Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
Lush II
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and scientific is this poem
July 2nd, 2023 00:14
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and scientific is this poem
July 2nd, 2023 00:14
Ren Gill II
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece right here, cuts deep, gifted one. The interplay of sadness and hope is woven like a magic robe... Mighty are the works of your pen. A fine art write. 🤟🏽
June 22nd, 2023 12:44
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece right here, cuts deep, gifted one. The interplay of sadness and hope is woven like a magic robe... Mighty are the works of your pen. A fine art write. 🤟🏽
June 22nd, 2023 12:44
Paths XIV
Parisab said:
using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on which to build a tale’ is a very powerful concept in this poem- I really appreciate how you built up your poem to the final point-I also appreciate the presence of music and musicians in this poem and your body of work in general-Thank you for sharing your strong poetry.
June 17th, 2023 12:02
Parisab said:
using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on which to build a tale’ is a very powerful concept in this poem- I really appreciate how you built up your poem to the final point-I also appreciate the presence of music and musicians in this poem and your body of work in general-Thank you for sharing your strong poetry.
June 17th, 2023 12:02
Paths XIV
L. B. Mek said:
such a powerful image
a child\'s imagination, fuelling
our zeal for life
a great write! dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
such a powerful image
a child\'s imagination, fuelling
our zeal for life
a great write! dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 03:38
bastardis in praecipitium
rhmn_7 said:
Having people surrounding you who guide you from your fall is a blessing.
May 28th, 2023 16:14
rhmn_7 said:
Having people surrounding you who guide you from your fall is a blessing.
May 28th, 2023 16:14
Old Lighthouses II
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading, Andy. May the spark ignite for us all...
April 23rd, 2023 07:43
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading, Andy. May the spark ignite for us all...
April 23rd, 2023 07:43
Old Lighthouses II
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will light the light and show us the way forward into a good life Eugene.
Andy
April 23rd, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will light the light and show us the way forward into a good life Eugene.
Andy
April 23rd, 2023 00:41
Lush II
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t found Lush1, but little matter.
For me (wine now my tipple) it just depends on my mood at outset how it turns out.... although my oblivion days are over.
Neat write I enjoyed very much.
April 17th, 2023 22:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t found Lush1, but little matter.
For me (wine now my tipple) it just depends on my mood at outset how it turns out.... although my oblivion days are over.
Neat write I enjoyed very much.
April 17th, 2023 22:25
A Dream Exposed
John_Bingham said:
I\'m really glad I read this outloud. My poems never seem as good written to me, they come across better on my podcast in spoken word. This poems flow is fantastic when spoken (and when read). Would be great to hear read out by the writer the way it was meant to be read.
March 5th, 2023 09:16
John_Bingham said:
I\'m really glad I read this outloud. My poems never seem as good written to me, they come across better on my podcast in spoken word. This poems flow is fantastic when spoken (and when read). Would be great to hear read out by the writer the way it was meant to be read.
March 5th, 2023 09:16
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
2781 said:
A mystery in all three? Opened eyes would see.
February 21st, 2023 04:37
2781 said:
A mystery in all three? Opened eyes would see.
February 21st, 2023 04:37
Ren Gill
L. B. Mek said:
(\'you gotta kill you, if you want to kill me\'
thank you! for introducing me dear Poet
\'astounding\'
is what this video is, truly)
\'determined to overcome all
in an ever hopeful dance
reflective of all of our pain\'
this is Art, at its empathetic best
February 13th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
(\'you gotta kill you, if you want to kill me\'
thank you! for introducing me dear Poet
\'astounding\'
is what this video is, truly)
\'determined to overcome all
in an ever hopeful dance
reflective of all of our pain\'
this is Art, at its empathetic best
February 13th, 2023 03:54
A Poet\'s Mantra
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for my tardiness
your words hit home
resonating with my own
ideal\'s of Poesy irreplaceable, worth
thank you! dear Poet
\'through the passages of time.
Experiences written in rhyme,\'
so true
February 13th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for my tardiness
your words hit home
resonating with my own
ideal\'s of Poesy irreplaceable, worth
thank you! dear Poet
\'through the passages of time.
Experiences written in rhyme,\'
so true
February 13th, 2023 03:45
A Poet\'s Mantra
thinkerbell said:
Loved the last few lines..gorgeous writing🥰
February 4th, 2023 13:02
thinkerbell said:
Loved the last few lines..gorgeous writing🥰
February 4th, 2023 13:02
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The three wise men of the East , yeahh, a fab poem i enjoyed reading. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The three wise men of the East , yeahh, a fab poem i enjoyed reading. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:31
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
Sakwa Franc said:
I like your stylistic device of repetition you have created in your work
Good work sir
December 24th, 2022 17:11
Sakwa Franc said:
I like your stylistic device of repetition you have created in your work
Good work sir
December 24th, 2022 17:11
A Tocobagan Riddle for Today
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven, a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 19th, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven, a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 19th, 2022 06:38
Monster
Neville said:
I fear my own species far more than any other .. real or imagined ..
I am glad you found me earlier, otherwise I may never have stumbled across your portfolio my friend ......................... Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 14:17
Neville said:
I fear my own species far more than any other .. real or imagined ..
I am glad you found me earlier, otherwise I may never have stumbled across your portfolio my friend ......................... Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 14:17
Monster
Eugene S. said:
I\'m so glad that you and others found some understanding in this one. It, along with many of my early poems, have deep meaning to me. This website and what it allows me to post has become not only my confidant, but my voice, and essentially, my autobiography. I do appreciate all those who take the time to read and especially those who try to understand. My gratitude and gratefulness!
November 28th, 2022 17:09
Eugene S. said:
I\'m so glad that you and others found some understanding in this one. It, along with many of my early poems, have deep meaning to me. This website and what it allows me to post has become not only my confidant, but my voice, and essentially, my autobiography. I do appreciate all those who take the time to read and especially those who try to understand. My gratitude and gratefulness!
November 28th, 2022 17:09
Monster
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
(please, please
try n forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but these is how your Poetry revealed itself to me:)
\'Monster\'
\'It wasn\'t a beast who broke me
For that would be expected
No, it was something so much more familiar and respected\'
\'They watch and wait and scheme until you fall into their snare\'
\'But people, do I fear the most - so creative with their cruelties\'
\'It wasn\'t a real monster in that fiction book\'
\'It wasn\'t his folly in the pages
It was what he feared the most
He alluded to evil - deep in our human host\'
November 28th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
(please, please
try n forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but these is how your Poetry revealed itself to me:)
\'Monster\'
\'It wasn\'t a beast who broke me
For that would be expected
No, it was something so much more familiar and respected\'
\'They watch and wait and scheme until you fall into their snare\'
\'But people, do I fear the most - so creative with their cruelties\'
\'It wasn\'t a real monster in that fiction book\'
\'It wasn\'t his folly in the pages
It was what he feared the most
He alluded to evil - deep in our human host\'
November 28th, 2022 05:09
Intimation
L. B. Mek said:
(Nature forewarns, ever so subtly
were we anchored enough, in-self
to heed her whispering gust of wind
still, as we watch flocks in flight
and en masse
our archaic amygdala, awakens and begins its work...)
such a wonderfully measured tone and wording, dear Poet
a lovely read
almost a statuesque postcard scene
in a horror thriller
like the beginning of Jaws
November 28th, 2022 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
(Nature forewarns, ever so subtly
were we anchored enough, in-self
to heed her whispering gust of wind
still, as we watch flocks in flight
and en masse
our archaic amygdala, awakens and begins its work...)
such a wonderfully measured tone and wording, dear Poet
a lovely read
almost a statuesque postcard scene
in a horror thriller
like the beginning of Jaws
November 28th, 2022 05:02
Monster
MR.apocalypse said:
most people see these poems as dark but I can truly see the real meaning
November 26th, 2022 22:09
MR.apocalypse said:
most people see these poems as dark but I can truly see the real meaning
November 26th, 2022 22:09
Leviathan
L. B. Mek said:
really relatable, I like the striking imagery as well
forgive me, I couldn\'t help but be inspired
to scribble a little poetic reply:
(I think Captain Ahab\'s main failing
wasn\'t necessarily
going after that leviathan
it was more the fact that
he allowed his hatred to blind him
of the small blessings around him
his loyal crew, his sister
and how profitable their hunt was
which would have helped to limit
what he willingly sacrificed to get his leg back..
and thus, we too
at times need to offset
those leviathan trauma\'s, plaguing our minds
against
what we currently possess in our lives
that\'s how
we can continue to walk away from those cliff edges
and find our way back, to our survival shorelines)
October 31st, 2022 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
really relatable, I like the striking imagery as well
forgive me, I couldn\'t help but be inspired
to scribble a little poetic reply:
(I think Captain Ahab\'s main failing
wasn\'t necessarily
going after that leviathan
it was more the fact that
he allowed his hatred to blind him
of the small blessings around him
his loyal crew, his sister
and how profitable their hunt was
which would have helped to limit
what he willingly sacrificed to get his leg back..
and thus, we too
at times need to offset
those leviathan trauma\'s, plaguing our minds
against
what we currently possess in our lives
that\'s how
we can continue to walk away from those cliff edges
and find our way back, to our survival shorelines)
October 31st, 2022 06:32
Leviathan
arqios said:
Often we find the abuse more than its victimisation becomes a training for a life after the abuse and abuser have exited centrestage. Powerful expression here TFS.
October 30th, 2022 22:15
arqios said:
Often we find the abuse more than its victimisation becomes a training for a life after the abuse and abuser have exited centrestage. Powerful expression here TFS.
October 30th, 2022 22:15
Individuals
Eugene S. said:
Could it be the same youthful detritus from differing ages? You were reading and I dare say understanding the nuances....and I thank you for it.
September 6th, 2022 14:38
Eugene S. said:
Could it be the same youthful detritus from differing ages? You were reading and I dare say understanding the nuances....and I thank you for it.
September 6th, 2022 14:38
Individuals
Doggerel Dave said:
Not doing you justice here, are they?
Someone who knew the nineties tha way I knew the sixties should come and engage with this well structured piece.....
September 6th, 2022 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Not doing you justice here, are they?
Someone who knew the nineties tha way I knew the sixties should come and engage with this well structured piece.....
September 6th, 2022 05:42
Individuals
shaa said:
I love the \'remember\' on each line, sounds so emphatic. I enjoyed reading this piece. Nicely penned 😊
September 5th, 2022 17:00
shaa said:
I love the \'remember\' on each line, sounds so emphatic. I enjoyed reading this piece. Nicely penned 😊
September 5th, 2022 17:00
« Return to the profile of Eugene S.
