Comments received on poems by elaine.901
I am
Michael Edwards said:
I can do no more than endorse Brian\'s comments - a fine write indeed.
December 13th, 2017 12:45
Michael Edwards said:
I can do no more than endorse Brian\'s comments - a fine write indeed.
December 13th, 2017 12:45
I am
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you ELAINE for another very elegant POEM ~ Each line commencing with the same word \"I\" and each verse ending with a repletion (very important in classical poetry) which is also the opening line of the Poem ! \"I am a person with hopes ~ dreams ~ fears ~ and questions\" This oft repeated line exemplifies the theme of the Poem. Your Poem is \"free verse\" but has plenty of Rhythm ! I love this poem and can empathise ~ because I share many of your Hopes ~ Dreams ~ Fears and Questions ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 13th, 2017 11:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you ELAINE for another very elegant POEM ~ Each line commencing with the same word \"I\" and each verse ending with a repletion (very important in classical poetry) which is also the opening line of the Poem ! \"I am a person with hopes ~ dreams ~ fears ~ and questions\" This oft repeated line exemplifies the theme of the Poem. Your Poem is \"free verse\" but has plenty of Rhythm ! I love this poem and can empathise ~ because I share many of your Hopes ~ Dreams ~ Fears and Questions ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 13th, 2017 11:28
Hurdles
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ELAINE ~ Thanks for your first poem ! I am a classical poet (please check my poems) It is rare for a new member to post something as complex as a SESTINA as their first poem ~ but I am pleased you did ! Your six chosen repeated end words are: Nail ~ Right ~ Cool ~ Pen (Pin in stanza 2 and Penned in stanza 5) Joint ~ Run ! These words have a different context each time they are used which is the subtle essence of the SESTINA ! These words do give a clue to the subject and content of your excellent poem ! To me it speaks of a person hooked on MARAJUANA but refusing to acknowledge it ! Thanks for sharing and by doing so raising the quality of MPS Poetry ~ More Please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 11th, 2017 12:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ELAINE ~ Thanks for your first poem ! I am a classical poet (please check my poems) It is rare for a new member to post something as complex as a SESTINA as their first poem ~ but I am pleased you did ! Your six chosen repeated end words are: Nail ~ Right ~ Cool ~ Pen (Pin in stanza 2 and Penned in stanza 5) Joint ~ Run ! These words have a different context each time they are used which is the subtle essence of the SESTINA ! These words do give a clue to the subject and content of your excellent poem ! To me it speaks of a person hooked on MARAJUANA but refusing to acknowledge it ! Thanks for sharing and by doing so raising the quality of MPS Poetry ~ More Please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 11th, 2017 12:55
