Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
My Appreciation Of Loyalty
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains that admiration of a desired being that is unattainable. Lovely
February 28th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains that admiration of a desired being that is unattainable. Lovely
February 28th, 2026 10:02
The Murderer’s Instincts
HerTime said:
Reading a dark book currently. This poem suits it very well. I enjoyed it a lot!
February 25th, 2026 16:22
HerTime said:
Reading a dark book currently. This poem suits it very well. I enjoyed it a lot!
February 25th, 2026 16:22
The Murderer’s Instincts
Friendship said:
This story is so dark it\'s as if your writting a horror story. I hope your day gets better.
February 25th, 2026 12:05
Friendship said:
This story is so dark it\'s as if your writting a horror story. I hope your day gets better.
February 25th, 2026 12:05
The Murderer’s Instincts
sorenbarrett said:
Violent and dark are the feelings I get from this poem with a sense of anger. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Violent and dark are the feelings I get from this poem with a sense of anger. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 08:38
Connected By Love
sorenbarrett said:
A risen angel mourned in tears that are still not dried. Nicely written
February 24th, 2026 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A risen angel mourned in tears that are still not dried. Nicely written
February 24th, 2026 08:01
My Best Friend, My Beautiful Sister
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshingly nice the contrast between the beginning and end with it culminating on a warm note. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshingly nice the contrast between the beginning and end with it culminating on a warm note. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 07:10
Into The Warm Sunset
sorenbarrett said:
A continued sense of loss over a past love. Well done
February 20th, 2026 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
A continued sense of loss over a past love. Well done
February 20th, 2026 08:32
Forever Flying Free
sorenbarrett said:
Angels, loss, sadness and expectations of hope. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
Angels, loss, sadness and expectations of hope. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:16
My Immortal
sorenbarrett said:
Another dream where angels and heaven await. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Another dream where angels and heaven await. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 10:05
You Went To Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the continued mourning of a lost loved one put to poetic words. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the continued mourning of a lost loved one put to poetic words. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:19
The Loss Of My Valentine
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of love lost to death and the pain that remains. Nicely written
February 14th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of love lost to death and the pain that remains. Nicely written
February 14th, 2026 05:03
Cherishing Your Last Words
sorenbarrett said:
A wound that has not healed continues to bleed. Good write
February 13th, 2026 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A wound that has not healed continues to bleed. Good write
February 13th, 2026 07:28
Sweet Precious Presence
sorenbarrett said:
Romance with an angel must be quite special indeed. Nicely done
February 10th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Romance with an angel must be quite special indeed. Nicely done
February 10th, 2026 09:45
My Love For My Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful longing for reunion with a loved one lost pervades this poem. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful longing for reunion with a loved one lost pervades this poem. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 08:43
Behind My Back
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of anger in this poem and a desire for revenge. It is suspicious and threatening but reads well and most easily understood. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of anger in this poem and a desire for revenge. It is suspicious and threatening but reads well and most easily understood. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 07:48
Sending My Angel Kisses
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fantasy contained in this poetic write. Well done
February 5th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fantasy contained in this poetic write. Well done
February 5th, 2026 05:10
My Rough Sea Of Emotions
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a brewing hurricane it seems a tropical low at the moment but soon to be a tropical storm going through the low. Hope it does not hit hurricane force. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a brewing hurricane it seems a tropical low at the moment but soon to be a tropical storm going through the low. Hope it does not hit hurricane force. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 07:35
My Golden, Shiny Ticket
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and pain felt in this poem of loss. A sad write
February 2nd, 2026 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and pain felt in this poem of loss. A sad write
February 2nd, 2026 05:04
Inside My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic conversation with another level. Well written
February 1st, 2026 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic conversation with another level. Well written
February 1st, 2026 09:26
Darling Dear
sorenbarrett said:
Continues sadness and grief over the loss of someone close. Nicely done
January 31st, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Continues sadness and grief over the loss of someone close. Nicely done
January 31st, 2026 10:15
Life Without You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects on a grief that will not abate and a loss not faded by time. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects on a grief that will not abate and a loss not faded by time. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 04:48
My Final Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
A painful write that is dark and sad. Nicely expressed
January 28th, 2026 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A painful write that is dark and sad. Nicely expressed
January 28th, 2026 03:30
You And I
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of felt loss and longing for another. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of felt loss and longing for another. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 07:15
My Dark Lord
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem an entity is presented in a surreal manner as alluring and overpowering. Fanciful it speaks of dreams tied to reality. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem an entity is presented in a surreal manner as alluring and overpowering. Fanciful it speaks of dreams tied to reality. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 07:30
Dancing Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice alternate rhyme in this poem that tells its story well. Nicely done
January 24th, 2026 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice alternate rhyme in this poem that tells its story well. Nicely done
January 24th, 2026 06:16
Always Dreaming About You
sorenbarrett said:
There is not only the feeling of loss but pain in this poem and a looking for help and guidance from unearthly forces. Nicely written
January 23rd, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
There is not only the feeling of loss but pain in this poem and a looking for help and guidance from unearthly forces. Nicely written
January 23rd, 2026 05:16
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