Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
I Am Not Wrong
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
Alcohol
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
I Will Kill You
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
I Will Kill You
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
Panic
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
Reflection Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
Killing Hands Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
Death On Horseback
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
Haunted Presences
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
Dreams Can Not Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
You Are So Special
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
With A Cupid’s Arrow
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
Your Deadly Disease
⋆♱𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱♱⋆ said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
⋆♱𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱♱⋆ said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
Your Deadly Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
Infinity Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
These Lyrical Beats Of Yours
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
Without My True Love
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
Broken Hearted Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
Passion For Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
King Of Pop
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
My Brother
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
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