Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
Another Variant of King Richard
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh, look at the drama
Crying
Lies to be sold\'..
now mere, puppets
to that pariah
headline, bulletin machine...
(I so relate and in some ways
I think the beheaded French, may
have had it easier
at least it ended
with one generation, for them
where as this, day to day
degradation
is such a pathetic sight, to be hold
although, I do feel for Elizabeth
a stabling, anchor
when all those macho, maggots around her
do their best
to bring it all down, on her Crown)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 29th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh, look at the drama
Crying
Lies to be sold\'..
now mere, puppets
to that pariah
headline, bulletin machine...
(I so relate and in some ways
I think the beheaded French, may
have had it easier
at least it ended
with one generation, for them
where as this, day to day
degradation
is such a pathetic sight, to be hold
although, I do feel for Elizabeth
a stabling, anchor
when all those macho, maggots around her
do their best
to bring it all down, on her Crown)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 29th, 2022 04:39
The Strange Consequences of the Modern Age
Bella Shepard said:
How brave and poignant. What a time we are living through, where we are experiencing the unimaginable. The very best wishes to you.
February 20th, 2022 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
How brave and poignant. What a time we are living through, where we are experiencing the unimaginable. The very best wishes to you.
February 20th, 2022 15:23
Closed
AuburnScribbler said:
What a poetic adventure here Eugene S, wonderfully written, with eye popping imagery, that will be very memorable indeed.
I do hope that this tale reached a safe conclusion, if it is biographical.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:43
AuburnScribbler said:
What a poetic adventure here Eugene S, wonderfully written, with eye popping imagery, that will be very memorable indeed.
I do hope that this tale reached a safe conclusion, if it is biographical.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:43
Boxes
GypsyLady said:
this is a well written piece that perfectly the describes the longing to stay snuggled warm in bed and delay starting another day of stark reality as long as one possibly can (which is almost every day for me ;)) I really loved the 3rd stanza, especially the line \'desperately grasping somnolence\'...Really very well written!
January 18th, 2022 08:51
GypsyLady said:
this is a well written piece that perfectly the describes the longing to stay snuggled warm in bed and delay starting another day of stark reality as long as one possibly can (which is almost every day for me ;)) I really loved the 3rd stanza, especially the line \'desperately grasping somnolence\'...Really very well written!
January 18th, 2022 08:51
Boxes
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Eugene S, with your words, you certainly paint an emphatic scene!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 02:05
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Eugene S, with your words, you certainly paint an emphatic scene!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 02:05
Boxes
Draven said:
Nice, liking this. Also, your formatting got me from the beginning :) Really lovely set out.
January 2nd, 2022 10:11
Draven said:
Nice, liking this. Also, your formatting got me from the beginning :) Really lovely set out.
January 2nd, 2022 10:11
Boxes
chriswylie2 said:
I love the lines “the warmth of slumber, a soft embrace, fleeing, as reality materializes”… well written!
January 2nd, 2022 09:26
chriswylie2 said:
I love the lines “the warmth of slumber, a soft embrace, fleeing, as reality materializes”… well written!
January 2nd, 2022 09:26
Lessons from the Beach II
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Fay. For me, it would all be amiss without the beach and the ocean.
January 1st, 2022 11:53
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Fay. For me, it would all be amiss without the beach and the ocean.
January 1st, 2022 11:53
Lessons from the Beach II
Fay Slimm. said:
Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we rarely find except near or on a beach. Have save this one Eugene and shall look forward to reading its predecessor
December 31st, 2021 13:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we rarely find except near or on a beach. Have save this one Eugene and shall look forward to reading its predecessor
December 31st, 2021 13:13
Nigh
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You took a picture of twilight\'s soul with your words there, fellow writer. An umistakable depiction. Compelling, with strong imagery that stays long after the reading is done. Master craftsmanship.
December 12th, 2021 22:05
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You took a picture of twilight\'s soul with your words there, fellow writer. An umistakable depiction. Compelling, with strong imagery that stays long after the reading is done. Master craftsmanship.
December 12th, 2021 22:05
There\'s No Comfort In Destiny
parker said:
Loved the openness of your poem. We the readers can fill in so many spaces, all different, but still holding to your poem.
Great write.
December 11th, 2021 17:40
parker said:
Loved the openness of your poem. We the readers can fill in so many spaces, all different, but still holding to your poem.
Great write.
December 11th, 2021 17:40
Nigh
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing of technical prowess,
succinct wording with such melancholic depth..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 7th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing of technical prowess,
succinct wording with such melancholic depth..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 7th, 2021 05:41
Nigh
Goldfinch60 said:
May that premiere lead you into the wonder of the night time.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that premiere lead you into the wonder of the night time.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:58
Age of the Zombie II
Paul Bell said:
Reparation and compensation, a Lawyer\'s dream.
November 29th, 2021 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Reparation and compensation, a Lawyer\'s dream.
November 29th, 2021 05:23
Age of the Zombie II
L. B. Mek said:
pointed observations, that capture the core essence of injustice
that, despite the passing of Time
refuses to diminish
in intensity or resolve!
(a great write, love the choice wording
thanks for choosing to share,
especially, like the fact that
we can apply your words
to almost every form of inherited,
injustice - throughout the world...)
November 22nd, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
pointed observations, that capture the core essence of injustice
that, despite the passing of Time
refuses to diminish
in intensity or resolve!
(a great write, love the choice wording
thanks for choosing to share,
especially, like the fact that
we can apply your words
to almost every form of inherited,
injustice - throughout the world...)
November 22nd, 2021 05:00
What\'re The Mazers Doing Next Door?
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading and \"hearing\".
November 9th, 2021 17:06
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading and \"hearing\".
November 9th, 2021 17:06
What\'re The Mazers Doing Next Door?
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a world so rejectful of the past.\'
\'Really, a gathering, of like minds
who are much closer to zen than I.\'
\'But this was a day
I will fondly look back on
and these
newly made batches of mead
will ensure
all of the stories: yet to come.\'
(Elegantly worded, subtly paced and nuanced;
when we find something
we can freely enjoy
and Belong: to
well, that\'s half the struggle
in our life\'s
fermentation process, unfurled
and all that heady sweetness of ethanol
we get to sample, of that ultimate mead
we\'ve labelled, existence...)
really well written! thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
November 8th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a world so rejectful of the past.\'
\'Really, a gathering, of like minds
who are much closer to zen than I.\'
\'But this was a day
I will fondly look back on
and these
newly made batches of mead
will ensure
all of the stories: yet to come.\'
(Elegantly worded, subtly paced and nuanced;
when we find something
we can freely enjoy
and Belong: to
well, that\'s half the struggle
in our life\'s
fermentation process, unfurled
and all that heady sweetness of ethanol
we get to sample, of that ultimate mead
we\'ve labelled, existence...)
really well written! thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
November 8th, 2021 04:47
Cumbre Vieja
aDarkerMind said:
blunt, straight to the scource...
and a dam good write!
October 24th, 2021 10:05
aDarkerMind said:
blunt, straight to the scource...
and a dam good write!
October 24th, 2021 10:05
Amber
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, squirrels are doing Hari Kari in their collecting this year.
October 23rd, 2021 15:38
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, squirrels are doing Hari Kari in their collecting this year.
October 23rd, 2021 15:38
Paths VII
Lorna said:
It sounds as if you live a lot of life in your head - which I always do - and who\'s to say that isn\'t real.....
October 18th, 2021 02:17
Lorna said:
It sounds as if you live a lot of life in your head - which I always do - and who\'s to say that isn\'t real.....
October 18th, 2021 02:17
Drinking Mead in Roosevelt\'s Horse Stable
Lorna said:
Just found this - it is amazing....... love it.
October 18th, 2021 02:15
Lorna said:
Just found this - it is amazing....... love it.
October 18th, 2021 02:15
Paths VII
Eugene S. said:
I think for me, dreams are an abstract depiction of the life experience, and what an adventure that has been (sarcasm intended). Dreams are definitely quirky things, or is it reality that is so quirky?🤔 ... now I\'m just confused.🤪
September 14th, 2021 22:47
Eugene S. said:
I think for me, dreams are an abstract depiction of the life experience, and what an adventure that has been (sarcasm intended). Dreams are definitely quirky things, or is it reality that is so quirky?🤔 ... now I\'m just confused.🤪
September 14th, 2021 22:47
Paths VII
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I think I get the same reading as Andy
from this unflinchingly brave words,
clearly there\'s a disconnect you\'re picking up on, cos its bled into your write,
question is, if the dream is just that
a visison, a mirage of subconsius entering reality
through your dreams, or
if its more sinister, and its reality that\'s overwhelming your capacity to dream..
a really intriguing concept and read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 14th, 2021 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I think I get the same reading as Andy
from this unflinchingly brave words,
clearly there\'s a disconnect you\'re picking up on, cos its bled into your write,
question is, if the dream is just that
a visison, a mirage of subconsius entering reality
through your dreams, or
if its more sinister, and its reality that\'s overwhelming your capacity to dream..
a really intriguing concept and read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 14th, 2021 02:54
Paths VII
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe those dark dreams are the to lead you to the light .
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe those dark dreams are the to lead you to the light .
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:53
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