Comments received on poems by Eugene S.



Peregrination
L. B. Mek said:

\'If you accept a concept
Do you become subject to it\'
only if we allow it
to blinker, our awareness...
when
we observe
that contrasting duality
is a common theme of our everyday reality
we realise, trying to believe
in one thing, alone - stubbornly
is a frail scaffolding to frame
our foundations of life...
even if that one thing is nihilism\'s
oh so convenient, nothingness!
life is tough, whichever way
you traverse it..
(my 2 cents worth
of over opinionated, opinion
forgive me
lol)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a wonderfully thought provoking poem

August 22nd, 2022 03:43

monomania
Eugene S. said:

Common themes....
Thank you again for reading and finding something of interest.

August 5th, 2022 06:02

monomania
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, well
we kinda all fall victim to such failings
at some point;
especially in our younger
more vehemently, impassioned
versions of ourselves..
the distinction, exists in what we do
during these brief spells of mindless
enraged, states..
we can imagine the worst of horrors
and as long as they remain, mere
imaginations
then we can survive, without accruing
too much consequence, but
if we shed our chords to self-control
well...
that sad story
we all know, already!
(a really interesting topic and theme
thanks for sharing, dear poet)

August 2nd, 2022 04:35

Gammadion
Eugene S. said:

I\'m \'cause and effect\' camp as well. Thanks for reading.

July 2nd, 2022 13:27

Gammadion
Paul Bell said:

I blame the 60s hippies. Peace and love, it was just too radical. It\'s a well known fact, politicians and generals can\'t dance, so that only leaves them one other vice to play with, and they play it well, all over the world.

July 2nd, 2022 06:56

Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence
sorenbarrett said:

Cheers, cider or beer either works. Enjoyed the tale

June 30th, 2022 19:43

Foundation of a Question for the President II
Eugene S. said:

Beginnings are purer things. To bad we can\'t seem to keep them that way. Thanks for reading.

June 27th, 2022 11:14

Foundation of a Question for the President II
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
(wish an \'Augustus\'
would be reborn in every generation)

June 27th, 2022 05:50

Foundation of a Question for the President I
dusk arising said:

Well i suppose you need to blame someone. But why choose the poor fkkr who has to manage your mess - he didn\'t create it, that was done by all the rest of you, generation after generation.

June 26th, 2022 17:05

Foundation of a Question for the President I
hzugman said:

Ain\'t it the truth!

June 26th, 2022 15:20

Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence
Doggerel Dave said:

Good laugh ,this one - dunno if it is just my mood, but it rang certain bells for me.
I\'ll look out for you in the future.

June 25th, 2022 04:54

Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence
hzugman said:

One for the road?


June 24th, 2022 14:42

... are of a kind with those of myth;
a thousand wishes said:

Hi! I love your poem.

June 10th, 2022 12:37

Another Variant of King Richard
Nile Blue said:

Richly concise. Impressively expressed and written👌🏿👌🏿

May 16th, 2022 12:43

Paths X
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully creative
even morbidity, can inspire
such enticing, artistry..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

May 2nd, 2022 04:48

Multiplicity Duplicities
Draven said:

Wow, such a good write, the last stanza is powerful!

April 25th, 2022 05:49

An Illegal Alien Lives In My Birdhouse
Rozina said:

Oh this is delightful. It\'s helpful to have a \'weatherman\' to tell you that it\'s going to rain.

April 23rd, 2022 17:36

An Illegal Alien Lives In My Birdhouse
Distant View said:

An entertaining tale, even if Froggy\'s neighbours don\'t like him being there. I enjoyed the read.

April 23rd, 2022 09:13

They
Rozina said:

Well crafted lines and very meaningful.

April 15th, 2022 17:56

They
dusk arising said:

The courage and tenacity of the oppressed shines through your spirited words.

April 15th, 2022 10:31

They
Draven said:

Very well written

April 15th, 2022 06:27

They
L. B. Mek said:

tight rhymes, so well written
and Timely, in theme
thanks for sharing, dear poet

April 15th, 2022 05:10

Another Variant of King Richard
L. B. Mek said:

\'Oh, look at the drama
Crying
Lies to be sold\'..
now mere, puppets
to that pariah
headline, bulletin machine...
(I so relate and in some ways
I think the beheaded French, may
have had it easier
at least it ended
with one generation, for them
where as this, day to day
degradation
is such a pathetic sight, to be hold
although, I do feel for Elizabeth
a stabling, anchor
when all those macho, maggots around her
do their best
to bring it all down, on her Crown)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 29th, 2022 04:39

Harbinger
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful words Eugene.

Andy

February 28th, 2022 02:29

The Strange Consequences of the Modern Age
Bella Shepard said:

How brave and poignant. What a time we are living through, where we are experiencing the unimaginable. The very best wishes to you.

February 20th, 2022 15:23

Closed
AuburnScribbler said:

What a poetic adventure here Eugene S, wonderfully written, with eye popping imagery, that will be very memorable indeed.

I do hope that this tale reached a safe conclusion, if it is biographical.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

February 2nd, 2022 07:43

Boxes
GypsyLady said:

this is a well written piece that perfectly the describes the longing to stay snuggled warm in bed and delay starting another day of stark reality as long as one possibly can (which is almost every day for me ;)) I really loved the 3rd stanza, especially the line \'desperately grasping somnolence\'...Really very well written!

January 18th, 2022 08:51

Boxes
AuburnScribbler said:

Masterfully written here Eugene S, with your words, you certainly paint an emphatic scene!

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

January 7th, 2022 02:05

Boxes
Draven said:

Nice, liking this. Also, your formatting got me from the beginning :) Really lovely set out.

January 2nd, 2022 10:11

Boxes
chriswylie2 said:

I love the lines “the warmth of slumber, a soft embrace, fleeing, as reality materializes”… well written!

January 2nd, 2022 09:26

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