Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels



It’s Christmas
L. B. Mek said:

well, if I wasn\'t looking forward to the festive season before: I am now, lol
thanks for sharing

December 7th, 2020 06:24

It’s Christmas
Jerry Reynolds said:

Really good work enjoyed it

December 6th, 2020 09:52

It’s Christmas
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ Greetings AJON thanks for sharing a very lively Poem telling US what Christmas should all be about !

SNOW ~ We*ve already had some in ESSEX
CHRISTMAS Lights & Trees ~ Ours are LIT !
PRESENTS via AMAZON ~ See our Poem today !
CHRISTMAS FOOD ~ Yummy ~ Bought & Ordered !
PARTIES (in our Bubbles) Fun & Games
CHRISTMAS ~ A time of HOPE for *COVID FREE 2021*

Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !


December 6th, 2020 05:30

It’s Christmas
Maxine Smith said:

A fine write.

December 6th, 2020 05:22

Doors
Goldfinch60 said:

Those doors may be there but you have the keys to unlock them all and soar into your wonderful life.

Andy

February 16th, 2020 01:01

Doors
Unsub said:

Amazing rhythm & flow to compliment the theme.

Perfectly delivered,

Unsub.

February 15th, 2020 12:20

Tinned Tomatoes
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI AJON ~ Brian here. Love the Title (very Andy Warhol !) but not the content ! TINNED TOMATOES are a fave of mine for STEWS & SOUPS ! However reading you *angry* poem I am ashamed to be a Man ~ but I like your analogy ! treating precious relationships like TINNED TOMATOES ! Cooked - Burnt - Boiled and then consigned to the SHELF in a TIN ~ GOD FORBID ! This is a sad Poem but not without resolve. I have never treated My Ladies like that and I never will ! I trust & pray that you wont ever be treated like that again in the future ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙

February 12th, 2020 06:41

Tinned Tomatoes
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong emotive write.

Andy

February 12th, 2020 03:10

Because Of You
Goldfinch60 said:

That pain can be released in time and your words will help to overcome that pain. Good emotive write.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 01:17

T.V.
Goldfinch60 said:

I believe that in life 99% of people are good but all we ever hear about I’d the 1% that are bad.

Andy.

February 9th, 2020 14:51

ain’t that girl
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Hi Ajon - Thanks for sharing this Poem it sure puts you into perspective. Your poem has great structure ! Three neat rhythmic quatrians with a consistent Rhyme pattern abab etc - excellent ! The content amplifies the title. V 1. & V 2. sure tells us what you ain*t ! Posh - Emotional - A Reck - Crying - Ingenious (with plan B !) - Organised - Supermodel ! Great list sounds a bit like Im NOT too - but I am organised - Physiotherapists have to be ! V 3. informs us what you really are: Stubborn & Full of Heart - Loving & Caring ~ Strong & Reliable - Open& Caring - WOW 8 great Traits an achievement @ 27. Im getting Married in April (im 31) to Brian (36) and they are just the eight Traits which will make me a great Wife. It pays to be STUBBORN @ times. Great POEM - Thanks !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check our site - Thanks A & B !

February 6th, 2020 18:00

You Will Mend My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will be found in Heaven but may love be with you sooner and your heart becomes one piece once more .

Andy

February 5th, 2020 02:50

Mr. Perfect
Goldfinch60 said:

Once perfection is found what is there left to work towards.

February 4th, 2020 05:55

You Are Not Alone
Ivory said:

So many different emotions you covey in this piece,beautifully expressed.

February 1st, 2020 19:53

You Are Not Alone
Unsub said:

Ajon,

mature poem from a mature head.

Enjoyed your ability to craft with such emotion.

Good stuff.

Unsub.

February 1st, 2020 08:07

Sick To My Soul
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, can\'t tell if this was to the whole world or just one but it felt unmissable!

Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

January 31st, 2020 02:46

Winter’s Poem
Maxine Smith said:

Reminds me of Christmas.

A fine write.

January 28th, 2020 15:26

Never Be The Same
Maxine Smith said:

Take control back!! Here here to that.
Nicely done.

May 13th, 2018 13:08

I Am Free
onepauly said:

is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in nature. at least. if it is not another person I wish you all the best. if I am ignorant, please forgive me.

May 5th, 2018 19:28

Lost In Her Made-Up World
onepauly said:

we all need attention love.

May 4th, 2018 20:04

Lost In Her Made-Up World
Maxine Smith said:

Such a sad write, there is always hope in the dark moments, we just have to fight to see them.
Beautifully written.

May 4th, 2018 15:51

Lost In Her Made-Up World
Antoinette said:

Such a beautiful poem. I found it painfully relateable and so I almost brought me to teas as I read it in a low and mellow voice. Really good, the repetition of \'fake\' had more impact than you think.

May 4th, 2018 14:14

Fragile as a Little Shell
Cinderella_Pixie said:

Beautifully written, just know that anything broken can be fixed. It won\'t be the same but it will be whole again.

May 2nd, 2018 15:51

Fragile as a Little Shell
Maxine Smith said:

This is a sad little write, everyone is special and deserves not to be trod on.
We are all breakable BUT once we break, we have the magical power to heal ourselves. To heal stronger than before.
Very beautifully done.

May 2nd, 2018 14:18

Fuck You
onepauly said:

FUCK YOU TOO
HA! HA!
GREAT POEM.
ITS EASY TO UNDERSTAND.

May 1st, 2018 17:32

13 Pink Elephants
LittleRedPoet said:

This was very interesting. XD

April 30th, 2018 09:33

As I Lay Upon The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, may your journey with the clouds always be wondrous.

April 30th, 2018 00:51

As I Lay Upon The Clouds
onepauly said:

sounds like paradise.

April 29th, 2018 16:31

As I Lay Upon The Clouds
Maxine Smith said:

Very beautiful, set the scene just perfectly. Leaving me daydreaming as I lay upon the clouds.

April 29th, 2018 13:37

A Journey Of A Tear Drop
onepauly said:

excellent!
I enjoyed this one.
keep writing

April 28th, 2018 20:55

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