Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Death On Horseback
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
Haunted Presences
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
Dreams Can Not Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
You Are So Special
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
With A Cupid’s Arrow
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
Your Deadly Disease
❦ 𝔥𝔞𝔶𝔩𝔢𝔦𝔤𝔥 ❦ said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
❦ 𝔥𝔞𝔶𝔩𝔢𝔦𝔤𝔥 ❦ said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
Your Deadly Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
Infinity Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
These Lyrical Beats Of Yours
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
Without My True Love
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
Broken Hearted Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
Passion For Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
King Of Pop
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
My Brother
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
My Crip, Spastic The Uromastyx
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious message, our heart chooses to and what to live, then its our responsibility to nurture and look after that love, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious message, our heart chooses to and what to live, then its our responsibility to nurture and look after that love, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 05:40
My Crip, Spastic The Uromastyx
sorenbarrett said:
The bonds we make with those we love and we do not choose whom we love our heart does. A lovely write I too have had special bods with animals from dogs to octopus and this poem reminds me of an Iguana we had that we let go in our back yard and lived there for years tormenting the dog and eating the hibiscus flowers until a hurricane came and he moved on. A fun read
March 23rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
The bonds we make with those we love and we do not choose whom we love our heart does. A lovely write I too have had special bods with animals from dogs to octopus and this poem reminds me of an Iguana we had that we let go in our back yard and lived there for years tormenting the dog and eating the hibiscus flowers until a hurricane came and he moved on. A fun read
March 23rd, 2025 04:43
Daddy….
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not forgotten. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not forgotten. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 09:24
Morning’s Sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
A horrible plight, pain is what I fear most either physical or emotional. This poem gives a sense of sadness and sorrow for anyone that has to go through it.
March 14th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A horrible plight, pain is what I fear most either physical or emotional. This poem gives a sense of sadness and sorrow for anyone that has to go through it.
March 14th, 2025 12:31
This Is Me
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
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