. But thank you for posting. Keep writing, that helped too.
May 17th, 2018 21:54
JUST ME
Cinderella_Pixie said:
A dark writing depicting a persons struggles. Not many have the courage to put these poems into the light but your work of art is one of a kind amazing.
May 2nd, 2018 16:04
Cinderella_Pixie said:
A dark writing depicting a persons struggles. Not many have the courage to put these poems into the light but your work of art is one of a kind amazing.
May 2nd, 2018 16:04
Sunsets
Christina8 said:
Very well written. More people would miss you than you know. I get the depression and anxiety. You are not alone.
April 27th, 2018 18:19
Christina8 said:
Very well written. More people would miss you than you know. I get the depression and anxiety. You are not alone.
April 27th, 2018 18:19
The Lost Boys : Pain
Mystery1023 said:
Aww this is one of my favorites of the ones you have shown me
April 26th, 2018 09:58
Mystery1023 said:
Aww this is one of my favorites of the ones you have shown me
April 26th, 2018 09:58
Inside Someone Who Isn\'t Me
Caring dove said:
hello , i like this piece of writing . have you ever seen spirited away ... in this there is two parents who eat so much that they actually get turned into pigs lol . great piece of writing , enjoyed
January 19th, 2018 13:38
Caring dove said:
hello , i like this piece of writing . have you ever seen spirited away ... in this there is two parents who eat so much that they actually get turned into pigs lol . great piece of writing , enjoyed
January 19th, 2018 13:38
Not Your Type Of Perfect
dusk arising said:
Beauty is only skin deep -a hackneyed old phrase. But within lies the true beauty.
It will not been see by our fickle eyes which are drawn to fantasise.
But will be felt in anothers heart with whom you spend your life.
November 10th, 2017 17:19
dusk arising said:
Beauty is only skin deep -a hackneyed old phrase. But within lies the true beauty.
It will not been see by our fickle eyes which are drawn to fantasise.
But will be felt in anothers heart with whom you spend your life.
November 10th, 2017 17:19
Not Your Type Of Perfect
skyebellasario said:
This poem really speaks to me as a teenage girl living in this society, thank you for writing it!
November 10th, 2017 15:37
skyebellasario said:
This poem really speaks to me as a teenage girl living in this society, thank you for writing it!
November 10th, 2017 15:37
Not Your Type Of Perfect
FredPeyer said:
Francine, you know why I love your poem? Because it applies to all of us!
What is perfect anyway? Perfect is what we see in others we love.
Well written poem, great subject!
November 10th, 2017 15:15
FredPeyer said:
Francine, you know why I love your poem? Because it applies to all of us!
What is perfect anyway? Perfect is what we see in others we love.
Well written poem, great subject!
November 10th, 2017 15:15
Not Your Type Of Perfect
Christina8 said:
We all don\'t fit on magazine covers. You go, girl! Loved this write!
November 10th, 2017 12:17
Christina8 said:
We all don\'t fit on magazine covers. You go, girl! Loved this write!
November 10th, 2017 12:17
Don\'t Leave Me
chinaaliciarivera said:
Nice poem. I like the rhyming and organization of your poems as well. I hope to see more from you. π β€ π
September 27th, 2017 14:55
chinaaliciarivera said:
Nice poem. I like the rhyming and organization of your poems as well. I hope to see more from you. π β€ π
September 27th, 2017 14:55
Vampyre
chinaaliciarivera said:
I liked it. Very creative and beautiful write. Also, just want to say... \"i love vampire movies\". Always thoroughly entertaining. I mean, i would never want to be bitten by a very vampire; but there is definitely something passionate and seductive about the ideas and concepts presented to you with the whole vampire thing. β€ π π π
September 27th, 2017 14:52
chinaaliciarivera said:
I liked it. Very creative and beautiful write. Also, just want to say... \"i love vampire movies\". Always thoroughly entertaining. I mean, i would never want to be bitten by a very vampire; but there is definitely something passionate and seductive about the ideas and concepts presented to you with the whole vampire thing. β€ π π π
September 27th, 2017 14:52