Comments received on poems by HChristian74



Comes a Caller
LaurašŸŒ» said:

It hurts to be alone.
This is so sad. Our only hope is that he lived a good life!
Truth be told as you said,
ā€œDeath comes when comes
Death comes to us allā€!
~Laura~

October 26th, 2017 05:31

Conscience
josh_hayeslip said:

Chills down my back, ā€œI am the snow on ice-capped mountainsā€ very well written, simple yet in awe of the depth of the words and the underlying meaning on the page!

October 25th, 2017 05:40

Somewhere in the Borderlands
josh_hayeslip said:

This is very capturing, even with the length I was drawn in, amazing piece!

October 25th, 2017 05:37

Somewhere in the Borderlands
LaurašŸŒ» said:

A History that no one should ever forget. Awesome write to remind us of the atrocities committed in the name of freedom!

October 25th, 2017 04:42

Conscience
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Wow...thatā€™s some list!
You are everything I see.
You havenā€™t missed much!
Nice pic to accompany your
I list poem!

October 24th, 2017 00:52

Crestfallen Forlorn Maker Man
LaurašŸŒ» said:

This is an unbelievable dark and haunting piece of writing. The carnage...the pain...the abuse...the wretched souls...
The language reminds me of some of Dante Alighieriā€™s writings. The illustration is right out of his Inferno or Purgatorio! Heā€™s one of my favorite writers.
Who is your inspiration...your muse?
Looking forward to more of your writings!



October 23rd, 2017 08:35

Crestfallen Forlorn Maker Man
Michael Edwards said:

Some read with such supreme use of the language but demands a reread - will come back to it again later.

October 23rd, 2017 00:31

Remnants of Yesteryear\'s Bounty
LaurašŸŒ» said:

This was a fantastic read! Rich with history! This brilliant write would be a great screenplay for a movie and/or a tv series!
Kudos to you!

~Laura~

October 22nd, 2017 15:15

Forgetting to Live
Louis Gibbs said:

This beautiful write speaks to all of us who have experienced this sad condition in a loved one. Well done, Hunter!

October 20th, 2017 09:23

Forgetting to Live
Michael Edwards said:

Many of us have been touched by this - with me it was my father. So well expressed.

October 20th, 2017 01:35

Forgetting to Live
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, this is happening to my wife at the moment.

October 20th, 2017 01:31

Forgetting to Live
LaurašŸŒ» said:

This is so relatable! My uncle, a brilliant man...a civil engineer and architect to be exact...was reduced to the condition youā€™ve described in your poem.
ā€œFrom my mind, my memories have been shorn...ā€ says it all for my uncle...Alzheimerā€™s took him over!!

October 20th, 2017 01:04

Far Afield
Christina8 said:

Good poem. I feel you with the melancholy! Your poem was well said. Different format but I liked it!

October 18th, 2017 08:21

Red Moon Aloft
Heather T said:

This is a buffet of imagery. The repetitions are haunting, nearly musical. HC, is this piece grounded in any actual history?

October 16th, 2017 06:16

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