Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Inside The Raging Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Loss forms part of life and we all will experience it at times. We must move on. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
Loss forms part of life and we all will experience it at times. We must move on. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:33
The Sound Of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write incorporating silence.
March 22nd, 2026 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write incorporating silence.
March 22nd, 2026 15:45
I Am Feeling So Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A loss fixed in the mind a pain that can not be forgotten. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A loss fixed in the mind a pain that can not be forgotten. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:39
Please Come Back To Me
Official 1SP said:
Your piece carries a quiet ache that settles in the chest long after the reading ends. There’s a softness in the way you let the hurt speak, but also a strength in how honestly you name it. The imagery feels lived‑in, like someone standing in the middle of their own storm and still choosing to articulate the sky. Beautifully expressed—raw, human, and deeply felt.
March 18th, 2026 02:33
Official 1SP said:
Your piece carries a quiet ache that settles in the chest long after the reading ends. There’s a softness in the way you let the hurt speak, but also a strength in how honestly you name it. The imagery feels lived‑in, like someone standing in the middle of their own storm and still choosing to articulate the sky. Beautifully expressed—raw, human, and deeply felt.
March 18th, 2026 02:33
I Am Feeling So Alive
Official 1SP said:
Your devotion pours through every line with a kind of fearless sincerity. It reads like someone speaking straight from the heart without filters, letting admiration, gratitude, and longing spill into one continuous breath. There’s an innocence in the way you celebrate their voice, and a boldness in how openly you claim the joy they bring into your life. It’s rare to see love expressed with this much honesty—unpolished, unguarded, and completely alive.
March 18th, 2026 02:32
Official 1SP said:
Your devotion pours through every line with a kind of fearless sincerity. It reads like someone speaking straight from the heart without filters, letting admiration, gratitude, and longing spill into one continuous breath. There’s an innocence in the way you celebrate their voice, and a boldness in how openly you claim the joy they bring into your life. It’s rare to see love expressed with this much honesty—unpolished, unguarded, and completely alive.
March 18th, 2026 02:32
Please Come Back To Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that goes unmet in this poem of eternal hope.
March 17th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that goes unmet in this poem of eternal hope.
March 17th, 2026 04:59
My Vivid Memories
sorenbarrett said:
Here pain is reinforced and almost treasured where the past is longed for and the future holds the only promise of peace. Well done
March 16th, 2026 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Here pain is reinforced and almost treasured where the past is longed for and the future holds the only promise of peace. Well done
March 16th, 2026 07:23
The Angel Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
I again hear the feeling of loss in this poem and it echoes without end
March 14th, 2026 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
I again hear the feeling of loss in this poem and it echoes without end
March 14th, 2026 09:55
I Will Always Love You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reveals a pining for a love lost to death and a longing for reunion. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reveals a pining for a love lost to death and a longing for reunion. Nicely written
March 12th, 2026 05:58
A Blessing In Disguise
sorenbarrett said:
Here the reoccurring thought of a lost love fills the mind and poem. Nicely said
March 11th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here the reoccurring thought of a lost love fills the mind and poem. Nicely said
March 11th, 2026 03:49
We Belong To Each Other
sorenbarrett said:
The poem exudes lingering longing for the lost and a refusal to loosen one\'s grip on what was. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
The poem exudes lingering longing for the lost and a refusal to loosen one\'s grip on what was. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 06:11
Halo Of Golden Butterflies
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic love portrayed in this poem. Well done
March 5th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic love portrayed in this poem. Well done
March 5th, 2026 05:02
Just Please Give Me A Sign
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for signs to confirm our beliefs, we are such cynics in the end. Well written
March 4th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for signs to confirm our beliefs, we are such cynics in the end. Well written
March 4th, 2026 04:53
My True Love, Flown Back Into Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
This poem highlights the assent of a love deemed angel. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem highlights the assent of a love deemed angel. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 04:39
Antidote For My Heartbreak
sorenbarrett said:
Here the illness is in question as to whether it is physical of emotional due to loss and grief. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Here the illness is in question as to whether it is physical of emotional due to loss and grief. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 10:08
My Appreciation Of Loyalty
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains that admiration of a desired being that is unattainable. Lovely
February 28th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains that admiration of a desired being that is unattainable. Lovely
February 28th, 2026 10:02
The Murderer’s Instincts
HerTime said:
Reading a dark book currently. This poem suits it very well. I enjoyed it a lot!
February 25th, 2026 16:22
HerTime said:
Reading a dark book currently. This poem suits it very well. I enjoyed it a lot!
February 25th, 2026 16:22
The Murderer’s Instincts
Friendship said:
This story is so dark it\'s as if your writting a horror story. I hope your day gets better.
February 25th, 2026 12:05
Friendship said:
This story is so dark it\'s as if your writting a horror story. I hope your day gets better.
February 25th, 2026 12:05
The Murderer’s Instincts
sorenbarrett said:
Violent and dark are the feelings I get from this poem with a sense of anger. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Violent and dark are the feelings I get from this poem with a sense of anger. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 08:38
Connected By Love
sorenbarrett said:
A risen angel mourned in tears that are still not dried. Nicely written
February 24th, 2026 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A risen angel mourned in tears that are still not dried. Nicely written
February 24th, 2026 08:01
My Best Friend, My Beautiful Sister
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshingly nice the contrast between the beginning and end with it culminating on a warm note. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshingly nice the contrast between the beginning and end with it culminating on a warm note. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 07:10
Into The Warm Sunset
sorenbarrett said:
A continued sense of loss over a past love. Well done
February 20th, 2026 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
A continued sense of loss over a past love. Well done
February 20th, 2026 08:32
Forever Flying Free
sorenbarrett said:
Angels, loss, sadness and expectations of hope. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
Angels, loss, sadness and expectations of hope. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:16
My Immortal
sorenbarrett said:
Another dream where angels and heaven await. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Another dream where angels and heaven await. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 10:05
You Went To Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the continued mourning of a lost loved one put to poetic words. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the continued mourning of a lost loved one put to poetic words. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:19
The Loss Of My Valentine
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of love lost to death and the pain that remains. Nicely written
February 14th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of love lost to death and the pain that remains. Nicely written
February 14th, 2026 05:03
Cherishing Your Last Words
sorenbarrett said:
A wound that has not healed continues to bleed. Good write
February 13th, 2026 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A wound that has not healed continues to bleed. Good write
February 13th, 2026 07:28
Sweet Precious Presence
sorenbarrett said:
Romance with an angel must be quite special indeed. Nicely done
February 10th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Romance with an angel must be quite special indeed. Nicely done
February 10th, 2026 09:45
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