Comments received on poems by Xochitl

Fen / An Unnamed Girl
Skie Khaleesi said:

WOW that was very powerful! Way to write! Killer poem!

February 25th, 2020 21:31

Lorna said:

And you remind me that I am waiting for summer - hopefully to be as good as this one.

March 6th, 2018 04:17

Roseville/Citrus Heights
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February 22nd, 2018 07:05

Heather T said:

The brevity of your telling lends this power, and it moved me. That really is a great song. Reminds me somewhat of a folk version of old Marcy\'s Playground. Good job, poet.

January 21st, 2018 15:53

Michael Edwards said:

An absolute gem Carlos.

January 21st, 2018 03:01

Allan J. Renaldo said:

This poem is so very simple, but so beautiful and powerful. Love it. X

January 21st, 2018 02:49


HOLA CARLOS ~ LA GRITA DE LA GUITARRA ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first poem. A fine tribute to the Guitar ~ the most versatile instrument invented by Man ~ Folk ~ Country ~ Jazz ~ Pop and of course Classical ~ Instrument of the GODS ! Thanks they do respond to a gentle touch ~ como una Senorita Bella ! Thanks for sharing ~more please ~ Hasta la Vista ~ BRIAN (UK)

January 16th, 2018 07:45