Comments received on poems by Poetic25
Mother Nature\'s - \'work of art\' (English sonnet)
Caring dove said:
hi michael , i love how you personified the wind ! she sounds like a woman , gentle sometimes , playful other times , but sometimes she becomes angry and you cannot calm her down .. brilliant ...:-) shes like a woman in the sky , the only thing is that you cannot see her, you can only feel and hear her voice... nicely done
March 21st, 2018 05:45
Caring dove said:
hi michael , i love how you personified the wind ! she sounds like a woman , gentle sometimes , playful other times , but sometimes she becomes angry and you cannot calm her down .. brilliant ...:-) shes like a woman in the sky , the only thing is that you cannot see her, you can only feel and hear her voice... nicely done
March 21st, 2018 05:45
Mother Nature\'s - \'work of art\' (English sonnet)
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the wind in all its glory. It can show us so many sides to its wondrous nature.
March 20th, 2018 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the wind in all its glory. It can show us so many sides to its wondrous nature.
March 20th, 2018 02:06
\'No milk spilt\'
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking bites from the unsuspecting mind Michael - - amazing the short-line powerful punches which end on such a positive note.
March 12th, 2018 17:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking bites from the unsuspecting mind Michael - - amazing the short-line powerful punches which end on such a positive note.
March 12th, 2018 17:52
\'No milk spilt\'
Lorna said:
And here I am trying to cut back on sugar......... What a way to go Michael.. Loved the use of sweets for this imagery.......... glad they couldn\'t \"get you\"...........
March 12th, 2018 07:28
Lorna said:
And here I am trying to cut back on sugar......... What a way to go Michael.. Loved the use of sweets for this imagery.......... glad they couldn\'t \"get you\"...........
March 12th, 2018 07:28
\'Damaged goods\'
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, I do hope that the \'damaged souvenir\' becomes mended.
March 12th, 2018 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, I do hope that the \'damaged souvenir\' becomes mended.
March 12th, 2018 01:29
\'Love\' a journey within
Goldfinch60 said:
Good deep write and it is so good that you are overcoming the darkness and pulling yourself into the light. May your journey be soon forefilled.
March 8th, 2018 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good deep write and it is so good that you are overcoming the darkness and pulling yourself into the light. May your journey be soon forefilled.
March 8th, 2018 01:18
\'Love\' a journey within
Resa71 said:
A lot of deep hurt in these words.
I love the positive turn it takes.
Nice write!
Thank you! :)
Resa
March 7th, 2018 13:18
Resa71 said:
A lot of deep hurt in these words.
I love the positive turn it takes.
Nice write!
Thank you! :)
Resa
March 7th, 2018 13:18
If only...
poelove said:
Excellent take on empathy. empathy is the great anti-vise I invite you to read one of my poems called \'empathy\'
March 7th, 2018 07:12
poelove said:
Excellent take on empathy. empathy is the great anti-vise I invite you to read one of my poems called \'empathy\'
March 7th, 2018 07:12
Addiction (double acrostic)
Lorna said:
Clever - getting the last letters instead of the first and still making great sense!
March 6th, 2018 10:23
Lorna said:
Clever - getting the last letters instead of the first and still making great sense!
March 6th, 2018 10:23
Addiction (double acrostic)
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this is a clever expression of well thought out double acrostic - a very fine effort my friend.
March 6th, 2018 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this is a clever expression of well thought out double acrostic - a very fine effort my friend.
March 6th, 2018 09:52
Valentine (acrostic)
poelove said:
A notion for eternity\' excellent line for two hearts and their dreams
March 6th, 2018 06:29
poelove said:
A notion for eternity\' excellent line for two hearts and their dreams
March 6th, 2018 06:29
Unfinished symphony
poelove said:
some symphonies should forever remain unfinished..excellent metaphor for the on-going battle every person must endure with regards to our own personal demons...
March 6th, 2018 06:25
poelove said:
some symphonies should forever remain unfinished..excellent metaphor for the on-going battle every person must endure with regards to our own personal demons...
March 6th, 2018 06:25
\'Recovery\'
Christina8 said:
Really good poem and self expression. Thanks for sharing!
March 5th, 2018 12:47
Christina8 said:
Really good poem and self expression. Thanks for sharing!
March 5th, 2018 12:47
\'Recovery\'
Caring dove said:
really good poem michael :-) you express yourself so well . charlotte x
March 5th, 2018 12:30
Caring dove said:
really good poem michael :-) you express yourself so well . charlotte x
March 5th, 2018 12:30
Pursuit of love within (acrostic)
Lorna said:
Hi Poet..... it\'s a hard lesson to love oneself - having to fight the \"don\'t be selfish\" lessons we learn early on. Such a fine line of difference!
March 4th, 2018 06:23
Lorna said:
Hi Poet..... it\'s a hard lesson to love oneself - having to fight the \"don\'t be selfish\" lessons we learn early on. Such a fine line of difference!
March 4th, 2018 06:23
Always..
Leisa Niamh said:
Hi Michael
Just read this and got quite choked up - its beautiful.
March 4th, 2018 06:04
Leisa Niamh said:
Hi Michael
Just read this and got quite choked up - its beautiful.
March 4th, 2018 06:04
Take the edge off
Caring dove said:
really love this ! :-) the idea of you hurt and pain being like broken gems in a chest. the sword is your way to cleanse the stains.. it is your weapon of strength , your way to conquer and heal .. enjoyed reading this ... another briilliant piece of writing from you , i love reading your work
March 4th, 2018 03:30
Caring dove said:
really love this ! :-) the idea of you hurt and pain being like broken gems in a chest. the sword is your way to cleanse the stains.. it is your weapon of strength , your way to conquer and heal .. enjoyed reading this ... another briilliant piece of writing from you , i love reading your work
March 4th, 2018 03:30
\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Lorna said:
You shared it so beautifully I would love to visit it!
February 27th, 2018 05:27
Lorna said:
You shared it so beautifully I would love to visit it!
February 27th, 2018 05:27
\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Christina8 said:
A beautiful daydream!. Like Jamie said, \"magical\", because indeed it sounds so. Great job! Christina
February 26th, 2018 18:36
Christina8 said:
A beautiful daydream!. Like Jamie said, \"magical\", because indeed it sounds so. Great job! Christina
February 26th, 2018 18:36
\'Myth upon the wold\' (Sonnet)
Caring dove said:
lovely :-) its like a fantasy world.. quite beautiful :-)
February 26th, 2018 17:34
Caring dove said:
lovely :-) its like a fantasy world.. quite beautiful :-)
February 26th, 2018 17:34
A friend indeed
Caring dove said:
i wish i had friends who i could see.. but regardless , i am grateful for my friends online. a nice poem poetic25 , well expressed
February 25th, 2018 16:00
Caring dove said:
i wish i had friends who i could see.. but regardless , i am grateful for my friends online. a nice poem poetic25 , well expressed
February 25th, 2018 16:00
Twilight rendezvous
poelove said:
now that\'s poetry! taking a few seconds in time and stretching it to encompass many moments. very well written thoroughly enjoyed my moments reading this.
February 25th, 2018 07:42
poelove said:
now that\'s poetry! taking a few seconds in time and stretching it to encompass many moments. very well written thoroughly enjoyed my moments reading this.
February 25th, 2018 07:42
Always..
poelove said:
absolutely gorgeous both words and that beautiful eye appealing form.
February 25th, 2018 07:37
poelove said:
absolutely gorgeous both words and that beautiful eye appealing form.
February 25th, 2018 07:37
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