Comments received on poems by Songbird
My Cat
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
such an intimate yet fun read,
you showcase wonderful skill
thank you, dear poet
\'2am booger boos and a five chorus choir
but if I said I’d change a thing you could call me a liar
because you know how I feel just by meeting my eyes
life gets too scary you let me hold you tight
guard me in the darkness of night\'
October 24th, 2022 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
such an intimate yet fun read,
you showcase wonderful skill
thank you, dear poet
\'2am booger boos and a five chorus choir
but if I said I’d change a thing you could call me a liar
because you know how I feel just by meeting my eyes
life gets too scary you let me hold you tight
guard me in the darkness of night\'
October 24th, 2022 03:49
My Cat
orchidee said:
Good write S. We have two cats, brother and sister born on same day. They don\'t relate to each other that much. The tom cat goes out more. Queen (lady) cat stays indoors more.
October 24th, 2022 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write S. We have two cats, brother and sister born on same day. They don\'t relate to each other that much. The tom cat goes out more. Queen (lady) cat stays indoors more.
October 24th, 2022 02:09
My Cat
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
I’m more of a dog person but I know of the companionship those little friends bring.
October 23rd, 2022 23:44
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
I’m more of a dog person but I know of the companionship those little friends bring.
October 23rd, 2022 23:44
Message in a bottle
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed this read
Painfully beautiful
July 18th, 2020 07:26
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed this read
Painfully beautiful
July 18th, 2020 07:26
Message in a bottle
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so hard sometimes. Good emotive write.
Andy
July 18th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so hard sometimes. Good emotive write.
Andy
July 18th, 2020 01:44
Ocean Secrets
DianeKey6 said:
this is a sad read but i love to submerge myself in water to clear the day from from my mind. there is a cleansing appeal to these words as much as the misery as you fight the dark demons inside. I am speechless at these powerful words you write. Diane
July 17th, 2020 05:36
DianeKey6 said:
this is a sad read but i love to submerge myself in water to clear the day from from my mind. there is a cleansing appeal to these words as much as the misery as you fight the dark demons inside. I am speechless at these powerful words you write. Diane
July 17th, 2020 05:36
Have You Ever
dusk arising said:
There will be an answer, but only after we pass. Meantime enjoy the dance. Dance in harmony with all and everything. Love conquers, love teaches. Love life itself.
October 13th, 2018 07:51
dusk arising said:
There will be an answer, but only after we pass. Meantime enjoy the dance. Dance in harmony with all and everything. Love conquers, love teaches. Love life itself.
October 13th, 2018 07:51
The Enchanted Forest
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I too would be quite happy living there.
October 12th, 2018 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I too would be quite happy living there.
October 12th, 2018 00:30
The Enchanted Forest
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SONGBIRD ~ Love your poem ! In my experience all forests are enchanted @ night. Most people them @ night because they are spooky. I love the nocturnal sounds ~ animals & bats & owls ~ so different from the day. I\'ve added you as a FRIEND ~ please check our last two POEMS they are about BIRDS. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Thanks for adding US as FRIENDS ~ B & A !
October 11th, 2018 16:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SONGBIRD ~ Love your poem ! In my experience all forests are enchanted @ night. Most people them @ night because they are spooky. I love the nocturnal sounds ~ animals & bats & owls ~ so different from the day. I\'ve added you as a FRIEND ~ please check our last two POEMS they are about BIRDS. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Thanks for adding US as FRIENDS ~ B & A !
October 11th, 2018 16:10
The Enchanted Forest
dusk arising said:
Love the romance of this. I should want to dress-up as an elf and live there quite happily.
October 11th, 2018 15:14
dusk arising said:
Love the romance of this. I should want to dress-up as an elf and live there quite happily.
October 11th, 2018 15:14
Otherworldly
pldabbs said:
Greetings Spitfire! I just read your poem and wondered if (in our own way) we weren\'t trying to express the same thing only from two different sources each drawing upon his/her own experiences... here, compare: https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-91545
September 28th, 2018 14:07
pldabbs said:
Greetings Spitfire! I just read your poem and wondered if (in our own way) we weren\'t trying to express the same thing only from two different sources each drawing upon his/her own experiences... here, compare: https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-91545
September 28th, 2018 14:07
Nature’s Grief
Netashi said:
Detailed and yet still beautiful, and also a great poem. Keep up the great work.
-Theta
September 27th, 2018 12:48
Netashi said:
Detailed and yet still beautiful, and also a great poem. Keep up the great work.
-Theta
September 27th, 2018 12:48
Eyes
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Wow this is literally perfection. Amazing!
-MoU
September 24th, 2018 00:53
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Wow this is literally perfection. Amazing!
-MoU
September 24th, 2018 00:53
Puppets
FineB said:
Hello Songbird,
An incredible poem and very vivid.
Great stuff!
Keep writing
FineB
September 22nd, 2018 10:58
FineB said:
Hello Songbird,
An incredible poem and very vivid.
Great stuff!
Keep writing
FineB
September 22nd, 2018 10:58
Two Sided
Rainbow said:
Lovely gentle poem you have created. It flows very well and is so nice to read.
July 20th, 2018 08:55
Rainbow said:
Lovely gentle poem you have created. It flows very well and is so nice to read.
July 20th, 2018 08:55
Two Sided
Christina8 said:
Very good rhymes, this is a relatable poem. Wonderful. You are true to yourself and it is apparent.
April 27th, 2018 18:27
Christina8 said:
Very good rhymes, this is a relatable poem. Wonderful. You are true to yourself and it is apparent.
April 27th, 2018 18:27
Two Sided
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must all be true to ourselves and if others have problems seeing you for what you are it is their problem, not yours.
April 27th, 2018 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must all be true to ourselves and if others have problems seeing you for what you are it is their problem, not yours.
April 27th, 2018 02:42
Sticks and Stones
dusk arising said:
Love this piece and great choice of picture. Today i published a heartfelt piece about painful words too, please take a look.
January 29th, 2018 13:43
dusk arising said:
Love this piece and great choice of picture. Today i published a heartfelt piece about painful words too, please take a look.
January 29th, 2018 13:43
I\'m Sorry
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Oh this is very sad and distressing. I could relate to your words, thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2018 14:46
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Oh this is very sad and distressing. I could relate to your words, thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2018 14:46
Battle Cry
L. Wolfe said:
I can feel the power in your words as I read this.
December 24th, 2017 00:45
L. Wolfe said:
I can feel the power in your words as I read this.
December 24th, 2017 00:45
A Painful Reflection
Michael Edwards said:
Poetry must connect with the reader - what script are you using?
December 11th, 2017 01:19
Michael Edwards said:
Poetry must connect with the reader - what script are you using?
December 11th, 2017 01:19
The Queen and Her Court
FineB said:
Thank you Spitfire.
What a beautiful poem.
It must be difficult being royalty having to bear yourself with great dignity before your subjects at all times even when you are hurting.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 14:53
FineB said:
Thank you Spitfire.
What a beautiful poem.
It must be difficult being royalty having to bear yourself with great dignity before your subjects at all times even when you are hurting.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 14:53
The Journey of a Song
FineB said:
Thanks Songbird.
A great poem and a vivid perspective on the power of a song.
Keep writing
FineB
December 2nd, 2017 16:53
FineB said:
Thanks Songbird.
A great poem and a vivid perspective on the power of a song.
Keep writing
FineB
December 2nd, 2017 16:53
The Journey of a Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music starts where words end.
December 2nd, 2017 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music starts where words end.
December 2nd, 2017 01:49
See Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are many who are too shy to show their wonder but there are many ways to show it and as tony has said poetry is a great way to show it. Welcome to MPS.
December 1st, 2017 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are many who are too shy to show their wonder but there are many ways to show it and as tony has said poetry is a great way to show it. Welcome to MPS.
December 1st, 2017 02:10
See Me
Tony36 said:
Great write. I have always been shy myself, and have found poetry to be a great way to say what I can not speak
November 30th, 2017 18:57
Tony36 said:
Great write. I have always been shy myself, and have found poetry to be a great way to say what I can not speak
November 30th, 2017 18:57
