Comments received on poems by Malayzia
Beautiful Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
Normally I just toss in my take on a male who wronged:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
in the hope the wronged woman can learn...... I don\'t think this necessarily applies to you - the vibe is feisty and you most certainly are not downcast!
March 18th, 2023 22:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Normally I just toss in my take on a male who wronged:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
in the hope the wronged woman can learn...... I don\'t think this necessarily applies to you - the vibe is feisty and you most certainly are not downcast!
March 18th, 2023 22:54
Hip To The Blues
SolfullPoetry said:
Oh wowβ¦..
this was so beautiful and transparent
January 9th, 2023 19:42
SolfullPoetry said:
Oh wowβ¦..
this was so beautiful and transparent
January 9th, 2023 19:42
π·ππππ π¨ π·ππππππ π·ππππππ
L. B. Mek said:
\'π¨ πππππ ππππ ππ πππ πππ π ππ ππ ππππ, πππ ππππππππ ππππ πππ πππ ππ πππ πππππ.\'
if these words are in-reference to the tragic tail of the real life, Juliet
then I laud your Artistry
if not, I think you too
will be surprised at how smooth your metaphors flow from one to the other..
either way, this was such a wonderful reading treat
I feel, if rap strived to evolve for greater poetic height\'s
scalpel sharp bars, like yours
is what it would aspire for..
a privilege to read, thanks for sharing dear Poet
Happy New Year!
January 9th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'π¨ πππππ ππππ ππ πππ πππ π ππ ππ ππππ, πππ ππππππππ ππππ πππ πππ ππ πππ πππππ.\'
if these words are in-reference to the tragic tail of the real life, Juliet
then I laud your Artistry
if not, I think you too
will be surprised at how smooth your metaphors flow from one to the other..
either way, this was such a wonderful reading treat
I feel, if rap strived to evolve for greater poetic height\'s
scalpel sharp bars, like yours
is what it would aspire for..
a privilege to read, thanks for sharing dear Poet
Happy New Year!
January 9th, 2023 05:06
Hip To The Blues
L. B. Mek said:
(that\'s why, only the brave
can Love, wholeheartedly
most people merely invest, a cent at a time
in their landscape of frozen river relationships,
scarred early and thus devoid of the capacity
to entrust in such a flaky, melting fate...)
thanks for sharing, a relatable read
November 11th, 2022 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
(that\'s why, only the brave
can Love, wholeheartedly
most people merely invest, a cent at a time
in their landscape of frozen river relationships,
scarred early and thus devoid of the capacity
to entrust in such a flaky, melting fate...)
thanks for sharing, a relatable read
November 11th, 2022 07:04
Twin Flame
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Malayzia. Like that expression \'twin flame\' to maybe \'replace\' soul mate.
December 19th, 2020 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Malayzia. Like that expression \'twin flame\' to maybe \'replace\' soul mate.
December 19th, 2020 11:55
Black Lives Matter
Resa71 said:
Thereβs so much crazy sh** going on in our world these days.
Deranged gunmen randomly killing for no reason.
I hug and kiss my seven year old boy every time I leave him at school.
I think back on shootings that have taken place at grade schools and college campuses across the country.
I fear for both of my children, my daughter is attending college two thousand miles away from her family.
Even though sheβs grown, I worry for her every day.
I know god loves all of us. Even those we feel donβt deserve it!
I pray those who create and enforce the laws weβre supposed to live by, will stop focusing so much on one group, or race and protect us from the real monsters!
January 25th, 2018 13:05
Resa71 said:
Thereβs so much crazy sh** going on in our world these days.
Deranged gunmen randomly killing for no reason.
I hug and kiss my seven year old boy every time I leave him at school.
I think back on shootings that have taken place at grade schools and college campuses across the country.
I fear for both of my children, my daughter is attending college two thousand miles away from her family.
Even though sheβs grown, I worry for her every day.
I know god loves all of us. Even those we feel donβt deserve it!
I pray those who create and enforce the laws weβre supposed to live by, will stop focusing so much on one group, or race and protect us from the real monsters!
January 25th, 2018 13:05
I Am Mentally Prepared
Lorna said:
Damn why do children have to see and live with such awful things. Malayzia you made something lovely out of something most of us can\'t even begin to imagine.
January 23rd, 2018 05:19
Lorna said:
Damn why do children have to see and live with such awful things. Malayzia you made something lovely out of something most of us can\'t even begin to imagine.
January 23rd, 2018 05:19
I Am Mentally Prepared
Caring dove said:
well expressed .. i don\'t understand why your friend was taken from you in such a cruel way and by the police too, how cruel, so sorry to hear of this .. you wrote this well
January 23rd, 2018 03:32
Caring dove said:
well expressed .. i don\'t understand why your friend was taken from you in such a cruel way and by the police too, how cruel, so sorry to hear of this .. you wrote this well
January 23rd, 2018 03:32
