Comments received on poems by Little_Write
Pain or Feeling
Caring dove said:
hello little write , i love this ! :-) i can imagine loving someone who you feel does not love you , that can be painful.. this was well expressed , sometimes we can get confused with how we are feeling and i love how you are questioning that feeling in your stomach... you know butterflies would never make you fall to the floor, they would make you fly lol great piece of writing
January 30th, 2018 01:10
Caring dove said:
hello little write , i love this ! :-) i can imagine loving someone who you feel does not love you , that can be painful.. this was well expressed , sometimes we can get confused with how we are feeling and i love how you are questioning that feeling in your stomach... you know butterflies would never make you fall to the floor, they would make you fly lol great piece of writing
January 30th, 2018 01:10
Silence
Caring dove said:
oh , very nice ! sometimes noise and distractions can be overwhelming and not needed ..you just want silence and peace
January 24th, 2018 05:00
Caring dove said:
oh , very nice ! sometimes noise and distractions can be overwhelming and not needed ..you just want silence and peace
January 24th, 2018 05:00
Disappointed
Adam Shirley said:
I can tell this poem means very dear to you. I hope you are getting better, well-written poem.
January 24th, 2018 00:36
Adam Shirley said:
I can tell this poem means very dear to you. I hope you are getting better, well-written poem.
January 24th, 2018 00:36
Broken
Jacob Bennett said:
You write with such vividness, amazing job keep it up.
December 19th, 2017 22:39
Jacob Bennett said:
You write with such vividness, amazing job keep it up.
December 19th, 2017 22:39
Broken
clair jane said:
This is so deep. It\'s like you put my feelings down into your poem. I love it.
December 19th, 2017 21:49
clair jane said:
This is so deep. It\'s like you put my feelings down into your poem. I love it.
December 19th, 2017 21:49
Silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. That silence in our lives is so important.
Welcome to MPS.
December 19th, 2017 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. That silence in our lives is so important.
Welcome to MPS.
December 19th, 2017 01:35
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