Comments received on poems by Orialis M. Pena
The Art of \"Getting Better\"
Goldfinch60 said:
Life has its ups and downs. If we didn\'t have the downs we might not recognise the betters.
October 4th, 2018 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Life has its ups and downs. If we didn\'t have the downs we might not recognise the betters.
October 4th, 2018 00:14
November the 8th of 2017
Brycycle said:
I don\'t often like love poems, but I quite liked this one :D
November 8th, 2017 17:28
Brycycle said:
I don\'t often like love poems, but I quite liked this one :D
November 8th, 2017 17:28
November the 8th of 2017
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, I concur with Hood. That last line lifts the whole poem. But contrary to Hood, I was taken with the whole poem, primarily because it conveys such a feeling of longing and unrequited love.
Well done!
November 8th, 2017 16:47
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, I concur with Hood. That last line lifts the whole poem. But contrary to Hood, I was taken with the whole poem, primarily because it conveys such a feeling of longing and unrequited love.
Well done!
November 8th, 2017 16:47
I Wish...
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, this is a very nicely penned poem about \'wishful thinking\'. Unfortunately, reality is sometimes killing our dreams. Would it maybe be better to change the dreams?
November 6th, 2017 15:03
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, this is a very nicely penned poem about \'wishful thinking\'. Unfortunately, reality is sometimes killing our dreams. Would it maybe be better to change the dreams?
November 6th, 2017 15:03
I Want To Become A Star
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, this is a very well written, beautiful love poem. Very imaginative with great metaphors.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 27th, 2017 22:34
FredPeyer said:
Orialis, this is a very well written, beautiful love poem. Very imaginative with great metaphors.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 27th, 2017 22:34
