Comments received on poems by Last Shadow
End of the line
Jazzy.Special said:
If you ever need someone to talk to, my inbox is open for you😌 i know this feeling all too well, and the simpsons reference... you dont deserve to feel like Moe, pick a new character 😇
December 10th, 2023 04:09
Jazzy.Special said:
If you ever need someone to talk to, my inbox is open for you😌 i know this feeling all too well, and the simpsons reference... you dont deserve to feel like Moe, pick a new character 😇
December 10th, 2023 04:09
STOP
arobot said:
there is more to life than career progress.
what about a stop?
what abour a fall from a top?
what about a regress?
June 19th, 2022 04:27
arobot said:
there is more to life than career progress.
what about a stop?
what abour a fall from a top?
what about a regress?
June 19th, 2022 04:27
STOP
Last Shadow said:
Not easy with so much pressing like a bruise running in your mind. Knowing life is pointless that everything is the same, that nothing is worth chasing. Other than a nice soothing soak in a warm tub without lights except maybe candles. Not even money will make it better, counselors pointless, drugs and alcohol never an option.
Just seeing how life truly is makes it hard to want anything, I don’t know what I want.
June 18th, 2022 22:56
Last Shadow said:
Not easy with so much pressing like a bruise running in your mind. Knowing life is pointless that everything is the same, that nothing is worth chasing. Other than a nice soothing soak in a warm tub without lights except maybe candles. Not even money will make it better, counselors pointless, drugs and alcohol never an option.
Just seeing how life truly is makes it hard to want anything, I don’t know what I want.
June 18th, 2022 22:56
AfterDeath
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, I hope so.,
but that sceptic in me, wonders
if death is peace or slumber
then why is dying
full, of traumatic pain and hurt
for the dying and those
witnessing, their beloved\'s
last moments..
I would be more willing to believe
such an ideal
if we all just died in our sleep
when the time came
transfer from one slumber to another..
(appreciate your clear and constructive
writing on a topic
most people ignore, till its too late..
I think it far healthier
to ponder about it, than
sit in fear, of something
so inevitable..)
thanks for sharing!
April 28th, 2022 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, I hope so.,
but that sceptic in me, wonders
if death is peace or slumber
then why is dying
full, of traumatic pain and hurt
for the dying and those
witnessing, their beloved\'s
last moments..
I would be more willing to believe
such an ideal
if we all just died in our sleep
when the time came
transfer from one slumber to another..
(appreciate your clear and constructive
writing on a topic
most people ignore, till its too late..
I think it far healthier
to ponder about it, than
sit in fear, of something
so inevitable..)
thanks for sharing!
April 28th, 2022 03:30
AfterDeath
Hoolihooli said:
This is a very cool poem I love the word choices :)
April 27th, 2022 22:55
Hoolihooli said:
This is a very cool poem I love the word choices :)
April 27th, 2022 22:55
Side Choice
Dahlia said:
well penned, makes me ponder on
alot of what is attacking our societies
at large, happy Sunday,
keep poeming on
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 14:13
Dahlia said:
well penned, makes me ponder on
alot of what is attacking our societies
at large, happy Sunday,
keep poeming on
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 14:13
LifeStyle - Mindset
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely written! Very meaningful and expressed to a T! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:37
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely written! Very meaningful and expressed to a T! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:37
LifeStyle - Mindset
L. B. Mek said:
\'till we find, whatever comes after
it\'s all neither Now, or a Forever
seemingly teetering, in-between
moreover and move over, mindsets
still, we await blindfolded by fate
till it\'s all mercifully, over...\'
(loved your choices
in curating this worded question mark
of a poetic work of Art)
forgive my rudeness, I couldn\'t resist
trying to scribble a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'till we find, whatever comes after
it\'s all neither Now, or a Forever
seemingly teetering, in-between
moreover and move over, mindsets
still, we await blindfolded by fate
till it\'s all mercifully, over...\'
(loved your choices
in curating this worded question mark
of a poetic work of Art)
forgive my rudeness, I couldn\'t resist
trying to scribble a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 06:38
Hard Success
Ok Waleed said:
As long as you’re alive let’s start with the first breath
February 19th, 2022 20:37
Ok Waleed said:
As long as you’re alive let’s start with the first breath
February 19th, 2022 20:37
To Keep Thinking
Last Shadow said:
And I dont mean poems i mean the artwork
September 5th, 2021 13:36
Last Shadow said:
And I dont mean poems i mean the artwork
September 5th, 2021 13:36
Non
Last Shadow said:
I\'m only surprised if someone has and takes time to read word for word. I dont like reading. I just write, draw, and whatever.
May 29th, 2021 21:04
Last Shadow said:
I\'m only surprised if someone has and takes time to read word for word. I dont like reading. I just write, draw, and whatever.
May 29th, 2021 21:04
Impaled
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t perchance lucifer very very very 1st - incognito are you?
If not you two should get together - you have a lot in common.
Then ride off into the sunset together...
April 23rd, 2021 21:39
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t perchance lucifer very very very 1st - incognito are you?
If not you two should get together - you have a lot in common.
Then ride off into the sunset together...
April 23rd, 2021 21:39
Abyss
Doggerel Dave said:
Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - it\'s half an hour you will never get back....
March 9th, 2021 17:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Wouldn\'t bother if I were you - it\'s half an hour you will never get back....
March 9th, 2021 17:47
March - Spring
Doggerel Dave said:
Fading fast....going... going...gone.
Or is my eyesight deteriorating?
March 9th, 2021 17:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Fading fast....going... going...gone.
Or is my eyesight deteriorating?
March 9th, 2021 17:43
Promised Land
dusk arising said:
How come that since January 2018 you only were interested enough in poetry to read only 14 poems on MPS? Poet?
November 18th, 2020 15:48
dusk arising said:
How come that since January 2018 you only were interested enough in poetry to read only 14 poems on MPS? Poet?
November 18th, 2020 15:48
MERRY CHRISTMAS
dusk arising said:
Are you planning on surviving till christmas.... it\'s all of 46 days away.
Good luck.
November 7th, 2020 09:41
dusk arising said:
Are you planning on surviving till christmas.... it\'s all of 46 days away.
Good luck.
November 7th, 2020 09:41
Faith and Fate
Last Shadow said:
The world\'s gone mad. Good or bad, more or less. Don\'t like, go home, forget this. Tons more other poems. Hard to look, there\'s books. Life will live until lived.
November 2nd, 2020 08:53
Last Shadow said:
The world\'s gone mad. Good or bad, more or less. Don\'t like, go home, forget this. Tons more other poems. Hard to look, there\'s books. Life will live until lived.
November 2nd, 2020 08:53
Silence
Bragee said:
As a native of texas...what a scary picture!
Good write!
October 23rd, 2020 11:52
Bragee said:
As a native of texas...what a scary picture!
Good write!
October 23rd, 2020 11:52
Eye of the Universe
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful image and an intriguing write
September 7th, 2020 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful image and an intriguing write
September 7th, 2020 03:32
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