Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels



I Am A Triangle
yellowrose said:

brilliant poem :-) the title grabbed my attention , interesting idea.. to describe yourself as a triangle , hence different from other shapes

April 24th, 2018 15:59

Freedom
Maxine Smith said:

Fine write. We all seek freedom from within. When you find it, you won’t need to pay any mind to watch others suffer, for you will be free and that’s all you need.

April 17th, 2018 15:05

Freedom
LAWLIET said:

Great structure

April 17th, 2018 14:28

Under The Covers
Maxine Smith said:

A lovely write.

April 11th, 2018 15:57

My Heart Spider
yellowrose said:

wow .. brilliant poem ! i love how you have used the idea of a spiders web to describe your bubble feeling , your barrier . and yes, hurt can make us defend ourselves , but nobodys heart should ever turn cold .. atleast not forever lol . i enjoyed reading this , i love the ideas throughout

March 12th, 2018 14:58

My Heart Spider
marquisha said:

Immortal Bubble! I love it......

March 12th, 2018 11:47

Just Smile
Resa71 said:

So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)

March 10th, 2018 14:00

Highway Of Life
Lorna said:

Your poems are your wheels...........

March 9th, 2018 07:07

Your Halo Light
marlenawood said:

Enjoyed this beautiful piece throughly ❤️

March 7th, 2018 10:15

Blanket Of Bluebells
Lorna said:

Lovely - and as a side note, i would bounce on the bed again if I could but now i would be the one paying for the damage if the ceiling fell down below! So better not - I\'ll read your poem instead.

March 4th, 2018 06:37

Blanket Of Bluebells
yellowrose said:

really lovely :-) enjoyed reading this .. such lovely words used throughout , makes for a very pleasant read

March 3rd, 2018 18:26

Miscommunication
Mene said:

This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a single thing about the victim of their unfair outlooks cast upon them. So we must stand proud of who we are despite the road-blocks. I really enjoyed reading this.

February 26th, 2018 15:43

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