Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Not As One, But As Two
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one looks to their angels to save them from depression. Well worded
January 7th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one looks to their angels to save them from depression. Well worded
January 7th, 2026 03:56
Without My Soulmate
sorenbarrett said:
Suffering and pain at feeling left behind and alone comes through in this poem. There is a pleading in its words. Sad
January 4th, 2026 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Suffering and pain at feeling left behind and alone comes through in this poem. There is a pleading in its words. Sad
January 4th, 2026 12:40
Without My Soulmate
Friendship said:
I must admit that this writing is quite intriguing, although somewhat perplexing, and I\'m uncertain about how to retract. Yet it was interesting, good read.
January 4th, 2026 10:18
Friendship said:
I must admit that this writing is quite intriguing, although somewhat perplexing, and I\'m uncertain about how to retract. Yet it was interesting, good read.
January 4th, 2026 10:18
Act Your Shoe Size
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Curiously, today is my birthday, and the poem couldn’t have come at a better time.
January 3rd, 2026 08:24
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Curiously, today is my birthday, and the poem couldn’t have come at a better time.
January 3rd, 2026 08:24
Act Your Shoe Size
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that reveals a child like innocence. Lovely
January 3rd, 2026 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that reveals a child like innocence. Lovely
January 3rd, 2026 07:30
The Insanity Of Our Minds
Katie B. said:
Bold, intriguing read. well written.
December 31st, 2025 02:13
Katie B. said:
Bold, intriguing read. well written.
December 31st, 2025 02:13
Our Belief In Angels
sorenbarrett said:
We all rely upon our beliefs what ever they are. Here it is an angel and when such relieves the pain and gives one hope then so much the better. A poem well written
December 29th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
We all rely upon our beliefs what ever they are. Here it is an angel and when such relieves the pain and gives one hope then so much the better. A poem well written
December 29th, 2025 04:30
Our Belief In Angels
Katie B. said:
Lovely. Well done. Pleasant read. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
December 29th, 2025 01:32
Katie B. said:
Lovely. Well done. Pleasant read. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
December 29th, 2025 01:32
A Poisonous Heartbreak
sorenbarrett said:
I hear loss and pain in this poem that cries out for reunion. It is sad when loss is the primary focus in a world that contains so much more. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
I hear loss and pain in this poem that cries out for reunion. It is sad when loss is the primary focus in a world that contains so much more. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:42
My Own Special Day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to a sister about sisterly love. Nicely done
December 25th, 2025 21:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to a sister about sisterly love. Nicely done
December 25th, 2025 21:36
Merry Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
And a Merry Christmas to you as well a beautiful poem of this time of year
December 24th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
And a Merry Christmas to you as well a beautiful poem of this time of year
December 24th, 2025 08:48
My Invisible Agony
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of aloneness in this poem, that no one else can feel your pain, that no one understands, that no one cares, and that one is blown off with a prescription or a phone call. A hard read where there is no feeling of hope and no future reprieve in sight. One must ask how does one avoid depression and bitterness. Very well written
December 21st, 2025 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of aloneness in this poem, that no one else can feel your pain, that no one understands, that no one cares, and that one is blown off with a prescription or a phone call. A hard read where there is no feeling of hope and no future reprieve in sight. One must ask how does one avoid depression and bitterness. Very well written
December 21st, 2025 14:25
The Glow Of Angel’s Magic
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope and faith that in this season angels will receive our thanks and give us those things needed. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope and faith that in this season angels will receive our thanks and give us those things needed. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:09
Happy Birthday To My Big Sister
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice birthday greeting and wish in poetic form
December 17th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice birthday greeting and wish in poetic form
December 17th, 2025 08:47
Happy Birthday To My Big Sister
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see sisters appreciating each other, usually they\'re clashing.
Hope it\'s chocolate cake.
December 17th, 2025 07:58
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see sisters appreciating each other, usually they\'re clashing.
Hope it\'s chocolate cake.
December 17th, 2025 07:58
Christmas Endearment
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal picture is painted here in words so clear of this time of year. Well done it almost seems like A Christmas Carrol
December 16th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal picture is painted here in words so clear of this time of year. Well done it almost seems like A Christmas Carrol
December 16th, 2025 03:48
Blessed By An Angel
Paul Bell said:
Is the time of the year for the angels to shine down.
December 15th, 2025 11:20
Paul Bell said:
Is the time of the year for the angels to shine down.
December 15th, 2025 11:20
Blessed By An Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and spiritual. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and spiritual. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:05
Christmas Joy And An Abundance Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of Christmas and its associated joys and trappings. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of Christmas and its associated joys and trappings. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 03:52
Wicked Wicked World
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a love by desertion, death, or any other cause is indeed a cause for sadness and anger. Well done
December 9th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a love by desertion, death, or any other cause is indeed a cause for sadness and anger. Well done
December 9th, 2025 04:19
In A Precious Gaze
sorenbarrett said:
A mother whether present of gone on is a memory and treasure. Well written
December 8th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A mother whether present of gone on is a memory and treasure. Well written
December 8th, 2025 06:31
In A Precious Gaze
Friendship said:
The poem conveys a sense of longing and a desire for closeness, as well as a celebration of the beauty found in the beloved.
December 8th, 2025 06:27
Friendship said:
The poem conveys a sense of longing and a desire for closeness, as well as a celebration of the beauty found in the beloved.
December 8th, 2025 06:27
Deep In My Emotions
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of young love or should I say infatuation where passion overtakes the mind. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of young love or should I say infatuation where passion overtakes the mind. Well written
November 27th, 2025 04:26
Ashes To Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Like a fire that warms love can be destructive when out of control. And how does one control an emotion? A lovely write.
November 26th, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Like a fire that warms love can be destructive when out of control. And how does one control an emotion? A lovely write.
November 26th, 2025 06:15
Ashes To Ashes
Paul Bell said:
Strange thing love, lifts you up, puts you down.
But intense love, now that can drive you to insanity, as your poem highlights.
Makes you stronger for the next relationship.
November 26th, 2025 05:31
Paul Bell said:
Strange thing love, lifts you up, puts you down.
But intense love, now that can drive you to insanity, as your poem highlights.
Makes you stronger for the next relationship.
November 26th, 2025 05:31
As I Pray For You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of heavenly prayer directed to a loved one lost but also found. Very nice
November 20th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of heavenly prayer directed to a loved one lost but also found. Very nice
November 20th, 2025 08:59
The Silver Welsh, Famous Lion
sorenbarrett said:
Byron Mann? Is this the one being referred to? A lovely tribute. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Byron Mann? Is this the one being referred to? A lovely tribute. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 06:55
What Hurts The Most
sorenbarrett said:
Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a love lost to this earth but not to a heart. Nicely penned
November 12th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a love lost to this earth but not to a heart. Nicely penned
November 12th, 2025 04:32
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