Comments received on poems by Poetic25
Unfinished symphony
poelove said:
yes powerful and I loved the rhythm you achieved it flowed well. The last verse \'i sang the chorus\' made for a powerful finish.
February 25th, 2018 07:35
poelove said:
yes powerful and I loved the rhythm you achieved it flowed well. The last verse \'i sang the chorus\' made for a powerful finish.
February 25th, 2018 07:35
Twilight rendezvous
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i imagine the woods are nice to walk in .. not been for a walk in a wood/ forest for a long time .. i can imagine it is calming for the minds tho i wouldn\'t want to be alone in one , lol
February 24th, 2018 16:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i imagine the woods are nice to walk in .. not been for a walk in a wood/ forest for a long time .. i can imagine it is calming for the minds tho i wouldn\'t want to be alone in one , lol
February 24th, 2018 16:30
Twilight rendezvous
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow! poetic25 , an amazing piece of writing .. i love how you speak of the moon and the clouds being like
iris resting; between
silver lined eyelids... you have given this a truly musical and magical feel , the tempo of the wood, the stirring of the leaves .. and then all goes silent and a owl hoots and you are wandering is it directed towards you .. brilliant ! i love your work ! a truly enjoyable piece :-) you have given the woods such an amazing sense of atmosphere ..
February 24th, 2018 10:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow! poetic25 , an amazing piece of writing .. i love how you speak of the moon and the clouds being like
iris resting; between
silver lined eyelids... you have given this a truly musical and magical feel , the tempo of the wood, the stirring of the leaves .. and then all goes silent and a owl hoots and you are wandering is it directed towards you .. brilliant ! i love your work ! a truly enjoyable piece :-) you have given the woods such an amazing sense of atmosphere ..
February 24th, 2018 10:52
If only...
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This verse is pure joy to read! It warmed my heart to read it! I wish you could sky write it for the whole world to see!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 14:54
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This verse is pure joy to read! It warmed my heart to read it! I wish you could sky write it for the whole world to see!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 14:54
Unfinished symphony
Christina8 said:
A well written poem, so heartfelt. Very emotional. Great job!
February 22nd, 2018 18:30
Christina8 said:
A well written poem, so heartfelt. Very emotional. Great job!
February 22nd, 2018 18:30
Unfinished symphony
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i agree with little gift ... a very powerful piece of writing .. i love your reference to strings of the heart and the drums ..
your big bands bashed;
banging my head
against a brick wall
it sounds like someone really got to you , and caused you pain ..
really great, enjoyed this!
February 22nd, 2018 13:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i agree with little gift ... a very powerful piece of writing .. i love your reference to strings of the heart and the drums ..
your big bands bashed;
banging my head
against a brick wall
it sounds like someone really got to you , and caused you pain ..
really great, enjoyed this!
February 22nd, 2018 13:47
\'Smashing\'
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
oh , this is very nice .. so short yet so effective in its message :-)
February 22nd, 2018 13:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
oh , this is very nice .. so short yet so effective in its message :-)
February 22nd, 2018 13:21
Always..
Fay Slimm. said:
This poem of grateful love reads so beautifully positive and has a great flow - I just love the delightful and well-arranged form - well done indeed.
February 21st, 2018 14:14
Fay Slimm. said:
This poem of grateful love reads so beautifully positive and has a great flow - I just love the delightful and well-arranged form - well done indeed.
February 21st, 2018 14:14
My candle of addiction
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello poetic25... this seems like a very strong powerful and deep piece of writing full of great expression !
February 20th, 2018 16:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello poetic25... this seems like a very strong powerful and deep piece of writing full of great expression !
February 20th, 2018 16:08
Times passed
dusk arising said:
Thats the way of it nicely put. Demise and rebirth.
February 11th, 2018 18:46
dusk arising said:
Thats the way of it nicely put. Demise and rebirth.
February 11th, 2018 18:46
Symphony of birth
Michael Edwards said:
Just came across this - a real heart warming write which I echo.
February 10th, 2018 20:36
Michael Edwards said:
Just came across this - a real heart warming write which I echo.
February 10th, 2018 20:36
Symphony of birth
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, rife with emotion. Takes me back. Great job!
February 9th, 2018 19:37
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, rife with emotion. Takes me back. Great job!
February 9th, 2018 19:37
Creative madness
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting ! i love this ! the wording throughout .. makes for a very enjoyable read . thanks for sharing ....
February 8th, 2018 06:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting ! i love this ! the wording throughout .. makes for a very enjoyable read . thanks for sharing ....
February 8th, 2018 06:41
Wispy bones of winter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello poetic25 .. this is truly very lovely :-) i very much enjoyed reading this . i love you referred to the tree\'s as wooden skeletons and the gems, the \'\' pitter patter of tiny baby buds\'\' BEAUTIFUL
February 8th, 2018 05:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello poetic25 .. this is truly very lovely :-) i very much enjoyed reading this . i love you referred to the tree\'s as wooden skeletons and the gems, the \'\' pitter patter of tiny baby buds\'\' BEAUTIFUL
February 8th, 2018 05:17
Pastures new (English Sonnet)
hulheart said:
Well done !! I do like the rhythm it does flow well
February 7th, 2018 16:56
hulheart said:
Well done !! I do like the rhythm it does flow well
February 7th, 2018 16:56
Pastures new (English Sonnet)
Fay Slimm. said:
A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend\'s wedding - a first rate piece of writing.
February 7th, 2018 12:09
Fay Slimm. said:
A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend\'s wedding - a first rate piece of writing.
February 7th, 2018 12:09
Creative madness
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of engaging and creative writing and welcome to M..P. S. - - I look forward to reading more of your work . This little gem is saved to my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 12:07
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of engaging and creative writing and welcome to M..P. S. - - I look forward to reading more of your work . This little gem is saved to my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 12:07
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