Comments received on poems by Tequilasangel
A daisy in the dirt
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is lovely :-)
February 5th, 2018 17:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is lovely :-)
February 5th, 2018 17:03
Dimethyltripta-teen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"TA\" Thanks for your first poem which was very powerful & personal and demanded a full response ! VERSE 1. YES ~ Life & love is CIRCULAR V 2. Someone always tries to press us into their mold ! V 3. Mind Control ~ by DMTM and People are equally dangerous ! V 4. Who can we blame ? Society ~ Parents ~ Peers ~ Environment etc ~ BUT ultimately the blame lies with OURSELVES ! V 5. Looking at ourselves in retrospect is CATHARTIC & FRIGHTENING ~ we see just how far we have slipped ~ I WANNA BREAK FREE ! V 6. CASUAL LOVE can be COMPRESSIVE BUT (in my experience) TRUE LOVE can be RELEASING ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Love the VISUAL it says it ALL !
February 3rd, 2018 18:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"TA\" Thanks for your first poem which was very powerful & personal and demanded a full response ! VERSE 1. YES ~ Life & love is CIRCULAR V 2. Someone always tries to press us into their mold ! V 3. Mind Control ~ by DMTM and People are equally dangerous ! V 4. Who can we blame ? Society ~ Parents ~ Peers ~ Environment etc ~ BUT ultimately the blame lies with OURSELVES ! V 5. Looking at ourselves in retrospect is CATHARTIC & FRIGHTENING ~ we see just how far we have slipped ~ I WANNA BREAK FREE ! V 6. CASUAL LOVE can be COMPRESSIVE BUT (in my experience) TRUE LOVE can be RELEASING ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Love the VISUAL it says it ALL !
February 3rd, 2018 18:54
