Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
The Loudest Non-Verbal
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
Just Speak To Me
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
My Crazy Cat, Zackary
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
We Must Fight To Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
Daffodils Of Yellow
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
The Tree That Grieves
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
Autumn’s Scents
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
Your Presence
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
My Sweet, Darling You
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
My Sweet, Darling You
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Without A Goodbye
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Diary Of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
Valentine’s Day
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of how a day to celebrate Love is not the case for everyone, for some it is a painful reminder that there true love has gone. Well expressed emotion in this write
February 13th, 2025 12:35
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of how a day to celebrate Love is not the case for everyone, for some it is a painful reminder that there true love has gone. Well expressed emotion in this write
February 13th, 2025 12:35
Gentle But A Strong Touch
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
The Holy Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
My Ghost Wedding
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Depths Of The Galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
Never Fall In Love Again
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Gut Punch
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Butterflies
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Shooting Star
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
My Involuntary Movements
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem gives deepest regrets,
Stephen Hawking comes to my mind,
But, he lived with lots of instruments,
He was an atheist naturally in my view,
I thought they would give him Nobel,
Perfect description of a physical ailment,
Nicely written, it touches the heart,
All the best, write more and more !
May 28th, 2024 05:19
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem gives deepest regrets,
Stephen Hawking comes to my mind,
But, he lived with lots of instruments,
He was an atheist naturally in my view,
I thought they would give him Nobel,
Perfect description of a physical ailment,
Nicely written, it touches the heart,
All the best, write more and more !
May 28th, 2024 05:19
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