Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Gentle But A Strong Touch
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
The Holy Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
My Ghost Wedding
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Depths Of The Galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
Never Fall In Love Again
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Gut Punch
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Butterflies
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Shooting Star
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
My Involuntary Movements
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem gives deepest regrets,
Stephen Hawking comes to my mind,
But, he lived with lots of instruments,
He was an atheist naturally in my view,
I thought they would give him Nobel,
Perfect description of a physical ailment,
Nicely written, it touches the heart,
All the best, write more and more !
May 28th, 2024 05:19
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem gives deepest regrets,
Stephen Hawking comes to my mind,
But, he lived with lots of instruments,
He was an atheist naturally in my view,
I thought they would give him Nobel,
Perfect description of a physical ailment,
Nicely written, it touches the heart,
All the best, write more and more !
May 28th, 2024 05:19
Our Love Rhythm
Poetic Dan said:
The rawness of love so wonderfully expressed! Love is one of two things I things all of us needed! The other is to authenticity. Of that this definitely was.
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
May 19th, 2024 02:51
Poetic Dan said:
The rawness of love so wonderfully expressed! Love is one of two things I things all of us needed! The other is to authenticity. Of that this definitely was.
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
May 19th, 2024 02:51
The Holy Above
orchidee said:
I never knew I did all these things when I was with ya! I must have forgot. lol.
Note to self: Nooooo, it don\'t mean you! heehee.
May 13th, 2024 07:49
orchidee said:
I never knew I did all these things when I was with ya! I must have forgot. lol.
Note to self: Nooooo, it don\'t mean you! heehee.
May 13th, 2024 07:49
To The Above
peto said:
The sense of loss is so strong
Your love shines through
I doubt very much your beloved would like you holding that knife though
Lovely tribute
You will see them soon enough
April 29th, 2024 09:45
peto said:
The sense of loss is so strong
Your love shines through
I doubt very much your beloved would like you holding that knife though
Lovely tribute
You will see them soon enough
April 29th, 2024 09:45
I Miss You
peto said:
This almost brought me to tears
Particularly the 4th verse
Lovely tribute
April 28th, 2024 11:22
peto said:
This almost brought me to tears
Particularly the 4th verse
Lovely tribute
April 28th, 2024 11:22
My Existence
RSM0812 said:
Your poem sounds really negative. I hope whoever you are writing about feels nothing but love and possitivety.
April 17th, 2024 10:40
RSM0812 said:
Your poem sounds really negative. I hope whoever you are writing about feels nothing but love and possitivety.
April 17th, 2024 10:40
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