Comments received on poems by Last Shadow
Beyond Ice
Last Shadow said:
Couldn\'t edit to usual, phone data bugs the editor out.
January 31st, 2019 22:48
Last Shadow said:
Couldn\'t edit to usual, phone data bugs the editor out.
January 31st, 2019 22:48
What For
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What patriotism! And a great poetic message that this reader has contemplated and enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing!
September 25th, 2018 13:35
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What patriotism! And a great poetic message that this reader has contemplated and enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing!
September 25th, 2018 13:35
Your Will
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m intrigued by the positioning of Musical Life at the end.
Dark silence seemed the end.
Is musical life more hopeful?
I imagine there would be music in hell? Well not that I imagine hell exists. Not as an entity in itself. I imagine it is a part of everything. Within, without. I see it as necessary.
Anyway, I hope you are not dead as your absence note suggests.
Sylvia
September 11th, 2018 06:45
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m intrigued by the positioning of Musical Life at the end.
Dark silence seemed the end.
Is musical life more hopeful?
I imagine there would be music in hell? Well not that I imagine hell exists. Not as an entity in itself. I imagine it is a part of everything. Within, without. I see it as necessary.
Anyway, I hope you are not dead as your absence note suggests.
Sylvia
September 11th, 2018 06:45
Stairs and Air
Nicholas Browning said:
Your use of wordplay is quite nice. \"Flattened down to but stone\" being an analogy for \"Flattened down to nothing but stone\" or \"Flattened down to stone\", was quite nice. I especially enjoy the last stanza. \"The Fall leaves your path up the stairs.\" A strangely bewildering line; Much appreciated all the same. You\'ve got some talent -That is for sure.
September 11th, 2018 06:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Your use of wordplay is quite nice. \"Flattened down to but stone\" being an analogy for \"Flattened down to nothing but stone\" or \"Flattened down to stone\", was quite nice. I especially enjoy the last stanza. \"The Fall leaves your path up the stairs.\" A strangely bewildering line; Much appreciated all the same. You\'ve got some talent -That is for sure.
September 11th, 2018 06:04
Last of Kin
Poetic Dan said:
Very moving I can only think that I don\'t want to be last ill be my best to become the first, nope that\'s not it! You\'ve left my mind all over the place as I\'m in no race.
Thank you for the inspiration my friend
July 17th, 2018 04:53
Poetic Dan said:
Very moving I can only think that I don\'t want to be last ill be my best to become the first, nope that\'s not it! You\'ve left my mind all over the place as I\'m in no race.
Thank you for the inspiration my friend
July 17th, 2018 04:53
Void
Noah Malice said:
I think someone ought to keep an eye on you. Your username is dangerously close to a certain Batman villian.
June 18th, 2018 20:35
Noah Malice said:
I think someone ought to keep an eye on you. Your username is dangerously close to a certain Batman villian.
June 18th, 2018 20:35
Slow but Going, Plans
orchidee said:
Erm, wouldn\'t it be nicer to schedule time for things other than s***?! (lol).
June 14th, 2018 10:55
orchidee said:
Erm, wouldn\'t it be nicer to schedule time for things other than s***?! (lol).
June 14th, 2018 10:55
Eternal Love
orchidee said:
Oh dear it\'s all appeared in Greek! Can translate it though.
May 1st, 2018 06:42
orchidee said:
Oh dear it\'s all appeared in Greek! Can translate it though.
May 1st, 2018 06:42
Beautiful Rain\'
sylviasearcher said:
I love the rain and echo the sentiment you have captured here
April 13th, 2018 02:02
sylviasearcher said:
I love the rain and echo the sentiment you have captured here
April 13th, 2018 02:02
Lost and Found
orchidee said:
A fine write. In one way we can search for dreams. In a literal way, dreams are nebulous - like clouds or smoke maybe. We cannot physically touch them.
Or -\'What\'s found isn\'t lost!\'
Another one is \'If it ain\'t broken, don\'t fix it!\' But some do try to fix it, and muck it up! doh!
February 5th, 2018 06:52
orchidee said:
A fine write. In one way we can search for dreams. In a literal way, dreams are nebulous - like clouds or smoke maybe. We cannot physically touch them.
Or -\'What\'s found isn\'t lost!\'
Another one is \'If it ain\'t broken, don\'t fix it!\' But some do try to fix it, and muck it up! doh!
February 5th, 2018 06:52
Ultimate Collection | Must Read
Last Shadow said:
Your message. Did I do good?
January 20th, 2018 09:50
Last Shadow said:
Your message. Did I do good?
January 20th, 2018 09:50
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