Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Blessed By An Angel
Paul Bell said:
Is the time of the year for the angels to shine down.
December 15th, 2025 11:20
Paul Bell said:
Is the time of the year for the angels to shine down.
December 15th, 2025 11:20
Blessed By An Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and spiritual. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and spiritual. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:05
Christmas Joy And An Abundance Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of Christmas and its associated joys and trappings. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of Christmas and its associated joys and trappings. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 03:52
Wicked Wicked World
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a love by desertion, death, or any other cause is indeed a cause for sadness and anger. Well done
December 9th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a love by desertion, death, or any other cause is indeed a cause for sadness and anger. Well done
December 9th, 2025 04:19
In A Precious Gaze
sorenbarrett said:
A mother whether present of gone on is a memory and treasure. Well written
December 8th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A mother whether present of gone on is a memory and treasure. Well written
December 8th, 2025 06:31
In A Precious Gaze
Friendship said:
The poem conveys a sense of longing and a desire for closeness, as well as a celebration of the beauty found in the beloved.
December 8th, 2025 06:27
Friendship said:
The poem conveys a sense of longing and a desire for closeness, as well as a celebration of the beauty found in the beloved.
December 8th, 2025 06:27
Deep In My Emotions
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of young love or should I say infatuation where passion overtakes the mind. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of young love or should I say infatuation where passion overtakes the mind. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:26
Ashes To Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Like a fire that warms love can be destructive when out of control. And how does one control an emotion? A lovely write.
November 26th, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Like a fire that warms love can be destructive when out of control. And how does one control an emotion? A lovely write.
November 26th, 2025 06:15
Ashes To Ashes
Paul Bell said:
Strange thing love, lifts you up, puts you down.
But intense love, now that can drive you to insanity, as your poem highlights.
Makes you stronger for the next relationship.
November 26th, 2025 05:31
Paul Bell said:
Strange thing love, lifts you up, puts you down.
But intense love, now that can drive you to insanity, as your poem highlights.
Makes you stronger for the next relationship.
November 26th, 2025 05:31
As I Pray For You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of heavenly prayer directed to a loved one lost but also found. Very nice
November 20th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of heavenly prayer directed to a loved one lost but also found. Very nice
November 20th, 2025 08:59
The Silver Welsh, Famous Lion
sorenbarrett said:
Byron Mann? Is this the one being referred to? A lovely tribute. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Byron Mann? Is this the one being referred to? A lovely tribute. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 06:55
What Hurts The Most
sorenbarrett said:
Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a love lost to this earth but not to a heart. Nicely penned
November 12th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a love lost to this earth but not to a heart. Nicely penned
November 12th, 2025 04:32
You Disappear
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love separated by a mortal veil there is sadness in this piece yet happiness reported at feeling the presence. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love separated by a mortal veil there is sadness in this piece yet happiness reported at feeling the presence. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:29
Welcome Back Home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss written in free style it calls out to the one lost and laments not having anyone to depend on or blame any longer. Sad is the tone.
November 5th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss written in free style it calls out to the one lost and laments not having anyone to depend on or blame any longer. Sad is the tone.
November 5th, 2025 03:49
Angel’s Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
Inside God’s Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
The Power Of A Red Rose
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
The Power Of A Red Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
My Favorite Addiction
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
Home In Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
Beautiful Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
Angel’s White Feather
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
Honour In Your Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
I Am Not Wrong
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
Alcohol
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
I Will Kill You
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
I Will Kill You
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
Panic
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
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