Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Angel’s Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for continued unity. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:01
Inside God’s Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes a personal conversation with one\'s god. A very personal poem. Well done
October 29th, 2025 04:22
The Power Of A Red Rose
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
Paul Bell said:
Great nostalgic write, sensual in form with longing all the way through it.
Roses do possess class.
October 28th, 2025 05:40
The Power Of A Red Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric poem that is sensual and even sexual but all set in metaphor ending in a sense of sadness and loss. Well done
October 28th, 2025 04:02
My Favorite Addiction
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
We are all addicted to something be it caffeine, morphine, cigarettes, love, food, water, or air nicely written
October 16th, 2025 04:45
Home In Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with angelic images. Well done
October 15th, 2025 06:47
Beautiful Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Such a vivid dream not unlike many we have that are more pleasant than reality and from which we do not want to wake up. Waking becomes the nightmare. A write well done.
October 3rd, 2025 04:55
Angel’s White Feather
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain inflicted. Well written
October 1st, 2025 09:31
Honour In Your Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost faith that lingers in memories of feeling. Well written
September 16th, 2025 05:37
I Am Not Wrong
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of motivation a call to action and decisiveness. Very nice
June 3rd, 2025 06:52
Alcohol
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about reliance on substance for getting through life\'s trials. A sad poem of dependency.
June 2nd, 2025 05:32
I Will Kill You
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
Justina said:
Good writing! I have also experienced emotions similar to those in your poetry, which are a thirst, a sense of possession, and a passion that breeds in repression
June 1st, 2025 08:22
I Will Kill You
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite dark and rather hot this poem speaks of violent emotions ready to erupt. Well imaged and worded
June 1st, 2025 08:20
Panic
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful emotions fill this poem that run from pain to anger and what is between a most emotive write
May 31st, 2025 11:04
Reflection Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A struggle within and without between conscience and impulse and desire. Nicely done
May 14th, 2025 08:43
Killing Hands Of Death
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and macabre a poem of pain, blood lust and anger fulfilled. Powerful
May 11th, 2025 05:02
Death On Horseback
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
He is coming for all of us. A vivid description of horror and dread on horseback. Well written and very dark
May 9th, 2025 10:02
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is still expected and prayed to end. Sad and painful
May 5th, 2025 10:20
Haunted Presences
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness pervades this poem and a reaching out for one missed no longer there, Sad.
May 2nd, 2025 05:13
Dreams Can Not Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely stated
April 28th, 2025 04:56
You Are So Special
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Admiration of another in this poem. Nicely done
April 27th, 2025 04:46
With A Cupid’s Arrow
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent love. Very nice
April 22nd, 2025 05:49
Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst nightmare and I would rather have rain any day.
April 21st, 2025 14:47
Your Deadly Disease
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
This is such a powerful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
April 19th, 2025 06:52
Your Deadly Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a brightening of the future. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 05:46
Infinity Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58
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