Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
This Is Me
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
The Loudest Non-Verbal
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
Just Speak To Me
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
My Crazy Cat, Zackary
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
We Must Fight To Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
Daffodils Of Yellow
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
The Tree That Grieves
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
Autumn’s Scents
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
Your Presence
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
My Sweet, Darling You
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
My Sweet, Darling You
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Without A Goodbye
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Diary Of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
Valentine’s Day
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of how a day to celebrate Love is not the case for everyone, for some it is a painful reminder that there true love has gone. Well expressed emotion in this write
February 13th, 2025 12:35
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of how a day to celebrate Love is not the case for everyone, for some it is a painful reminder that there true love has gone. Well expressed emotion in this write
February 13th, 2025 12:35
Gentle But A Strong Touch
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 04:45
The Holy Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A dialectic poem of opposites. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 06:47
My Ghost Wedding
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching piece of writing dealing with painful grief and the loss of a much loved one, written with care
January 27th, 2025 03:04
Depths Of The Galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor for faith and belief. It rings with that basic human need for affiliation, recognition, a higher power and belief. Is this where God began?
January 26th, 2025 06:34
Never Fall In Love Again
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Poetic Licence said:
Someone struggling over the loss and breakdown of a loving relationship, hopefully over it will get easier, well written
January 24th, 2025 07:31
Gut Punch
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional read of someone coming to terms with the loss of a loved one, well expressed
January 22nd, 2025 22:20
Butterflies
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful dedication to a missed loved one, tenderly written
January 2nd, 2025 04:55
Shooting Star
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 poem,
heart touching and
artfully penned..
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed
my friend!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 9th, 2024 15:28
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