Comments received on poems by Moom



Parent contest
Thekkinkkattil said:

A true depiction of parenting.Don\'t worry even this will pass away.As they grow up you miss all the fun

October 10th, 2022 09:23

Dyspraxia
Neville said:

you got this off to a T... funny but not to be laughed at... well I Know what I mean... Happy New Year.. N

December 30th, 2018 12:41

Stamps
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

yes, some of mine are written in like ten minutes too tho some have taken maybe an hour or half an hour mainly because sometimes i write notes before hand and i think about them a little more and hence the time it takes is longer lol plus the fact some of mine can be very long, i \'m not sure it matters how long it takes

May 1st, 2018 16:38

Soulstruck
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i enjoyed reading this , be nice if we were to find someone who really suited us and who we connected to so much .. i guess we are lucky if we find that person ..

May 1st, 2018 16:36

Thanks mate
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i can read the pain and disapointment in this , a well written piece of writing .. trust let down , not nice

May 1st, 2018 16:28

L.O.V.E
Carmine Branco said:

Lovely.

March 2nd, 2018 19:24

Soulstruck
Lorna said:

Don\'t let them ever take the fun away.............

February 24th, 2018 05:08

February 13th
Moom said:

Nowhere.I tried but I couldn\'t fly in the end

February 14th, 2018 14:45

February 13th
kevin browne said:

awesome, but where did you fly too?

February 14th, 2018 14:13

Stamps
dusk arising said:

I know what you mean. Most of mine are little ditties i compose on the spot during convo\'s on skype or texting or emails... just throw aways, fun though.
Stuff i publish on here can be either 2 minute wonders (as was the heartfelt one today) or ones that have been hanging around - stalled - so to speak.
Whichever they are, this site is a godsend for our expression.

February 13th, 2018 17:06

Tap tap tap motherfucker
Jooles said:

Wow I really liked this ..would love to know what you based it on?

February 2nd, 2018 19:53

A thing I guess...
lea cobain . said:

this is amazing, honestly.

January 31st, 2018 13:46

The ballerina
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

lovely :-)

January 29th, 2018 07:46

Hey ho
dusk arising said:

I can feel your pain and feel you not wanting to feel your pain too. You express this dilemma beautifully. Anyone having experienced something similar will understand straight away.
Good emotive writing. Please have a peep at some of my love poems on here.

January 28th, 2018 18:09

A round
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

however a circle has no points, no sharp bits, i think thats why the round moon looks so appealing in the sky, and why we love the sun , there is nothing sharp and angry looking about a circle

January 26th, 2018 05:21

A round
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i think i agree with you ... love is circular , for sure :-) i find the shape of a circle to be kind of peaceful and content looking , a square for me.. is a bit trapping and yeah , i see what you are saying .. i like this poem , very much .. you are totally right , emotions have points and are angular..

January 26th, 2018 05:19

Trust
Hoopie said:

Very good

January 25th, 2018 20:38

Anticipation
Lorna said:

Nice sentiments Moom

January 22nd, 2018 05:05

Lessons
Lorna said:

Great image!

January 14th, 2018 06:37

An answer doesn\'t help.
FredPeyer said:

Well written and food for thought. Sometimes there are no good answers and all we can do is move on...

January 3rd, 2018 20:19

The ballerina
FineB said:

Thank you Moom.

Beautiful and awesome poem.

Keep writing
FineB

December 14th, 2017 16:21

Tap tap tap
b-LAH-que said:

Well expressed, and lovely construct. I like it a lot. Nice profile image too ;)

November 23rd, 2017 16:21

Waiting
mariellewrites said:

pretty write

November 19th, 2017 19:09

Waiting
Lawrence the writer said:

Soo much truth in it......

November 19th, 2017 10:40