Comments received on poems by Ryuji



\"Once Happy, Now Fallen\"
dusk arising said:

Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because i now realise what a wonderful therapy your writing is for you.
Yes your piece here is extremely negative but very well constructed. You are a talented writer which i hope gives you positive pleasure. Self knowledge, knowing you are good at some stuff, is a great bolster of the spirit in dark times.

July 24th, 2018 23:10

\"Once Happy, Now Fallen\"
MrNobody40 said:

I understand. Completely. Thank you for sharing these emotions. I know how naked I feel when I share some of my poetry. This is very heartfelt.

July 24th, 2018 21:54

\"Through the Wilderness\"
Lorna said:

Adorable............. how about \"The Daisy Dancer\".........

May 8th, 2018 04:16

\"Through the Wilderness\"
orchidee said:

\'Fanciful Floatations\'? A fine write Red.

May 7th, 2018 08:13

\"Transition\"
Goldfinch60 said:

May that brightness always be with you.

March 10th, 2018 01:33

\"Transition\"
Accidental Poet said:

I see your name in the upper right corner as Jay A. M. You could go as JAM for a name if you like.

March 9th, 2018 13:27

\"Transition\"
Accidental Poet said:

Everyone has these times when its difficult to smile. With me, it usually lasts less than a day. I will myself to change my point of view to other things that don\'t bring me down. I hope your down time is short and you feel much better.

March 9th, 2018 13:25

\"Transition\"
Lorna said:

It\'s good to see that white light at the end!

March 9th, 2018 11:16

\"Transition\"
Ryuji said:

Thank you so much

March 9th, 2018 11:08

\"Transition\"
orchidee said:

A fine write Red. Have colourful times!

March 9th, 2018 10:07

\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good acrostic LRP.

March 9th, 2018 01:41

\"The Evils of our Current Situation\"
Accidental Poet said:

All so very true. I too have written a few like this. Thanks for sharing LRP.

March 8th, 2018 20:13

\"Warmth in the Night\"
Accidental Poet said:

Speaking through your heart is always heard LRP. Great write, and welcome to MPS.

March 8th, 2018 19:39

\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
Accidental Poet said:

I\'m a big fan of road trips too. Love to go somewhere new and different on my vacations every year. Excellent write LRP.

March 8th, 2018 19:31

\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
Lorna said:

And your poem has the pace of a \"trip\"....... good one!

March 8th, 2018 17:20

\"Road Trip\" (acrostic for LittleGift)
orchidee said:

A fine write Red.

March 8th, 2018 10:56

\"The Evils of our Current Situation\"
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love spread rapidly over the earth. The hippies in the 1960s had it right: \"Make love, not war\".
Welcome to MPS.

March 8th, 2018 01:24

\"Warmth in the Night\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JAEMA ~ Thanks for your first POEM and an excellent drawing of SUNSET. Your poem is very elegantly penned in neat stanzas ! It poses a problem which is answered in Stanzas 7 & 8 which is reinforced in your comment ~ thanks for that ~ it mirrors the experience of many on MPS which is a very responsive and empathetic site ! Stanzas 1 to 3 describe you nightly sojourn to watch the Sunset ~ you feel alone and yet strangely warm ! S 4 & 5 ~ The feeling of warmth is suffused with happiness ! In S 6 you realise that what you are feeling emotionally is an expression of the \"One You Love\" ! This realisation is amplified in S 7 & 8 ! \"With you I have found my Happiness ~ With you I am Home !\" I am in a loving relationship with ANGELA (please check my Poems) so I fully understand how you feel ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK

March 6th, 2018 11:20