Comments received on poems by pldabbs



I Love Trees
Laura🌻 said:

Christopher,

I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem! It made me think of Joni Mitchell’s song, “Big Yellow Taxi”!

A fine write! Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~




October 28th, 2018 18:23

Re-demption
Goldfinch60 said:

Good friends always help us to see ourselves. Good write and so true Christopher.

October 16th, 2018 00:34

Cellphone-Itis
pldabbs said:

Goldfinch you write \"I see it all the time\" which is true. It\'s difficult for me because I see it too, yet I continue to justify myself because \"It is necessary\". Any recourse for me?

October 10th, 2018 09:24

Cellphone-Itis
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true write, I see it all the time.

October 10th, 2018 00:15

Cellphone-Itis
Mil57Man said:

Wonderfully done. We\'re letting computers think for us. Big Mistake.

October 9th, 2018 14:22

Aabb or Abab
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wonderfully penned poetic piece.

Glad you learned such impressive poetic facts. As for me, I prefer classical (rhyming), but I also enjoy free verse.

Thanks for sharing. :)

October 8th, 2018 16:09

Bees Love Haze And A\'s Love B\'s
Quemis said:

Cute.

Simple, silly, successful.



October 4th, 2018 18:52

Just A Carpenter\'s Son
pldabbs said:

This comment is late...Jinxy Jester, orchidee, & Moom- I appreciate your reading and your comments. These are my exact feelings about this master Carpenter. It would do all of us well to have Him take us as understudies where we could be with, walk with, talk to, and learn to perform the same kind of work He is doing. And learn His most salient inborn skill...to love

September 28th, 2018 23:10

Lonely
sidqiehs said:

Well written

February 19th, 2018 03:12

Hayden and Heather
orchidee said:

A fine write Christopher.

February 16th, 2018 14:11

What Makes A Poet Great?
Moom said:

This was really exciting to read. Will be following your writing :)

February 13th, 2018 19:10

Just A Carpenter\'s Son
Moom said:

Your writing was exquisite and my heart just melted when I realised who it was about. Absoloutely loved it from beginning to end x

February 13th, 2018 19:06

Just A Carpenter\'s Son
orchidee said:

A fine write Christopher.

February 13th, 2018 15:28

Just A Carpenter\'s Son
swyndell said:

This is really just an amazing write. The use of expression through two stories and different times is really great. I loved it!

February 13th, 2018 11:31

The Sun and The Son
pldabbs said:

Thanks for your read and comments. Yes, your \'SUN\' could have been replaced with the other, I think. The order of the \'law lines\' worked out better for me the way it is, plus the way it interacts with the next two lines.

February 11th, 2018 16:57

The Sun and The Son
orchidee said:

Good write C.
I wondered why it says \' The SUN of righteousness will arise, with healing in HIS wings...? Though some Scriptures do personalise things, as HE.
Also, I feel the first and second law lines should be reversed. I feel that man who says its the FIRST universal law (gravity).

February 11th, 2018 02:53

The Sun and The Son
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever thinking and write.

February 11th, 2018 01:36

How To Beet Somebody At B-ball (Okie Style)
Tony36 said:

Great write, I agree whole heartily

February 7th, 2018 16:07

Butterflies and Grapes
pldabbs said:

Good comment. I remember someone saying that sometimes we have our eyes open but we don\'t see. I guess it\'s the same as our ears being open but we don\'t hear.

November 7th, 2017 22:29

God Is An Exalted Man
pldabbs said:

Thank you for your comment and your feelings. If you ever feel \'intrigued\' enough to know how and why I feel the way I do, don\'t hesitate to let me know. I\'d love to share more with you.

November 7th, 2017 22:26

What Makes A Poet Great?
Accidental Poet said:

Very impressive c aaron. Written so well and flows even better.

November 7th, 2017 20:05

What Makes A Poet Great?
FredPeyer said:

c aaron, you wrote a great poem, and I concur with your conclusions.

November 7th, 2017 18:56

What Makes A Poet Great?
Michael Edwards said:

Great write and I fully concur - just one omission - he (or she) is able to write from and employ imagination and not rely solely on personal experiences.

November 7th, 2017 17:08

A Lad With A Question
pldabbs said:

I thank you for your reading and comment.

October 27th, 2017 09:25

A Lad With A Question
orchidee said:

A fine write C.

October 27th, 2017 09:01

Height And Creation
orchidee said:

Good write.

October 26th, 2017 01:47

Butterflies and Grapes
Poetic Dan said:

More than one given an angle to one given seen.

Great message!

October 9th, 2017 17:24

No Rhyme Nor Reason
Poetic Dan said:

I can\'t wait to read that again! Just outstanding how you captured part of my brain. The voices went off as I flowed through your words, know that a true inspirational piece of art work for others you\'ve given.


October 9th, 2017 16:38

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