Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Welcome Back Home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss written in free style it calls out to the one lost and laments not having anyone to depend on or blame any longer. Sad is the tone.
November 5th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss written in free style it calls out to the one lost and laments not having anyone to depend on or blame any longer. Sad is the tone.
November 5th, 2025 03:49
Angel’s Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
Inside God’s Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
The Power Of A Red Rose
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
The Power Of A Red Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
My Favorite Addiction
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
Home In Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
Beautiful Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
Angel’s White Feather
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
Honour In Your Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
I Am Not Wrong
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
Alcohol
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
I Will Kill You
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
I Will Kill You
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
Panic
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
Reflection Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
Killing Hands Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
Death On Horseback
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
Haunted Presences
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
Dreams Can Not Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
You Are So Special
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
With A Cupid’s Arrow
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
Your Deadly Disease
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
Your Deadly Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
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