Comments received on poems by Mil57Man
Mothers Dear
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like maternal love. Mothers will stick close to their offspring through thick and thin. It can be tough, especially when their children go off track. I can relate well to this piece of poetry. Nicely penned.
December 1st, 2023 02:43
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like maternal love. Mothers will stick close to their offspring through thick and thin. It can be tough, especially when their children go off track. I can relate well to this piece of poetry. Nicely penned.
December 1st, 2023 02:43
ALONG THE WAY
L. B. Mek said:
your flow is awesome!
\'Many
a *deceptive*, temptation
bringing
unnecessary complications.\'
(such a relatable read of insightful
and
uncompromisingly bold, commentary..
thanks for sharing)
May 27th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
your flow is awesome!
\'Many
a *deceptive*, temptation
bringing
unnecessary complications.\'
(such a relatable read of insightful
and
uncompromisingly bold, commentary..
thanks for sharing)
May 27th, 2022 04:35
ALONG THE WAY
Jonas Robinson said:
This would be good for mainstream, I think. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:13
Jonas Robinson said:
This would be good for mainstream, I think. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:13
MEMORIES
AuburnScribbler said:
Really like the rhyming and rhythmic structure here, the pace that I read it at sounded like you were \"spitting bars\" whilst you wrote this.
Also, this is a wonderfully written and relatable statement.
Bravo Mil57Man, have a good one, and please do take care.
November 13th, 2020 03:47
AuburnScribbler said:
Really like the rhyming and rhythmic structure here, the pace that I read it at sounded like you were \"spitting bars\" whilst you wrote this.
Also, this is a wonderfully written and relatable statement.
Bravo Mil57Man, have a good one, and please do take care.
November 13th, 2020 03:47
UNITED
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon MILMAN ~ Brian Here ~ Thanks for a lovely Love Poem. Angela & I got married 5 weeks ago ~ in a very trucated Ceremony ~ with just the Pastor ~ Our Parents & the Trinity a witnesses. We had invited 150 guests. We will renew our vows in April 2021 & reinvite everyone ! We will also have our planned Honeymoon in Sevilla (Spain) where Angelas PAPA was born ! Your sincere Poem mirrors our experience. I was 33 & Angela 28 when we first met 3 years ago. We are both committed Christians and believe that it was Gods will for us to be together ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 24th, 2020 10:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon MILMAN ~ Brian Here ~ Thanks for a lovely Love Poem. Angela & I got married 5 weeks ago ~ in a very trucated Ceremony ~ with just the Pastor ~ Our Parents & the Trinity a witnesses. We had invited 150 guests. We will renew our vows in April 2021 & reinvite everyone ! We will also have our planned Honeymoon in Sevilla (Spain) where Angelas PAPA was born ! Your sincere Poem mirrors our experience. I was 33 & Angela 28 when we first met 3 years ago. We are both committed Christians and believe that it was Gods will for us to be together ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 24th, 2020 10:50
LOOK, LISTEN, LEARN
Amon said:
That is quite motivational + that rhyming
Thanks for sharing this
March 26th, 2020 02:09
Amon said:
That is quite motivational + that rhyming
Thanks for sharing this
March 26th, 2020 02:09
SOONISH
Poetic Dan said:
Magical flow, that soonish will be lucky to know...
Keep up the write
March 18th, 2020 10:58
Poetic Dan said:
Magical flow, that soonish will be lucky to know...
Keep up the write
March 18th, 2020 10:58
\\\\\\\"YOU\\\\\\\"
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI MILMAN ~ BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing an elegantly penned Ode to Love ! We can empathise with this ODE. We SAW - We TALKED - We fell in LOVE - We are getting MARRIED in APRIL ! Im 36 & ANGELA is 31 and it will be our FIRST & LAST Marriage ~ AMEN. We share everything !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B !
February 10th, 2020 14:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI MILMAN ~ BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing an elegantly penned Ode to Love ! We can empathise with this ODE. We SAW - We TALKED - We fell in LOVE - We are getting MARRIED in APRIL ! Im 36 & ANGELA is 31 and it will be our FIRST & LAST Marriage ~ AMEN. We share everything !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B !
February 10th, 2020 14:15
\\\\\\\"YOU\\\\\\\"
Daydream Believer said:
A delicate piece on love. I felt I melted by the end. Such a wonderful and beautiful read
Thank you
February 10th, 2020 13:18
Daydream Believer said:
A delicate piece on love. I felt I melted by the end. Such a wonderful and beautiful read
Thank you
February 10th, 2020 13:18
ZOO
Poetic Dan said:
Omg that was so need and what a fabulous ending!
I should read that at 4pm everyday!
Really appreciated
Much peace and respect
November 27th, 2019 11:02
Poetic Dan said:
Omg that was so need and what a fabulous ending!
I should read that at 4pm everyday!
Really appreciated
Much peace and respect
November 27th, 2019 11:02
COMPLEX X
Poetic Dan said:
I feel like this but never left my border! Great stuff!
November 25th, 2019 15:07
Poetic Dan said:
I feel like this but never left my border! Great stuff!
November 25th, 2019 15:07
\"UNIQUE\"
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Mil. I have a philosophy in my life.
\"This is me, if you do not like what I am that is your problem, not mine!\"
November 22nd, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Mil. I have a philosophy in my life.
\"This is me, if you do not like what I am that is your problem, not mine!\"
November 22nd, 2019 02:00
\"UNIQUE\"
Poetic Dan said:
Bam! & my name is Dan but you are the MAN! Smashing technique, Iike Green eggs and ham!
November 21st, 2019 21:09
Poetic Dan said:
Bam! & my name is Dan but you are the MAN! Smashing technique, Iike Green eggs and ham!
November 21st, 2019 21:09
PRICE
Poetic Dan said:
Love your style, feels real nice. I can never help but roll those dice, give you lots to write!
Thanks again, enjoyed this one
March 21st, 2019 17:28
Poetic Dan said:
Love your style, feels real nice. I can never help but roll those dice, give you lots to write!
Thanks again, enjoyed this one
March 21st, 2019 17:28
OLD
Poetic Dan said:
Genius, what a fantastic read I once did one called wisdoms of the ages but this was fantastic!
Thank you
March 20th, 2019 01:35
Poetic Dan said:
Genius, what a fantastic read I once did one called wisdoms of the ages but this was fantastic!
Thank you
March 20th, 2019 01:35
MEDICATE
Suresh said:
Yes for many it\'s to easy to over compensate
For momentary relief, and then it\'s too late
Pointedly enjoyable read
March 17th, 2019 11:44
Suresh said:
Yes for many it\'s to easy to over compensate
For momentary relief, and then it\'s too late
Pointedly enjoyable read
March 17th, 2019 11:44
DUMB
Poetic Dan said:
Ha first and last, you\'ve got me hooked thank you for sharing your awesome thoughts!
March 17th, 2019 08:49
Poetic Dan said:
Ha first and last, you\'ve got me hooked thank you for sharing your awesome thoughts!
March 17th, 2019 08:49
MEDICATE
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again this one just raped round my brain, at 14 I opened the gate its definitely been heavy but its losing the game.
This was outstandingly inspirational!
March 17th, 2019 08:46
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again this one just raped round my brain, at 14 I opened the gate its definitely been heavy but its losing the game.
This was outstandingly inspirational!
March 17th, 2019 08:46
LAMP
b-LAH-que said:
I like the internally occurring rhymes within the lines and interchanging -amp and -ight rhyme schemes at the ends. Keep on writing
March 16th, 2019 00:17
b-LAH-que said:
I like the internally occurring rhymes within the lines and interchanging -amp and -ight rhyme schemes at the ends. Keep on writing
March 16th, 2019 00:17
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