Comments received on poems by HChristian74
Wintertide
Lorna said:
This was a mighty work and great history..... I\'ve read so much about the Donner party and you took us there......
March 19th, 2018 06:23
Lorna said:
This was a mighty work and great history..... I\'ve read so much about the Donner party and you took us there......
March 19th, 2018 06:23
Antebellum Road
Lorna said:
This was enchanting! Love and took us back in time......... I could see the dust on the road as he walked......
March 19th, 2018 05:56
Lorna said:
This was enchanting! Love and took us back in time......... I could see the dust on the road as he walked......
March 19th, 2018 05:56
Antebellum Road
Lauraš» said:
POWERFUL, my friend...
powerful indeed!
Many interesting and
intriguing messages
in this write of yours!
I hope she did let him
have that dance!
I enjoyed the read, HC!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 05:38
Lauraš» said:
POWERFUL, my friend...
powerful indeed!
Many interesting and
intriguing messages
in this write of yours!
I hope she did let him
have that dance!
I enjoyed the read, HC!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 05:38
The Visitor
Fay Slimm. said:
Your success in imaginative writing lies with your talent to twist and turn words into fantastic reality - I loved the scare in this prose-verse Hunter - - - \"He was and he wasn\'t, all in one breath\" is so poetically blesed with surprise. Great read.
March 14th, 2018 06:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Your success in imaginative writing lies with your talent to twist and turn words into fantastic reality - I loved the scare in this prose-verse Hunter - - - \"He was and he wasn\'t, all in one breath\" is so poetically blesed with surprise. Great read.
March 14th, 2018 06:08
To Whom Shall Measure Thy Station?
Lauraš» said:
HC,
The agony and the ecstasy
of the fishermen! Great
imagery throughout your
fine writing! An interesting
and intriguing read, my friend!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 13:42
Lauraš» said:
HC,
The agony and the ecstasy
of the fishermen! Great
imagery throughout your
fine writing! An interesting
and intriguing read, my friend!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 13:42
The Visitor
Lauraš» said:
Wow, HC...
This is one of your best writings Iāve read in a while! You certainly captured yours trulyās attention! A gripping read to say the least! Awesome my dear friend! Be well!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 08:28
Lauraš» said:
Wow, HC...
This is one of your best writings Iāve read in a while! You certainly captured yours trulyās attention! A gripping read to say the least! Awesome my dear friend! Be well!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 08:28
The Visitor
Lorna said:
ooooo so Gothic and scary! Written as though penned in the 19th century as well! Kept me wondering to the end!
March 3rd, 2018 05:14
Lorna said:
ooooo so Gothic and scary! Written as though penned in the 19th century as well! Kept me wondering to the end!
March 3rd, 2018 05:14
Go
Lauraš» said:
HC,
A very powerful and
heart wrenching write!
Very creative with your
pen! Glad to see you
posting again! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
February 2nd, 2018 15:28
Lauraš» said:
HC,
A very powerful and
heart wrenching write!
Very creative with your
pen! Glad to see you
posting again! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
February 2nd, 2018 15:28
The Rower
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Awesome write!
This oldest collegiate athletic competition
is legendary...YALE-HARVARD REGATTA!
Very interesting indeed!
December 1st, 2017 20:50
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Awesome write!
This oldest collegiate athletic competition
is legendary...YALE-HARVARD REGATTA!
Very interesting indeed!
December 1st, 2017 20:50
Wintertide
Lauraš» said:
HC,
So thankful you reposted this awesome write! Even more engaging the second time I read it! I can feel the pain and hardships throughout the piece! The sacrifices that are made in the name of a ābetter futureā! Is it worth the while? That is a question for each of us to evaluate, ponder upon, and make the individual choice of a response related to us! Your thoughts are Beautifully executed through your pen onto āparchment paperā!
Thank you!
~Laura~
November 30th, 2017 01:36
Lauraš» said:
HC,
So thankful you reposted this awesome write! Even more engaging the second time I read it! I can feel the pain and hardships throughout the piece! The sacrifices that are made in the name of a ābetter futureā! Is it worth the while? That is a question for each of us to evaluate, ponder upon, and make the individual choice of a response related to us! Your thoughts are Beautifully executed through your pen onto āparchment paperā!
Thank you!
~Laura~
November 30th, 2017 01:36
On the Morrow
Lauraš» said:
HC,
This is a gem!
Loved reading it!...
...a few times
...as a matter of fact!
It read like a love story!
āTheir love roaming throughout the words of this humble poetās poem ā
āReinvigorated back to life with every spring anewā
An absolute delight!
~Laura~
November 29th, 2017 20:33
Lauraš» said:
HC,
This is a gem!
Loved reading it!...
...a few times
...as a matter of fact!
It read like a love story!
āTheir love roaming throughout the words of this humble poetās poem ā
āReinvigorated back to life with every spring anewā
An absolute delight!
~Laura~
November 29th, 2017 20:33
Walk the Road Before You
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Your writings are amazing!
So fastidiously thought out!
My favorite line...
āscribe upon the ledger
of your mindās eye ā...
Exquisite!
Your write reminds me of...
Go West Young Man...
Ultimately,
that āyoung manā will return
from whence he began!
Enjoyed the read immensely!
All the best,
~Laura~
November 15th, 2017 01:47
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Your writings are amazing!
So fastidiously thought out!
My favorite line...
āscribe upon the ledger
of your mindās eye ā...
Exquisite!
Your write reminds me of...
Go West Young Man...
Ultimately,
that āyoung manā will return
from whence he began!
Enjoyed the read immensely!
All the best,
~Laura~
November 15th, 2017 01:47
Walk the Road Before You
Shadowbox15 said:
Interesting perspective on growing up.
I liked the phrase ābask before your shadowā.
November 14th, 2017 22:16
Shadowbox15 said:
Interesting perspective on growing up.
I liked the phrase ābask before your shadowā.
November 14th, 2017 22:16
Legendary
Lauraš» said:
HC,
It all depends on who
will tell the legend!
A painful and sad write
Iām sure!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2017 18:04
Lauraš» said:
HC,
It all depends on who
will tell the legend!
A painful and sad write
Iām sure!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2017 18:04
Red River to Nowhere
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Another brilliant writing!
Your descriptive words
glide us through the doom
and gloom of Mother Natureās wicked deeds! Thank the Lord, they also
guide us into the bright light of a brand new day!
Where there is life,
thereās always hope!
~Laura~
November 7th, 2017 22:39
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Another brilliant writing!
Your descriptive words
glide us through the doom
and gloom of Mother Natureās wicked deeds! Thank the Lord, they also
guide us into the bright light of a brand new day!
Where there is life,
thereās always hope!
~Laura~
November 7th, 2017 22:39
Everyday Mission of Attrition
HChristian74 said:
Thank you my dear. And yes, I will admit, this write is an amalgamation of two persons who I have regrettably had to deal with time and again. Once again, thank you for reading and giving feedback.
HC
November 3rd, 2017 09:56
HChristian74 said:
Thank you my dear. And yes, I will admit, this write is an amalgamation of two persons who I have regrettably had to deal with time and again. Once again, thank you for reading and giving feedback.
HC
November 3rd, 2017 09:56
Everyday Mission of Attrition
Lauraš» said:
HC,
All I can say to your
detailed write...EVERY DAY
MISSION OF ATTRITION...
is AMEN!
Well done!
~Laura~
November 2nd, 2017 22:50
Lauraš» said:
HC,
All I can say to your
detailed write...EVERY DAY
MISSION OF ATTRITION...
is AMEN!
Well done!
~Laura~
November 2nd, 2017 22:50
A Forlorn Wintertide Beholden
Lauraš» said:
Is this a Halloween gift?
Intriguing...
Enticing...
Superb!!
Well done HC
Noticed the green heart...
in the illustration š
Thereās hope after all!
October 31st, 2017 20:21
Lauraš» said:
Is this a Halloween gift?
Intriguing...
Enticing...
Superb!!
Well done HC
Noticed the green heart...
in the illustration š
Thereās hope after all!
October 31st, 2017 20:21
On The Fourth Measure
Lauraš» said:
Enjoyed the write. Worthy of your time and effort! Liked the surprise at the end. Is this historical fiction or a true event in history?
October 30th, 2017 01:31
Lauraš» said:
Enjoyed the write. Worthy of your time and effort! Liked the surprise at the end. Is this historical fiction or a true event in history?
October 30th, 2017 01:31
Hauntings at Willowbrook
Lauraš» said:
It took a lot of strength and courage for you to write this piece! A necessary reminder to all of us to NEVER forget the atrocities committed against those innocent souls at Willowbrook!
The pain, the suffering, the torture...the list doesnāt end!!
That snake pit should have NEVER existed!
The visions you create with the words you masterfully pen are haunting and extremely painful...
BUT NECESSARY!!
October 28th, 2017 19:12
Lauraš» said:
It took a lot of strength and courage for you to write this piece! A necessary reminder to all of us to NEVER forget the atrocities committed against those innocent souls at Willowbrook!
The pain, the suffering, the torture...the list doesnāt end!!
That snake pit should have NEVER existed!
The visions you create with the words you masterfully pen are haunting and extremely painful...
BUT NECESSARY!!
October 28th, 2017 19:12
Hauntings at Willowbrook
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write about that wretched place. I saw a documentary on it and you have certainly done it justice! So sad. There should have been charges brought about. Thanks for sharing this well done piece!
October 28th, 2017 14:45
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write about that wretched place. I saw a documentary on it and you have certainly done it justice! So sad. There should have been charges brought about. Thanks for sharing this well done piece!
October 28th, 2017 14:45
Rings
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Were you going for the brass ring with this poem? Very interesting poem about rings! How about the Golden Ring by John Snyder. If youāve never read, give it a go. Great story with a great message!
~Laura~
October 27th, 2017 02:04
Lauraš» said:
HC,
Were you going for the brass ring with this poem? Very interesting poem about rings! How about the Golden Ring by John Snyder. If youāve never read, give it a go. Great story with a great message!
~Laura~
October 27th, 2017 02:04
Comes a Caller
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad write and very true the body dies but the Spirit lives forever.
October 27th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad write and very true the body dies but the Spirit lives forever.
October 27th, 2017 00:52
Comes a Caller
WL Schuett said:
Interesting read very moving , sad but well done....š
October 26th, 2017 07:41
WL Schuett said:
Interesting read very moving , sad but well done....š
October 26th, 2017 07:41
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