Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
Forgotten Grave
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Parisab. Today was sadly a day of loss. Tomorrow will reveal a new path.
October 3rd, 2023 17:48
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Parisab. Today was sadly a day of loss. Tomorrow will reveal a new path.
October 3rd, 2023 17:48
Forgotten Grave
Parisab said:
Amazing insight that when there is finally an end ‘and it all crumbles away
As time brings another day’
October 3rd, 2023 17:42
Parisab said:
Amazing insight that when there is finally an end ‘and it all crumbles away
As time brings another day’
October 3rd, 2023 17:42
Idalia, Depredation Achieved
L. B. Mek said:
thank you dear poet
I read your relatable poetry
and was inspired to pen
a feeble reply
(a promise of better in a smile as you arrive
now your shadow
is that middle finger stuck in my throat..
like a gust of wind, you swept
through my pulsing heart
while I was just too busy, trying
to blink past life\'s dust..
deuces, yeah you injured me
but i\'ll heal
go looking for less poisonous
fish, in that
plentiful sea!
lol)
September 1st, 2023 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
thank you dear poet
I read your relatable poetry
and was inspired to pen
a feeble reply
(a promise of better in a smile as you arrive
now your shadow
is that middle finger stuck in my throat..
like a gust of wind, you swept
through my pulsing heart
while I was just too busy, trying
to blink past life\'s dust..
deuces, yeah you injured me
but i\'ll heal
go looking for less poisonous
fish, in that
plentiful sea!
lol)
September 1st, 2023 05:43
The World Never Wanted You, and Neither Did She
Eugene S. said:
I was in a \"rare\" mood that day. It poured out on the page rather quickly. Thanks for reading.
August 20th, 2023 16:38
Eugene S. said:
I was in a \"rare\" mood that day. It poured out on the page rather quickly. Thanks for reading.
August 20th, 2023 16:38
Old Friend
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I feel like I just saw my own funeral. Kudos so very well written.
July 16th, 2023 16:42
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I feel like I just saw my own funeral. Kudos so very well written.
July 16th, 2023 16:42
Lush II
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and scientific is this poem
July 2nd, 2023 00:14
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and scientific is this poem
July 2nd, 2023 00:14
Ren Gill II
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece right here, cuts deep, gifted one. The interplay of sadness and hope is woven like a magic robe... Mighty are the works of your pen. A fine art write. 🤟🏽
June 22nd, 2023 12:44
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece right here, cuts deep, gifted one. The interplay of sadness and hope is woven like a magic robe... Mighty are the works of your pen. A fine art write. 🤟🏽
June 22nd, 2023 12:44
Paths XIV
Parisab said:
using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on which to build a tale’ is a very powerful concept in this poem- I really appreciate how you built up your poem to the final point-I also appreciate the presence of music and musicians in this poem and your body of work in general-Thank you for sharing your strong poetry.
June 17th, 2023 12:02
Parisab said:
using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on which to build a tale’ is a very powerful concept in this poem- I really appreciate how you built up your poem to the final point-I also appreciate the presence of music and musicians in this poem and your body of work in general-Thank you for sharing your strong poetry.
June 17th, 2023 12:02
Paths XIV
L. B. Mek said:
such a powerful image
a child\'s imagination, fuelling
our zeal for life
a great write! dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
such a powerful image
a child\'s imagination, fuelling
our zeal for life
a great write! dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 03:38
bastardis in praecipitium
rhmn_7 said:
Having people surrounding you who guide you from your fall is a blessing.
May 28th, 2023 16:14
rhmn_7 said:
Having people surrounding you who guide you from your fall is a blessing.
May 28th, 2023 16:14
Old Lighthouses II
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading, Andy. May the spark ignite for us all...
April 23rd, 2023 07:43
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading, Andy. May the spark ignite for us all...
April 23rd, 2023 07:43
Old Lighthouses II
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will light the light and show us the way forward into a good life Eugene.
Andy
April 23rd, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will light the light and show us the way forward into a good life Eugene.
Andy
April 23rd, 2023 00:41
Lush II
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t found Lush1, but little matter.
For me (wine now my tipple) it just depends on my mood at outset how it turns out.... although my oblivion days are over.
Neat write I enjoyed very much.
April 17th, 2023 22:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Haven\'t found Lush1, but little matter.
For me (wine now my tipple) it just depends on my mood at outset how it turns out.... although my oblivion days are over.
Neat write I enjoyed very much.
April 17th, 2023 22:25
A Dream Exposed
John_Bingham said:
I\'m really glad I read this outloud. My poems never seem as good written to me, they come across better on my podcast in spoken word. This poems flow is fantastic when spoken (and when read). Would be great to hear read out by the writer the way it was meant to be read.
March 5th, 2023 09:16
John_Bingham said:
I\'m really glad I read this outloud. My poems never seem as good written to me, they come across better on my podcast in spoken word. This poems flow is fantastic when spoken (and when read). Would be great to hear read out by the writer the way it was meant to be read.
March 5th, 2023 09:16
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
2781 said:
A mystery in all three? Opened eyes would see.
February 21st, 2023 04:37
2781 said:
A mystery in all three? Opened eyes would see.
February 21st, 2023 04:37
Ren Gill
L. B. Mek said:
(\'you gotta kill you, if you want to kill me\'
thank you! for introducing me dear Poet
\'astounding\'
is what this video is, truly)
\'determined to overcome all
in an ever hopeful dance
reflective of all of our pain\'
this is Art, at its empathetic best
February 13th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
(\'you gotta kill you, if you want to kill me\'
thank you! for introducing me dear Poet
\'astounding\'
is what this video is, truly)
\'determined to overcome all
in an ever hopeful dance
reflective of all of our pain\'
this is Art, at its empathetic best
February 13th, 2023 03:54
A Poet\'s Mantra
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for my tardiness
your words hit home
resonating with my own
ideal\'s of Poesy irreplaceable, worth
thank you! dear Poet
\'through the passages of time.
Experiences written in rhyme,\'
so true
February 13th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for my tardiness
your words hit home
resonating with my own
ideal\'s of Poesy irreplaceable, worth
thank you! dear Poet
\'through the passages of time.
Experiences written in rhyme,\'
so true
February 13th, 2023 03:45
A Poet\'s Mantra
thinkerbell said:
Loved the last few lines..gorgeous writing🥰
February 4th, 2023 13:02
thinkerbell said:
Loved the last few lines..gorgeous writing🥰
February 4th, 2023 13:02
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The three wise men of the East , yeahh, a fab poem i enjoyed reading. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The three wise men of the East , yeahh, a fab poem i enjoyed reading. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:31
סֶּלַע / शिला / πετρα
Sakwa Franc said:
I like your stylistic device of repetition you have created in your work
Good work sir
December 24th, 2022 17:11
Sakwa Franc said:
I like your stylistic device of repetition you have created in your work
Good work sir
December 24th, 2022 17:11
A Tocobagan Riddle for Today
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven, a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 19th, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven, a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 19th, 2022 06:38
Monster
Neville said:
I fear my own species far more than any other .. real or imagined ..
I am glad you found me earlier, otherwise I may never have stumbled across your portfolio my friend ......................... Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 14:17
Neville said:
I fear my own species far more than any other .. real or imagined ..
I am glad you found me earlier, otherwise I may never have stumbled across your portfolio my friend ......................... Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 14:17
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