Comments received on poems by Ryuji
\"Once Happy, Now Fallen\"
dusk arising said:
Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because i now realise what a wonderful therapy your writing is for you.
Yes your piece here is extremely negative but very well constructed. You are a talented writer which i hope gives you positive pleasure. Self knowledge, knowing you are good at some stuff, is a great bolster of the spirit in dark times.
July 24th, 2018 23:10
dusk arising said:
Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because i now realise what a wonderful therapy your writing is for you.
Yes your piece here is extremely negative but very well constructed. You are a talented writer which i hope gives you positive pleasure. Self knowledge, knowing you are good at some stuff, is a great bolster of the spirit in dark times.
July 24th, 2018 23:10
\"Once Happy, Now Fallen\"
MrNobody40 said:
I understand. Completely. Thank you for sharing these emotions. I know how naked I feel when I share some of my poetry. This is very heartfelt.
July 24th, 2018 21:54
MrNobody40 said:
I understand. Completely. Thank you for sharing these emotions. I know how naked I feel when I share some of my poetry. This is very heartfelt.
July 24th, 2018 21:54
\"Through the Wilderness\"
Lorna said:
Adorable............. how about \"The Daisy Dancer\".........
May 8th, 2018 04:16
Lorna said:
Adorable............. how about \"The Daisy Dancer\".........
May 8th, 2018 04:16
\"Through the Wilderness\"
orchidee said:
\'Fanciful Floatations\'? A fine write Red.
May 7th, 2018 08:13
orchidee said:
\'Fanciful Floatations\'? A fine write Red.
May 7th, 2018 08:13
\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good acrostic LRP.
March 9th, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good acrostic LRP.
March 9th, 2018 01:41
\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
Lorna said:
And your poem has the pace of a \"trip\"....... good one!
March 8th, 2018 17:20
Lorna said:
And your poem has the pace of a \"trip\"....... good one!
March 8th, 2018 17:20
\"The Evils of our Current Situation\"
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love spread rapidly over the earth. The hippies in the 1960s had it right: \"Make love, not war\".
Welcome to MPS.
March 8th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love spread rapidly over the earth. The hippies in the 1960s had it right: \"Make love, not war\".
Welcome to MPS.
March 8th, 2018 01:24
\"Warmth in the Night\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAEMA ~ Thanks for your first POEM and an excellent drawing of SUNSET. Your poem is very elegantly penned in neat stanzas ! It poses a problem which is answered in Stanzas 7 & 8 which is reinforced in your comment ~ thanks for that ~ it mirrors the experience of many on MPS which is a very responsive and empathetic site ! Stanzas 1 to 3 describe you nightly sojourn to watch the Sunset ~ you feel alone and yet strangely warm ! S 4 & 5 ~ The feeling of warmth is suffused with happiness ! In S 6 you realise that what you are feeling emotionally is an expression of the \"One You Love\" ! This realisation is amplified in S 7 & 8 ! \"With you I have found my Happiness ~ With you I am Home !\" I am in a loving relationship with ANGELA (please check my Poems) so I fully understand how you feel ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK
March 6th, 2018 11:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAEMA ~ Thanks for your first POEM and an excellent drawing of SUNSET. Your poem is very elegantly penned in neat stanzas ! It poses a problem which is answered in Stanzas 7 & 8 which is reinforced in your comment ~ thanks for that ~ it mirrors the experience of many on MPS which is a very responsive and empathetic site ! Stanzas 1 to 3 describe you nightly sojourn to watch the Sunset ~ you feel alone and yet strangely warm ! S 4 & 5 ~ The feeling of warmth is suffused with happiness ! In S 6 you realise that what you are feeling emotionally is an expression of the \"One You Love\" ! This realisation is amplified in S 7 & 8 ! \"With you I have found my Happiness ~ With you I am Home !\" I am in a loving relationship with ANGELA (please check my Poems) so I fully understand how you feel ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK
March 6th, 2018 11:20
