Comments received on poems by Broken_kingdom



Thoughts...
lauraoverxo said:

keep on battling! Remember, your thoughts are not a reflection of who you are! X

January 8th, 2020 18:33

Thoughts...
myself and me said:

I can totally get your feelings. The battle within is the hardest. All I could say is be stronger. Eventually, you will overcome it. Well expressed.

January 8th, 2020 18:01

Thoughts...
orchidee said:

Yes, hope you get through OK.
Meanwhile - as if brushing it all aside - \'Oohhh, you\'ll get through it gal!\'. (heehee). But it\'s no joke really, being in the middle of this.

January 8th, 2020 04:29

Thoughts...
dusk arising said:

Distressing to read this. Keep writing, letting all out. For me becoming a poet became theraputic. Do you find that writing does the same for you?


January 8th, 2020 00:09

Little Baby
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

What a lovely poem about your soon-to-be baby.

Enjoy this gift and life, as well.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

October 31st, 2018 15:45

Stay
ron parrish aka wordman said:

many reasons for what we do

July 15th, 2018 16:38

HIM
willyweed said:

Good structure and rhyme with a steady flow nice work ww

May 29th, 2018 12:35

HIM
Laura🌻 said:

Violet,
A super emotive write that
resonates loud and clear!

You may be broken,
BUT YOU ARE FREE ...
You are free to be YOU!
Don’t look back...
Take a deep breath
and go forward!

All the best!

~Laura~

May 29th, 2018 10:29

BLEEDING
Yorelzinala said:

Numbing brilliance! Thank you for sharing.

May 23rd, 2018 23:11

Beautiful lie
Resa71 said:

Very sad. A very good write though
Resa :)

May 22nd, 2018 01:35

Beautiful lie
Resa71 said:

Very sad. A very good write though
Resa :)

May 22nd, 2018 01:35

ME
SLR said:

Believe it or not, I do know how you feel. I\'ve been there. All I can say is that I knew I couldn\'t keep trying and hurt my family like that anymore. I decided to just live my life and wait for happiness and contentment to find me. It took a while but it did happen. This is a very heart wrenching post for me. But thank you for posting. Keep writing, that helped too.

May 17th, 2018 21:54

Rain
theseachild said:

good job!!! ilyyy!!!

May 3rd, 2018 10:08

JUST ME
onepauly said:

and death shall have no dominion.

May 2nd, 2018 23:22

JUST ME
Cinderella_Pixie said:

A dark writing depicting a persons struggles. Not many have the courage to put these poems into the light but your work of art is one of a kind amazing.

May 2nd, 2018 16:04

Sunsets
Christina8 said:

Very well written. More people would miss you than you know. I get the depression and anxiety. You are not alone.

April 27th, 2018 18:19

Sunsets
onepauly said:

you\'ll be their.
go meet yourself.
positivly

April 27th, 2018 10:50

The Lost Boys : Pain
Mystery1023 said:

Aww this is one of my favorites of the ones you have shown me

April 26th, 2018 09:58

The Lost Boys : Pain
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is really sweet

April 11th, 2018 13:40

Colors
Lorna said:

Wonderful thoughts about colors! You are so right!

February 25th, 2018 05:32

Inside Someone Who Isn\'t Me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

hello , i like this piece of writing . have you ever seen spirited away ... in this there is two parents who eat so much that they actually get turned into pigs lol . great piece of writing , enjoyed

January 19th, 2018 13:38

Inside Someone Who Isn\'t Me
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 19th, 2018 13:08

Not Your Type Of Perfect
dusk arising said:

Beauty is only skin deep -a hackneyed old phrase. But within lies the true beauty.
It will not been see by our fickle eyes which are drawn to fantasise.
But will be felt in anothers heart with whom you spend your life.

November 10th, 2017 17:19

Not Your Type Of Perfect
skyebellasario said:

This poem really speaks to me as a teenage girl living in this society, thank you for writing it!

November 10th, 2017 15:37

Not Your Type Of Perfect
FredPeyer said:

Francine, you know why I love your poem? Because it applies to all of us!
What is perfect anyway? Perfect is what we see in others we love.
Well written poem, great subject!

November 10th, 2017 15:15

Not Your Type Of Perfect
Christina8 said:

We all don\'t fit on magazine covers. You go, girl! Loved this write!

November 10th, 2017 12:17

Don\'t Leave Me
chinaaliciarivera said:

Nice poem. I like the rhyming and organization of your poems as well. I hope to see more from you. πŸ’• ❀ 😊

September 27th, 2017 14:55

Vampyre
chinaaliciarivera said:

I liked it. Very creative and beautiful write. Also, just want to say... \"i love vampire movies\". Always thoroughly entertaining. I mean, i would never want to be bitten by a very vampire; but there is definitely something passionate and seductive about the ideas and concepts presented to you with the whole vampire thing. ❀ πŸ’• πŸ’— 😊

September 27th, 2017 14:52