Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
It’s Christmas
L. B. Mek said:
well, if I wasn\'t looking forward to the festive season before: I am now, lol
thanks for sharing
December 7th, 2020 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
well, if I wasn\'t looking forward to the festive season before: I am now, lol
thanks for sharing
December 7th, 2020 06:24
It’s Christmas
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Greetings AJON thanks for sharing a very lively Poem telling US what Christmas should all be about !
SNOW ~ We*ve already had some in ESSEX
CHRISTMAS Lights & Trees ~ Ours are LIT !
PRESENTS via AMAZON ~ See our Poem today !
CHRISTMAS FOOD ~ Yummy ~ Bought & Ordered !
PARTIES (in our Bubbles) Fun & Games
CHRISTMAS ~ A time of HOPE for *COVID FREE 2021*
Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 6th, 2020 05:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Greetings AJON thanks for sharing a very lively Poem telling US what Christmas should all be about !
SNOW ~ We*ve already had some in ESSEX
CHRISTMAS Lights & Trees ~ Ours are LIT !
PRESENTS via AMAZON ~ See our Poem today !
CHRISTMAS FOOD ~ Yummy ~ Bought & Ordered !
PARTIES (in our Bubbles) Fun & Games
CHRISTMAS ~ A time of HOPE for *COVID FREE 2021*
Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 6th, 2020 05:30
Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors may be there but you have the keys to unlock them all and soar into your wonderful life.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors may be there but you have the keys to unlock them all and soar into your wonderful life.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:01
Tinned Tomatoes
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AJON ~ Brian here. Love the Title (very Andy Warhol !) but not the content ! TINNED TOMATOES are a fave of mine for STEWS & SOUPS ! However reading you *angry* poem I am ashamed to be a Man ~ but I like your analogy ! treating precious relationships like TINNED TOMATOES ! Cooked - Burnt - Boiled and then consigned to the SHELF in a TIN ~ GOD FORBID ! This is a sad Poem but not without resolve. I have never treated My Ladies like that and I never will ! I trust & pray that you wont ever be treated like that again in the future ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
February 12th, 2020 06:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AJON ~ Brian here. Love the Title (very Andy Warhol !) but not the content ! TINNED TOMATOES are a fave of mine for STEWS & SOUPS ! However reading you *angry* poem I am ashamed to be a Man ~ but I like your analogy ! treating precious relationships like TINNED TOMATOES ! Cooked - Burnt - Boiled and then consigned to the SHELF in a TIN ~ GOD FORBID ! This is a sad Poem but not without resolve. I have never treated My Ladies like that and I never will ! I trust & pray that you wont ever be treated like that again in the future ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
February 12th, 2020 06:41
Because Of You
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain can be released in time and your words will help to overcome that pain. Good emotive write.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain can be released in time and your words will help to overcome that pain. Good emotive write.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:17
T.V.
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that in life 99% of people are good but all we ever hear about I’d the 1% that are bad.
Andy.
February 9th, 2020 14:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I believe that in life 99% of people are good but all we ever hear about I’d the 1% that are bad.
Andy.
February 9th, 2020 14:51
ain’t that girl
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Ajon - Thanks for sharing this Poem it sure puts you into perspective. Your poem has great structure ! Three neat rhythmic quatrians with a consistent Rhyme pattern abab etc - excellent ! The content amplifies the title. V 1. & V 2. sure tells us what you ain*t ! Posh - Emotional - A Reck - Crying - Ingenious (with plan B !) - Organised - Supermodel ! Great list sounds a bit like Im NOT too - but I am organised - Physiotherapists have to be ! V 3. informs us what you really are: Stubborn & Full of Heart - Loving & Caring ~ Strong & Reliable - Open& Caring - WOW 8 great Traits an achievement @ 27. Im getting Married in April (im 31) to Brian (36) and they are just the eight Traits which will make me a great Wife. It pays to be STUBBORN @ times. Great POEM - Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check our site - Thanks A & B !
February 6th, 2020 18:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Ajon - Thanks for sharing this Poem it sure puts you into perspective. Your poem has great structure ! Three neat rhythmic quatrians with a consistent Rhyme pattern abab etc - excellent ! The content amplifies the title. V 1. & V 2. sure tells us what you ain*t ! Posh - Emotional - A Reck - Crying - Ingenious (with plan B !) - Organised - Supermodel ! Great list sounds a bit like Im NOT too - but I am organised - Physiotherapists have to be ! V 3. informs us what you really are: Stubborn & Full of Heart - Loving & Caring ~ Strong & Reliable - Open& Caring - WOW 8 great Traits an achievement @ 27. Im getting Married in April (im 31) to Brian (36) and they are just the eight Traits which will make me a great Wife. It pays to be STUBBORN @ times. Great POEM - Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check our site - Thanks A & B !
February 6th, 2020 18:00
You Will Mend My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be found in Heaven but may love be with you sooner and your heart becomes one piece once more .
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be found in Heaven but may love be with you sooner and your heart becomes one piece once more .
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:50
Mr. Perfect
Goldfinch60 said:
Once perfection is found what is there left to work towards.
February 4th, 2020 05:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Once perfection is found what is there left to work towards.
February 4th, 2020 05:55
You Are Not Alone
Ivory said:
So many different emotions you covey in this piece,beautifully expressed.
February 1st, 2020 19:53
Ivory said:
So many different emotions you covey in this piece,beautifully expressed.
February 1st, 2020 19:53
Sick To My Soul
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, can\'t tell if this was to the whole world or just one but it felt unmissable!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
January 31st, 2020 02:46
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, can\'t tell if this was to the whole world or just one but it felt unmissable!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
January 31st, 2020 02:46
I Am Free
onepauly said:
is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in nature. at least. if it is not another person I wish you all the best. if I am ignorant, please forgive me.
May 5th, 2018 19:28
onepauly said:
is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in nature. at least. if it is not another person I wish you all the best. if I am ignorant, please forgive me.
May 5th, 2018 19:28
Lost In Her Made-Up World
Antoinette said:
Such a beautiful poem. I found it painfully relateable and so I almost brought me to teas as I read it in a low and mellow voice. Really good, the repetition of \'fake\' had more impact than you think.
May 4th, 2018 14:14
Antoinette said:
Such a beautiful poem. I found it painfully relateable and so I almost brought me to teas as I read it in a low and mellow voice. Really good, the repetition of \'fake\' had more impact than you think.
May 4th, 2018 14:14
Fragile as a Little Shell
Cinderella_Pixie said:
Beautifully written, just know that anything broken can be fixed. It won\'t be the same but it will be whole again.
May 2nd, 2018 15:51
Cinderella_Pixie said:
Beautifully written, just know that anything broken can be fixed. It won\'t be the same but it will be whole again.
May 2nd, 2018 15:51
As I Lay Upon The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your journey with the clouds always be wondrous.
April 30th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your journey with the clouds always be wondrous.
April 30th, 2018 00:51
A Journey Of A Tear Drop
onepauly said:
excellent!
I enjoyed this one.
keep writing
April 28th, 2018 20:55
onepauly said:
excellent!
I enjoyed this one.
keep writing
April 28th, 2018 20:55
I Am A Triangle
Caring dove said:
brilliant poem :-) the title grabbed my attention , interesting idea.. to describe yourself as a triangle , hence different from other shapes
April 24th, 2018 15:59
Caring dove said:
brilliant poem :-) the title grabbed my attention , interesting idea.. to describe yourself as a triangle , hence different from other shapes
April 24th, 2018 15:59
My Heart Spider
Caring dove said:
wow .. brilliant poem ! i love how you have used the idea of a spiders web to describe your bubble feeling , your barrier . and yes, hurt can make us defend ourselves , but nobodys heart should ever turn cold .. atleast not forever lol . i enjoyed reading this , i love the ideas throughout
March 12th, 2018 14:58
Caring dove said:
wow .. brilliant poem ! i love how you have used the idea of a spiders web to describe your bubble feeling , your barrier . and yes, hurt can make us defend ourselves , but nobodys heart should ever turn cold .. atleast not forever lol . i enjoyed reading this , i love the ideas throughout
March 12th, 2018 14:58
Just Smile
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
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