Comments received on poems by Tequilasangel



Mirror, mirror
Maggie Maloney said:

the last 15 words -- wow!


February 9th, 2018 17:23

2 days away from my 18th birthday
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 8th, 2018 10:05

A daisy in the dirt
yellowrose said:

this is lovely :-)

February 5th, 2018 17:03

Dimethyltripta-teen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME \"TA\" Thanks for your first poem which was very powerful & personal and demanded a full response ! VERSE 1. YES ~ Life & love is CIRCULAR V 2. Someone always tries to press us into their mold ! V 3. Mind Control ~ by DMTM and People are equally dangerous ! V 4. Who can we blame ? Society ~ Parents ~ Peers ~ Environment etc ~ BUT ultimately the blame lies with OURSELVES ! V 5. Looking at ourselves in retrospect is CATHARTIC & FRIGHTENING ~ we see just how far we have slipped ~ I WANNA BREAK FREE ! V 6. CASUAL LOVE can be COMPRESSIVE BUT (in my experience) TRUE LOVE can be RELEASING ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Love the VISUAL it says it ALL !

February 3rd, 2018 18:54

Dimethyltripta-teen
Kae said:

I really like this :)

February 3rd, 2018 18:20