Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
I Am Free
onepauly said:
is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in nature. at least. if it is not another person I wish you all the best. if I am ignorant, please forgive me.
May 5th, 2018 19:28
onepauly said:
is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in nature. at least. if it is not another person I wish you all the best. if I am ignorant, please forgive me.
May 5th, 2018 19:28
Lost In Her Made-Up World
Antoinette said:
Such a beautiful poem. I found it painfully relateable and so I almost brought me to teas as I read it in a low and mellow voice. Really good, the repetition of \'fake\' had more impact than you think.
May 4th, 2018 14:14
Antoinette said:
Such a beautiful poem. I found it painfully relateable and so I almost brought me to teas as I read it in a low and mellow voice. Really good, the repetition of \'fake\' had more impact than you think.
May 4th, 2018 14:14
Fragile as a Little Shell
Cinderella_Pixie said:
Beautifully written, just know that anything broken can be fixed. It won\'t be the same but it will be whole again.
May 2nd, 2018 15:51
Cinderella_Pixie said:
Beautifully written, just know that anything broken can be fixed. It won\'t be the same but it will be whole again.
May 2nd, 2018 15:51
As I Lay Upon The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your journey with the clouds always be wondrous.
April 30th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your journey with the clouds always be wondrous.
April 30th, 2018 00:51
A Journey Of A Tear Drop
onepauly said:
excellent!
I enjoyed this one.
keep writing
April 28th, 2018 20:55
onepauly said:
excellent!
I enjoyed this one.
keep writing
April 28th, 2018 20:55
I Am A Triangle
Caring dove said:
brilliant poem :-) the title grabbed my attention , interesting idea.. to describe yourself as a triangle , hence different from other shapes
April 24th, 2018 15:59
Caring dove said:
brilliant poem :-) the title grabbed my attention , interesting idea.. to describe yourself as a triangle , hence different from other shapes
April 24th, 2018 15:59
My Heart Spider
Caring dove said:
wow .. brilliant poem ! i love how you have used the idea of a spiders web to describe your bubble feeling , your barrier . and yes, hurt can make us defend ourselves , but nobodys heart should ever turn cold .. atleast not forever lol . i enjoyed reading this , i love the ideas throughout
March 12th, 2018 14:58
Caring dove said:
wow .. brilliant poem ! i love how you have used the idea of a spiders web to describe your bubble feeling , your barrier . and yes, hurt can make us defend ourselves , but nobodys heart should ever turn cold .. atleast not forever lol . i enjoyed reading this , i love the ideas throughout
March 12th, 2018 14:58
Just Smile
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
Blanket Of Bluebells
Lorna said:
Lovely - and as a side note, i would bounce on the bed again if I could but now i would be the one paying for the damage if the ceiling fell down below! So better not - I\'ll read your poem instead.
March 4th, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Lovely - and as a side note, i would bounce on the bed again if I could but now i would be the one paying for the damage if the ceiling fell down below! So better not - I\'ll read your poem instead.
March 4th, 2018 06:37
Blanket Of Bluebells
Caring dove said:
really lovely :-) enjoyed reading this .. such lovely words used throughout , makes for a very pleasant read
March 3rd, 2018 18:26
Caring dove said:
really lovely :-) enjoyed reading this .. such lovely words used throughout , makes for a very pleasant read
March 3rd, 2018 18:26
Miscommunication
swyndell said:
This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a single thing about the victim of their unfair outlooks cast upon them. So we must stand proud of who we are despite the road-blocks. I really enjoyed reading this.
February 26th, 2018 15:43
swyndell said:
This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a single thing about the victim of their unfair outlooks cast upon them. So we must stand proud of who we are despite the road-blocks. I really enjoyed reading this.
February 26th, 2018 15:43
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