Comments received on poems by Last Shadow
Great Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
May that journey bring fruitfulness to your body and mind.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
May that journey bring fruitfulness to your body and mind.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:31
Black
Laura🌻 said:
Shadowed Fish,
He/she seems ready to meet the unwanted “black entity” that cannot be seen!
An apropos write reflecting the present time. An interesting read!
Let’s hope that mask doesn’t become a fashion statement that will stay!
~Laura~🌻
April 3rd, 2020 23:52
Laura🌻 said:
Shadowed Fish,
He/she seems ready to meet the unwanted “black entity” that cannot be seen!
An apropos write reflecting the present time. An interesting read!
Let’s hope that mask doesn’t become a fashion statement that will stay!
~Laura~🌻
April 3rd, 2020 23:52
Death I guess
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all die so each moment we are alive must be treasured.
March 16th, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all die so each moment we are alive must be treasured.
March 16th, 2020 00:50
Death I guess
dusk arising said:
And all whilst you read a magazine on a trip to the bathroom. Turn the page and life\'s all about a much brighter subject.... if you bought the right magazine.
Everything is dying but better to rejoice in this great life rather than contemplate its end all the time DOH!
March 15th, 2020 23:26
dusk arising said:
And all whilst you read a magazine on a trip to the bathroom. Turn the page and life\'s all about a much brighter subject.... if you bought the right magazine.
Everything is dying but better to rejoice in this great life rather than contemplate its end all the time DOH!
March 15th, 2020 23:26
Faith
Goldfinch60 said:
Faith in your own God is the right way, organised religions just want you to follow the path of somebody else who are in it for their own gains.
March 15th, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Faith in your own God is the right way, organised religions just want you to follow the path of somebody else who are in it for their own gains.
March 15th, 2020 01:08
Faith
orchidee said:
Nothing damaging to your, or anyone\'s spirit in this fine write. I\'ve never understood that phrase anyway?!
March 14th, 2020 11:52
orchidee said:
Nothing damaging to your, or anyone\'s spirit in this fine write. I\'ve never understood that phrase anyway?!
March 14th, 2020 11:52
Faith
dusk arising said:
Depends upon your faith. If your faith is true to god then you dont need to gather with others for you have the strength of faith within you where it shines.
Leave the gathering together of those with their so called faith to the weak ones who need each others reassurance because their own self knowledge is not enough to sustain their faith. Many organised religions were created by man so that they could have power over the masses.... corralling them each sunday to make sure they do not stray off the prescribed path.
Those holding a true faith will not stray and have no need of such gatherings.
March 14th, 2020 10:49
dusk arising said:
Depends upon your faith. If your faith is true to god then you dont need to gather with others for you have the strength of faith within you where it shines.
Leave the gathering together of those with their so called faith to the weak ones who need each others reassurance because their own self knowledge is not enough to sustain their faith. Many organised religions were created by man so that they could have power over the masses.... corralling them each sunday to make sure they do not stray off the prescribed path.
Those holding a true faith will not stray and have no need of such gatherings.
March 14th, 2020 10:49
Abyss
Last Shadow said:
I make up poems on the day I post them. I don\'t take time to make them. Sometimes I have a bit longer but never more than half an hour.
February 4th, 2020 10:52
Last Shadow said:
I make up poems on the day I post them. I don\'t take time to make them. Sometimes I have a bit longer but never more than half an hour.
February 4th, 2020 10:52
A Shadow
Nicholas Browning said:
Every single day becoming a different person than the day before. I love stuff like this.
January 13th, 2020 22:47
Nicholas Browning said:
Every single day becoming a different person than the day before. I love stuff like this.
January 13th, 2020 22:47
Devastation
dusk arising said:
With all that behind you its a good job you have a whole new year to look forward to eh?
January 2nd, 2020 01:12
dusk arising said:
With all that behind you its a good job you have a whole new year to look forward to eh?
January 2nd, 2020 01:12
Devastation
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. Overbearing sense of desolation. Nice.
January 1st, 2020 22:00
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. Overbearing sense of desolation. Nice.
January 1st, 2020 22:00
Being Decisive
orchidee said:
I was gonna be decisive, but I couldn\'t make up my mind about it. Doh! lol.
December 17th, 2019 08:58
orchidee said:
I was gonna be decisive, but I couldn\'t make up my mind about it. Doh! lol.
December 17th, 2019 08:58
Ultimate Collection | Must Read
Poetic Dan said:
Wow! Not sure who you was before but this is spectacular.
November 26th, 2019 12:42
Poetic Dan said:
Wow! Not sure who you was before but this is spectacular.
November 26th, 2019 12:42
Fate - Rise and Demise
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry but I can\'t read it with the dark shading.
November 16th, 2019 02:17
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry but I can\'t read it with the dark shading.
November 16th, 2019 02:17
E-U/n-/Titled
Thoughts In Time said:
The inner you knows the way to go...love the pic🌹
October 15th, 2019 11:08
Thoughts In Time said:
The inner you knows the way to go...love the pic🌹
October 15th, 2019 11:08
EEgg
Last Shadow said:
Because we are West from where he rose, would the East say Happy Wester or probably Sad Wester because of what happened.
April 21st, 2019 22:36
Last Shadow said:
Because we are West from where he rose, would the East say Happy Wester or probably Sad Wester because of what happened.
April 21st, 2019 22:36
Ice Cream Innocents?
Nafis Light said:
Blue moon? The taste of that ice-cream?
April 13th, 2019 10:58
Nafis Light said:
Blue moon? The taste of that ice-cream?
April 13th, 2019 10:58
Prison Rust
dusk arising said:
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no prisoners.
Without will crime will own you.
Just prison thoughts.
April 10th, 2019 11:17
dusk arising said:
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no prisoners.
Without will crime will own you.
Just prison thoughts.
April 10th, 2019 11:17
Prison Rust
dusk arising said:
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no prisoners.
Without will crime will own you.
Just prison thoughts.
April 10th, 2019 10:13
dusk arising said:
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no prisoners.
Without will crime will own you.
Just prison thoughts.
April 10th, 2019 10:13
Silenced
Suresh said:
What was, is no more
What is, will no longer be
All is temporary.
April 3rd, 2019 13:06
Suresh said:
What was, is no more
What is, will no longer be
All is temporary.
April 3rd, 2019 13:06
Struggle
Nicholas Browning said:
The answers aren\'t always so clear. This is something I\'ve been struggling with myself for a while. It doesn\'t seem to get easier, but writing about it and thinking about it can help quite a bit.
March 12th, 2019 16:52
Nicholas Browning said:
The answers aren\'t always so clear. This is something I\'ve been struggling with myself for a while. It doesn\'t seem to get easier, but writing about it and thinking about it can help quite a bit.
March 12th, 2019 16:52
« Return to the profile of Last Shadow
