Comments received on poems by blackangel
The memories of two lost souls
psychofemale said:
wow, such a heart felt, sad write. lovely.
January 30th, 2019 17:50
psychofemale said:
wow, such a heart felt, sad write. lovely.
January 30th, 2019 17:50
The game of life and death
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it will happen to all and there is nothing we can do about it but the body might die but the Spirit goes on for eternity. Welcome to MPS.
December 20th, 2017 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it will happen to all and there is nothing we can do about it but the body might die but the Spirit goes on for eternity. Welcome to MPS.
December 20th, 2017 02:25
The game of life and death
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"BA\" ~ Thanks for your first poem which hilites the Futility of Life & the Inevitability of Death ~ I love POEMES NOIRES ! Your elegant epic is presented is 5 balanced free verse Quatrians ~ Excellent ~ Good Structure (easy to read & recite) and the Subject is something we can ALL empathise with because it reflects the Life & Death of the whole Human Race ~ 7.3 Billion ! Verse 1. You can\'t win ~ DEATH is inevitable (Gerontologists give us 120 years MAX !)
Verse 2. The effect of my Friend\'s Deaths on me is \"I DON\'T WANNA DIE ~ EVER !\"
Verse 3. Life is a Game of Snakes & Ladders ~ Both are dangerous and cause lots of injury & death ~ Give up now ~ YOU CANT WIN !
Verse 4. In futily trying to escape (or postpone) Death ~ We actually DIE !
Verse 5. The Game of Life is CHANCE ~ The Game of Death is CERTAIN!
This poem is better than You think ~ Thanks for sharing ~ More Please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 15:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"BA\" ~ Thanks for your first poem which hilites the Futility of Life & the Inevitability of Death ~ I love POEMES NOIRES ! Your elegant epic is presented is 5 balanced free verse Quatrians ~ Excellent ~ Good Structure (easy to read & recite) and the Subject is something we can ALL empathise with because it reflects the Life & Death of the whole Human Race ~ 7.3 Billion ! Verse 1. You can\'t win ~ DEATH is inevitable (Gerontologists give us 120 years MAX !)
Verse 2. The effect of my Friend\'s Deaths on me is \"I DON\'T WANNA DIE ~ EVER !\"
Verse 3. Life is a Game of Snakes & Ladders ~ Both are dangerous and cause lots of injury & death ~ Give up now ~ YOU CANT WIN !
Verse 4. In futily trying to escape (or postpone) Death ~ We actually DIE !
Verse 5. The Game of Life is CHANCE ~ The Game of Death is CERTAIN!
This poem is better than You think ~ Thanks for sharing ~ More Please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 15:40
