Comments received on poems by Poetic25



Mother Nature\'s - \'work of art\' (English sonnet)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

hi michael , i love how you personified the wind ! she sounds like a woman , gentle sometimes , playful other times , but sometimes she becomes angry and you cannot calm her down .. brilliant ...:-) shes like a woman in the sky , the only thing is that you cannot see her, you can only feel and hear her voice... nicely done

March 21st, 2018 05:45

Mother Nature\'s - \'work of art\' (English sonnet)
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, the wind in all its glory. It can show us so many sides to its wondrous nature.

March 20th, 2018 02:06

\'No milk spilt\'
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael, glad all was well.

March 13th, 2018 02:13

\'No milk spilt\'
Fay Slimm. said:

Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking bites from the unsuspecting mind Michael - - amazing the short-line powerful punches which end on such a positive note.

March 12th, 2018 17:52

\'No milk spilt\'
Lorna said:

And here I am trying to cut back on sugar......... What a way to go Michael.. Loved the use of sweets for this imagery.......... glad they couldn\'t \"get you\"...........

March 12th, 2018 07:28

\'Damaged goods\'
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an emotive write, I do hope that the \'damaged souvenir\' becomes mended.

March 12th, 2018 01:29

poetic intrigue
Lorna said:

A fun tease of a poem - made me smile!

March 11th, 2018 05:22

Me, myself, thy and Thee.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that journey continue forever.

March 9th, 2018 01:44

\'Love\' a journey within
Goldfinch60 said:

Good deep write and it is so good that you are overcoming the darkness and pulling yourself into the light. May your journey be soon forefilled.

March 8th, 2018 01:18

\'Love\' a journey within
Resa71 said:

A lot of deep hurt in these words.
I love the positive turn it takes.
Nice write!
Thank you! :)
Resa

March 7th, 2018 13:18

If only...
poelove said:

Excellent take on empathy. empathy is the great anti-vise I invite you to read one of my poems called \'empathy\'

March 7th, 2018 07:12

Addiction (double acrostic)
Lorna said:

Clever - getting the last letters instead of the first and still making great sense!

March 6th, 2018 10:23

Addiction (double acrostic)
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow - this is a clever expression of well thought out double acrostic - a very fine effort my friend.

March 6th, 2018 09:52

Addiction (double acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write P25.

March 6th, 2018 09:12

Valentine (acrostic)
poelove said:

A notion for eternity\' excellent line for two hearts and their dreams

March 6th, 2018 06:29

Unfinished symphony
poelove said:

some symphonies should forever remain unfinished..excellent metaphor for the on-going battle every person must endure with regards to our own personal demons...

March 6th, 2018 06:25

\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
poelove said:

well done -vivid a joy to read

March 6th, 2018 06:21

\'Recovery\'
Christina8 said:

Really good poem and self expression. Thanks for sharing!

March 5th, 2018 12:47

\'Recovery\'
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

really good poem michael :-) you express yourself so well . charlotte x

March 5th, 2018 12:30

Pursuit of love within (acrostic)
Lorna said:

Hi Poet..... it\'s a hard lesson to love oneself - having to fight the \"don\'t be selfish\" lessons we learn early on. Such a fine line of difference!

March 4th, 2018 06:23

sound of hope
Leisa Niamh said:

Lovely read - very deep.

March 4th, 2018 06:07

Always..
Leisa Niamh said:

Hi Michael

Just read this and got quite choked up - its beautiful.

March 4th, 2018 06:04

Take the edge off
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

really love this ! :-) the idea of you hurt and pain being like broken gems in a chest. the sword is your way to cleanse the stains.. it is your weapon of strength , your way to conquer and heal .. enjoyed reading this ... another briilliant piece of writing from you , i love reading your work

March 4th, 2018 03:30

\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Lorna said:

You shared it so beautifully I would love to visit it!

February 27th, 2018 05:27

\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Christina8 said:

A beautiful daydream!. Like Jamie said, \"magical\", because indeed it sounds so. Great job! Christina

February 26th, 2018 18:36

\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

lovely :-) its like a fantasy world.. quite beautiful :-)

February 26th, 2018 17:34

\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Jamie said:

Magical!

February 26th, 2018 17:32

A friend indeed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i wish i had friends who i could see.. but regardless , i am grateful for my friends online. a nice poem poetic25 , well expressed

February 25th, 2018 16:00

Twilight rendezvous
poelove said:

now that\'s poetry! taking a few seconds in time and stretching it to encompass many moments. very well written thoroughly enjoyed my moments reading this.

February 25th, 2018 07:42

Always..
poelove said:

absolutely gorgeous both words and that beautiful eye appealing form.

February 25th, 2018 07:37

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