Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
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sorenbarrett said:
Images of a tidal wave and a metaphor for being drown in change. Lovely
December 27th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
Images of a tidal wave and a metaphor for being drown in change. Lovely
December 27th, 2025 11:28
Dies Natalis Solis Invicti
sorenbarrett said:
Obligations a drudgery like grey skies. A pensive write that asks a question of what is to come. Well done
December 26th, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Obligations a drudgery like grey skies. A pensive write that asks a question of what is to come. Well done
December 26th, 2025 10:35
Perception
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem that uses multiple rhymes to set a mood. A fave
December 14th, 2025 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem that uses multiple rhymes to set a mood. A fave
December 14th, 2025 10:37
Fast Eddie\'s Pier VI
Eugene S. said:
Thank you, as always. You are so kind to read them.
December 7th, 2025 18:46
Eugene S. said:
Thank you, as always. You are so kind to read them.
December 7th, 2025 18:46
Fast Eddie\'s Pier VI
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in this poem. The intermittent altering from short more formal poetic stanzas to the more narrative descriptive passages so nicely transitioned. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the creativity in this poem. The intermittent altering from short more formal poetic stanzas to the more narrative descriptive passages so nicely transitioned. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 15:47
Möbius Trip
sorenbarrett said:
A mobius has a hole in the middle and I hear this hole in my reading of the poem. Well written where there is only one side, one dimension
November 30th, 2025 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A mobius has a hole in the middle and I hear this hole in my reading of the poem. Well written where there is only one side, one dimension
November 30th, 2025 12:36
Eine Kleine Nachtmusik
sorenbarrett said:
A journey, a voyage in this write that takes one all the way to the end of an interesting trip.
November 23rd, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A journey, a voyage in this write that takes one all the way to the end of an interesting trip.
November 23rd, 2025 04:16
Sheherazade
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that at first glance seems surreal and with most interesting imagery. Well done
November 16th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that at first glance seems surreal and with most interesting imagery. Well done
November 16th, 2025 20:17
Question of When?
sorenbarrett said:
Have followed Ren from the beginning on the internet. Hi Ren, The story of Jenny and Screech, many others. He is a masterful musician and performer overcoming a great deal of adversity and has a great deal of social commentary and sociopolitical economic commentary in his work. Loved the poem
November 1st, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Have followed Ren from the beginning on the internet. Hi Ren, The story of Jenny and Screech, many others. He is a masterful musician and performer overcoming a great deal of adversity and has a great deal of social commentary and sociopolitical economic commentary in his work. Loved the poem
November 1st, 2025 09:55
monody
sorenbarrett said:
We all need meaning in life whatever it be. A wonderful poem and wish
October 25th, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
We all need meaning in life whatever it be. A wonderful poem and wish
October 25th, 2025 13:35
the bird\'s quotient
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the flow of thought in this poem nicely penned.
October 19th, 2025 17:46
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the flow of thought in this poem nicely penned.
October 19th, 2025 17:46
Lost Song
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that has a sad feel or rather mournful I should say. This goes with the bird and the coming of night metaphors as I see it. Very nice
October 4th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that has a sad feel or rather mournful I should say. This goes with the bird and the coming of night metaphors as I see it. Very nice
October 4th, 2025 11:05
Jim Morrison
sorenbarrett said:
This has biblical symbology in the being thrust into a desert, the solemn words scrawled (commandments on tablets of stone) crossing rivers of Moses parting the waters. Or maybe I\'m just being over focused. A good read
September 20th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
This has biblical symbology in the being thrust into a desert, the solemn words scrawled (commandments on tablets of stone) crossing rivers of Moses parting the waters. Or maybe I\'m just being over focused. A good read
September 20th, 2025 10:25
wait
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and quite haunting write of waiting for justice to be delivered, nicely expressed and written
August 9th, 2025 10:48
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and quite haunting write of waiting for justice to be delivered, nicely expressed and written
August 9th, 2025 10:48
wait
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and foreboding this poem speaks of awaiting for reprisal of justice. A lovely write.
August 9th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and foreboding this poem speaks of awaiting for reprisal of justice. A lovely write.
August 9th, 2025 09:38
Did I mention the mosquitoes?
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and squirls in the oaks. Still plenty of black racers but gone are the coachwhips and the king snakes, haven\'t seen and indigo in years. Saw my last wild cat five years ago. Things have changed
August 3rd, 2025 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and squirls in the oaks. Still plenty of black racers but gone are the coachwhips and the king snakes, haven\'t seen and indigo in years. Saw my last wild cat five years ago. Things have changed
August 3rd, 2025 18:45
Pharonic Antiphase
sorenbarrett said:
The Pharoah that thought that there should be only one god Ra the sun god just as there should be only one pharoah just as there should be only one right a wonderful poem
July 26th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
The Pharoah that thought that there should be only one god Ra the sun god just as there should be only one pharoah just as there should be only one right a wonderful poem
July 26th, 2025 12:38
And So It Goes
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to the idea that we live in a troubled and violent world that we must accept. Well written
July 20th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to the idea that we live in a troubled and violent world that we must accept. Well written
July 20th, 2025 12:45
Tattooed Remnants
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely expressed write, however many times you get knocked down, never give in, well written and I love the picture
July 19th, 2025 10:08
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely expressed write, however many times you get knocked down, never give in, well written and I love the picture
July 19th, 2025 10:08
Boxes III
Poetic Licence said:
This write has full gamet of emotions in it, an emotional and heartfelt write
July 7th, 2025 05:23
Poetic Licence said:
This write has full gamet of emotions in it, an emotional and heartfelt write
July 7th, 2025 05:23
Boxes III
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness, regret, guilt and shame all rolled into one in this poem. Very emotional.
July 7th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness, regret, guilt and shame all rolled into one in this poem. Very emotional.
July 7th, 2025 04:38
The One
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write with biblical imagery, a sense of we are pushing to far and soon we will all pay the price, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write with biblical imagery, a sense of we are pushing to far and soon we will all pay the price, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:47
The One
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well as Egyptian. I speaks softly and whispers
July 6th, 2025 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well as Egyptian. I speaks softly and whispers
July 6th, 2025 12:51
The One
Eugene S. said:
A developing treatise on Akhenaten or Amenhotep IV. Interesting subject that seems to be connected to everything.
July 6th, 2025 10:46
Eugene S. said:
A developing treatise on Akhenaten or Amenhotep IV. Interesting subject that seems to be connected to everything.
July 6th, 2025 10:46
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