Comments received on poems by Little_Write
Therapy
L. B. Mek said:
\'are you ok?\'
(maybe your poetry
can become your source
of self therapy
until you\'re ready
to seek what help, you think
you may, need)
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'are you ok?\'
(maybe your poetry
can become your source
of self therapy
until you\'re ready
to seek what help, you think
you may, need)
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 05:59
Hi Dad
Anna Colette said:
Sometimes it\'s best to just get things out. Even if you write this letter and burn it or store it away, you never have to show him. It helps with closure and moving on.
January 14th, 2022 22:41
Anna Colette said:
Sometimes it\'s best to just get things out. Even if you write this letter and burn it or store it away, you never have to show him. It helps with closure and moving on.
January 14th, 2022 22:41
Apologize
L. B. Mek said:
a unique perspective you\'ve chosen to share so bravely dear poet, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply..
personally dear poet
I, choose to apologise freely, not because I require an apology in return,
but because:
I never want to be that person who knows they can solve all with an apology, but fear
how much of themselves they\'ll surrender in acknowledging the mere fact
that they too: are fallible and prone to making mistakes..
for I know!
my legacy shall never be my mistakes, but the lessons they have taught me
and the better person I strive to cultivate of myself,
for ultimately: that is our purpose in life..
March 19th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
a unique perspective you\'ve chosen to share so bravely dear poet, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply..
personally dear poet
I, choose to apologise freely, not because I require an apology in return,
but because:
I never want to be that person who knows they can solve all with an apology, but fear
how much of themselves they\'ll surrender in acknowledging the mere fact
that they too: are fallible and prone to making mistakes..
for I know!
my legacy shall never be my mistakes, but the lessons they have taught me
and the better person I strive to cultivate of myself,
for ultimately: that is our purpose in life..
March 19th, 2021 06:14
Depression made me
peto said:
Hopefully you keep writing it out
This is well put together and lets the reader experience those feelings.
The step dad line intrigued me
Keep em coming
June 8th, 2020 05:12
peto said:
Hopefully you keep writing it out
This is well put together and lets the reader experience those feelings.
The step dad line intrigued me
Keep em coming
June 8th, 2020 05:12
Depression made me
AwHec8 said:
Damn only those tortured souls can feel the pain because they have lived it. It would take a ton of empathy to understand if you haven\'t lived it. Just Saying
June 7th, 2020 08:10
AwHec8 said:
Damn only those tortured souls can feel the pain because they have lived it. It would take a ton of empathy to understand if you haven\'t lived it. Just Saying
June 7th, 2020 08:10
Depression made me
dusk arising said:
I think you\'ve got to have lived it and come out of it to see it for what it is. But we are all different and so are our individual depressions.
I think yours is one of the most insightful pieces i have seen about depression.
June 7th, 2020 04:43
dusk arising said:
I think you\'ve got to have lived it and come out of it to see it for what it is. But we are all different and so are our individual depressions.
I think yours is one of the most insightful pieces i have seen about depression.
June 7th, 2020 04:43
Get Help
Clara said:
Oh there\'s quite a lot of emotion hidden in your words I think. It tells of such a story that\'s probably a lot deeper than first glance.
I say it\'s natural to feel how you feel... But ask yourself whether you would feel regret.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:31
Clara said:
Oh there\'s quite a lot of emotion hidden in your words I think. It tells of such a story that\'s probably a lot deeper than first glance.
I say it\'s natural to feel how you feel... But ask yourself whether you would feel regret.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:31
Thank you, To those who didn\'t....
Michael Edwards said:
Thank yourself also for having the strength of character to rise above and become strong.
April 18th, 2018 00:28
Michael Edwards said:
Thank yourself also for having the strength of character to rise above and become strong.
April 18th, 2018 00:28
Thank you, To those who didn\'t....
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and now you have found people that care,that will listen,that accept you for who you are
April 17th, 2018 22:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and now you have found people that care,that will listen,that accept you for who you are
April 17th, 2018 22:19
The Truth and The Lie
Lorna said:
Little...... I find this very true - it\'s hard to find people you can trust enough to be yourself with....... and also don\'t want to put too much on others anyway since everyone has problems.....
February 25th, 2018 04:58
Lorna said:
Little...... I find this very true - it\'s hard to find people you can trust enough to be yourself with....... and also don\'t want to put too much on others anyway since everyone has problems.....
February 25th, 2018 04:58
The Truth and The Lie
FredPeyer said:
When a person smiles, look into his/her eyes and you will know if the smile is real or fake!
Very nicely written poem LW!
February 25th, 2018 04:11
FredPeyer said:
When a person smiles, look into his/her eyes and you will know if the smile is real or fake!
Very nicely written poem LW!
February 25th, 2018 04:11
The Truth and The Lie
dusk arising said:
I\'d be lieing if i said...... but the truth is.... no, you don\'t want to hear it.. so!
February 25th, 2018 02:53
dusk arising said:
I\'d be lieing if i said...... but the truth is.... no, you don\'t want to hear it.. so!
February 25th, 2018 02:53
The Truth and The Lie
b-LAH-que said:
Very relatable. Although, I\'d say that smiling and seeming happy when feeling the opposite is only easy in that it elicits an easier-to-deal-with response from others who may not relate to our true feelings. Aside from that, it\'s exhausting, even soul crushing.
February 25th, 2018 01:03
b-LAH-que said:
Very relatable. Although, I\'d say that smiling and seeming happy when feeling the opposite is only easy in that it elicits an easier-to-deal-with response from others who may not relate to our true feelings. Aside from that, it\'s exhausting, even soul crushing.
February 25th, 2018 01:03
Lonely is the worst feeling to feel
Lorna said:
I\'ve always felt this way - it can be better and it can be worse but it\'s always there - wonder why! Alone is much better than this feeling - I agree......
February 12th, 2018 05:16
Lorna said:
I\'ve always felt this way - it can be better and it can be worse but it\'s always there - wonder why! Alone is much better than this feeling - I agree......
February 12th, 2018 05:16
Your Voice
FredPeyer said:
LW, we all need to hear that voice once in a while. Life is tough to handle on our own, and even if the voice is not \'real\' in a proper sense, it can be real for you. Believe in it and keep on pushing! And keep on writing as well, you are good!
February 6th, 2018 03:30
FredPeyer said:
LW, we all need to hear that voice once in a while. Life is tough to handle on our own, and even if the voice is not \'real\' in a proper sense, it can be real for you. Believe in it and keep on pushing! And keep on writing as well, you are good!
February 6th, 2018 03:30
Nightlights
Lorna said:
I loved how you pulled us farther and farther in..............
February 2nd, 2018 06:33
Lorna said:
I loved how you pulled us farther and farther in..............
February 2nd, 2018 06:33
Who, When, Where, Why, and How
TrystanBehm said:
I wonder this all the time. Not only the hurt that I have experienced but the hurt I have caused - and how it all links to who I am today and why I am who I am. Sometimes I get this feeling that I am this empty being, with just a set of eyes, experiencing this world and I have to take a step back and think about, exactly what you wrote.
Great write.
January 31st, 2018 08:30
TrystanBehm said:
I wonder this all the time. Not only the hurt that I have experienced but the hurt I have caused - and how it all links to who I am today and why I am who I am. Sometimes I get this feeling that I am this empty being, with just a set of eyes, experiencing this world and I have to take a step back and think about, exactly what you wrote.
Great write.
January 31st, 2018 08:30
Who, When, Where, Why, and How
Lorna said:
This is very clear and I think well written and thoughtful. Enjoyed reading it......
January 31st, 2018 06:55
Lorna said:
This is very clear and I think well written and thoughtful. Enjoyed reading it......
January 31st, 2018 06:55
Pain or Feeling
dusk arising said:
Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We\'ve all done it, fallen for our best friends lover or similar. A very difficult situation which, if you act upon your feelings, can get very complicated or even nasty.
Best advice is to put yourself in other places and occupy yourself with anything that stops you having to observe their love or even their company. Time changes everything.
Very good emotional writing straight from your heart and drew me right into your plight.
January 30th, 2018 07:02
dusk arising said:
Oh the dilemma so often penned beautifully expressed here. We\'ve all done it, fallen for our best friends lover or similar. A very difficult situation which, if you act upon your feelings, can get very complicated or even nasty.
Best advice is to put yourself in other places and occupy yourself with anything that stops you having to observe their love or even their company. Time changes everything.
Very good emotional writing straight from your heart and drew me right into your plight.
January 30th, 2018 07:02
Pain or Feeling
Lorna said:
I like how you turned \"pain or feeling\" into one word!
January 30th, 2018 04:30
Lorna said:
I like how you turned \"pain or feeling\" into one word!
January 30th, 2018 04:30
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