Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
wait
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and quite haunting write of waiting for justice to be delivered, nicely expressed and written
August 9th, 2025 10:48
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and quite haunting write of waiting for justice to be delivered, nicely expressed and written
August 9th, 2025 10:48
wait
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and foreboding this poem speaks of awaiting for reprisal of justice. A lovely write.
August 9th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and foreboding this poem speaks of awaiting for reprisal of justice. A lovely write.
August 9th, 2025 09:38
Did I mention the mosquitoes?
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and squirls in the oaks. Still plenty of black racers but gone are the coachwhips and the king snakes, haven\'t seen and indigo in years. Saw my last wild cat five years ago. Things have changed
August 3rd, 2025 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and squirls in the oaks. Still plenty of black racers but gone are the coachwhips and the king snakes, haven\'t seen and indigo in years. Saw my last wild cat five years ago. Things have changed
August 3rd, 2025 18:45
Pharonic Antiphase
sorenbarrett said:
The Pharoah that thought that there should be only one god Ra the sun god just as there should be only one pharoah just as there should be only one right a wonderful poem
July 26th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
The Pharoah that thought that there should be only one god Ra the sun god just as there should be only one pharoah just as there should be only one right a wonderful poem
July 26th, 2025 12:38
And So It Goes
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to the idea that we live in a troubled and violent world that we must accept. Well written
July 20th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to the idea that we live in a troubled and violent world that we must accept. Well written
July 20th, 2025 12:45
Tattooed Remnants
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely expressed write, however many times you get knocked down, never give in, well written and I love the picture
July 19th, 2025 10:08
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely expressed write, however many times you get knocked down, never give in, well written and I love the picture
July 19th, 2025 10:08
Boxes III
Poetic Licence said:
This write has full gamet of emotions in it, an emotional and heartfelt write
July 7th, 2025 05:23
Poetic Licence said:
This write has full gamet of emotions in it, an emotional and heartfelt write
July 7th, 2025 05:23
Boxes III
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness, regret, guilt and shame all rolled into one in this poem. Very emotional.
July 7th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness, regret, guilt and shame all rolled into one in this poem. Very emotional.
July 7th, 2025 04:38
The One
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write with biblical imagery, a sense of we are pushing to far and soon we will all pay the price, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write with biblical imagery, a sense of we are pushing to far and soon we will all pay the price, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:47
The One
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well as Egyptian. I speaks softly and whispers
July 6th, 2025 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well as Egyptian. I speaks softly and whispers
July 6th, 2025 12:51
The One
Eugene S. said:
A developing treatise on Akhenaten or Amenhotep IV. Interesting subject that seems to be connected to everything.
July 6th, 2025 10:46
Eugene S. said:
A developing treatise on Akhenaten or Amenhotep IV. Interesting subject that seems to be connected to everything.
July 6th, 2025 10:46
One Beneficial to Aten
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of history past, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of history past, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 12:07
One Beneficial to Aten
sorenbarrett said:
Amenhotep IV who tried to erase the other gods and after his death his name erased from all monuments. A great try but no cigar. On the other hand this poem was a great write bringing back memories of history past. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Amenhotep IV who tried to erase the other gods and after his death his name erased from all monuments. A great try but no cigar. On the other hand this poem was a great write bringing back memories of history past. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 10:44
آزاد کردن
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write in the search for solidarity in all the darkness, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 22:38
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write in the search for solidarity in all the darkness, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 22:38
آزاد کردن
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a search for solidarity. Through the darkness it is found. Nicely written
June 19th, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a search for solidarity. Through the darkness it is found. Nicely written
June 19th, 2025 19:43
Paths XVII
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about life and that we all have problems. Well done
May 28th, 2025 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about life and that we all have problems. Well done
May 28th, 2025 11:07
Paths XVII
Poetic Licence said:
How many times do we make the same mistakes before we eventually learn are lesson, a nicely written write expressing the flaws that are human nature in us all, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 10:41
Poetic Licence said:
How many times do we make the same mistakes before we eventually learn are lesson, a nicely written write expressing the flaws that are human nature in us all, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 10:41
recursion
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of a storm brewing inside someone, pressure building till it bursts, , enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 10:06
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of a storm brewing inside someone, pressure building till it bursts, , enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 10:06
recursion
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of nature rain sky and earth. Thought provoking.
May 18th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of nature rain sky and earth. Thought provoking.
May 18th, 2025 08:14
A Human Menagerie
Keeter C said:
Interesting, elegant and thought provoking. The world is so fragile yet none see.
May 17th, 2025 12:51
Keeter C said:
Interesting, elegant and thought provoking. The world is so fragile yet none see.
May 17th, 2025 12:51
Ropes, Possessive Women, Covid Shots & Sand
Keeter C said:
Exactly it’s like an invisible wind scatters the pieces.
May 17th, 2025 08:43
Keeter C said:
Exactly it’s like an invisible wind scatters the pieces.
May 17th, 2025 08:43
tides
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that talks of intuition that thing that talks to us and tells us with no logic. And the end, the recognition that it is temporal and will be gone. A very good poem.
May 1st, 2025 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that talks of intuition that thing that talks to us and tells us with no logic. And the end, the recognition that it is temporal and will be gone. A very good poem.
May 1st, 2025 20:18
Ropes, Possessive Women, Covid Shots & Sand
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting and engaging it reads well and creates curiosity. Nicely written
April 28th, 2025 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting and engaging it reads well and creates curiosity. Nicely written
April 28th, 2025 20:54
Modernity
sorenbarrett said:
Grey the uncertainty of black and white. We live in a world of uncertainty and doubt. A lovely write about the desire for a firmer base.
April 26th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Grey the uncertainty of black and white. We live in a world of uncertainty and doubt. A lovely write about the desire for a firmer base.
April 26th, 2025 07:28
Ren Gill III, Part I - Blurred Vision
eugene290390 said:
Hi! My name is Eugene S (no pseudonym) and I find it quite amazing that you actually got a lot of my journey with Ren right!
I\'m an older person who discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago (April 1, 2023) after ignoring for a while the youtube entreaties.
I also write a bit of doggerel at times, but most of it has gone by the wayside (like another hero of mine, Franz K.)
People have asked me (I run the Ren reddit group) if I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we...or if this a deliberate spoof, but I see that is impossible given your first Ren poem predates my own experience by at least a few days.
April 18th, 2025 22:25
eugene290390 said:
Hi! My name is Eugene S (no pseudonym) and I find it quite amazing that you actually got a lot of my journey with Ren right!
I\'m an older person who discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago (April 1, 2023) after ignoring for a while the youtube entreaties.
I also write a bit of doggerel at times, but most of it has gone by the wayside (like another hero of mine, Franz K.)
People have asked me (I run the Ren reddit group) if I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we...or if this a deliberate spoof, but I see that is impossible given your first Ren poem predates my own experience by at least a few days.
April 18th, 2025 22:25
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