Comments received on poems by Eugene S.
Lessons from the Beach II
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Fay. For me, it would all be amiss without the beach and the ocean.
January 1st, 2022 11:53
Eugene S. said:
Thank you Fay. For me, it would all be amiss without the beach and the ocean.
January 1st, 2022 11:53
Lessons from the Beach II
Fay Slimm. said:
Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we rarely find except near or on a beach. Have save this one Eugene and shall look forward to reading its predecessor
December 31st, 2021 13:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we rarely find except near or on a beach. Have save this one Eugene and shall look forward to reading its predecessor
December 31st, 2021 13:13
Nigh
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You took a picture of twilight\'s soul with your words there, fellow writer. An umistakable depiction. Compelling, with strong imagery that stays long after the reading is done. Master craftsmanship.
December 12th, 2021 22:05
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You took a picture of twilight\'s soul with your words there, fellow writer. An umistakable depiction. Compelling, with strong imagery that stays long after the reading is done. Master craftsmanship.
December 12th, 2021 22:05
There\'s No Comfort In Destiny
parker said:
Loved the openness of your poem. We the readers can fill in so many spaces, all different, but still holding to your poem.
Great write.
December 11th, 2021 17:40
parker said:
Loved the openness of your poem. We the readers can fill in so many spaces, all different, but still holding to your poem.
Great write.
December 11th, 2021 17:40
Nigh
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing of technical prowess,
succinct wording with such melancholic depth..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 7th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing of technical prowess,
succinct wording with such melancholic depth..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 7th, 2021 05:41
Nigh
Goldfinch60 said:
May that premiere lead you into the wonder of the night time.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that premiere lead you into the wonder of the night time.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:58
Age of the Zombie II
Paul Bell said:
Reparation and compensation, a Lawyer\'s dream.
November 29th, 2021 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Reparation and compensation, a Lawyer\'s dream.
November 29th, 2021 05:23
Age of the Zombie II
L. B. Mek said:
pointed observations, that capture the core essence of injustice
that, despite the passing of Time
refuses to diminish
in intensity or resolve!
(a great write, love the choice wording
thanks for choosing to share,
especially, like the fact that
we can apply your words
to almost every form of inherited,
injustice - throughout the world...)
November 22nd, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
pointed observations, that capture the core essence of injustice
that, despite the passing of Time
refuses to diminish
in intensity or resolve!
(a great write, love the choice wording
thanks for choosing to share,
especially, like the fact that
we can apply your words
to almost every form of inherited,
injustice - throughout the world...)
November 22nd, 2021 05:00
What\'re The Mazers Doing Next Door?
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading and \"hearing\".
November 9th, 2021 17:06
Eugene S. said:
Thank you for reading and \"hearing\".
November 9th, 2021 17:06
What\'re The Mazers Doing Next Door?
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a world so rejectful of the past.\'
\'Really, a gathering, of like minds
who are much closer to zen than I.\'
\'But this was a day
I will fondly look back on
and these
newly made batches of mead
will ensure
all of the stories: yet to come.\'
(Elegantly worded, subtly paced and nuanced;
when we find something
we can freely enjoy
and Belong: to
well, that\'s half the struggle
in our life\'s
fermentation process, unfurled
and all that heady sweetness of ethanol
we get to sample, of that ultimate mead
we\'ve labelled, existence...)
really well written! thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
November 8th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a world so rejectful of the past.\'
\'Really, a gathering, of like minds
who are much closer to zen than I.\'
\'But this was a day
I will fondly look back on
and these
newly made batches of mead
will ensure
all of the stories: yet to come.\'
(Elegantly worded, subtly paced and nuanced;
when we find something
we can freely enjoy
and Belong: to
well, that\'s half the struggle
in our life\'s
fermentation process, unfurled
and all that heady sweetness of ethanol
we get to sample, of that ultimate mead
we\'ve labelled, existence...)
really well written! thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
November 8th, 2021 04:47
Cumbre Vieja
aDarkerMind said:
blunt, straight to the scource...
and a dam good write!
October 24th, 2021 10:05
aDarkerMind said:
blunt, straight to the scource...
and a dam good write!
October 24th, 2021 10:05
Amber
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, squirrels are doing Hari Kari in their collecting this year.
October 23rd, 2021 15:38
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, squirrels are doing Hari Kari in their collecting this year.
October 23rd, 2021 15:38
Paths VII
Lorna said:
It sounds as if you live a lot of life in your head - which I always do - and who\'s to say that isn\'t real.....
October 18th, 2021 02:17
Lorna said:
It sounds as if you live a lot of life in your head - which I always do - and who\'s to say that isn\'t real.....
October 18th, 2021 02:17
Drinking Mead in Roosevelt\'s Horse Stable
Lorna said:
Just found this - it is amazing....... love it.
October 18th, 2021 02:15
Lorna said:
Just found this - it is amazing....... love it.
October 18th, 2021 02:15
Paths VII
Eugene S. said:
I think for me, dreams are an abstract depiction of the life experience, and what an adventure that has been (sarcasm intended). Dreams are definitely quirky things, or is it reality that is so quirky?🤔 ... now I\'m just confused.🤪
September 14th, 2021 22:47
Eugene S. said:
I think for me, dreams are an abstract depiction of the life experience, and what an adventure that has been (sarcasm intended). Dreams are definitely quirky things, or is it reality that is so quirky?🤔 ... now I\'m just confused.🤪
September 14th, 2021 22:47
Paths VII
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I think I get the same reading as Andy
from this unflinchingly brave words,
clearly there\'s a disconnect you\'re picking up on, cos its bled into your write,
question is, if the dream is just that
a visison, a mirage of subconsius entering reality
through your dreams, or
if its more sinister, and its reality that\'s overwhelming your capacity to dream..
a really intriguing concept and read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 14th, 2021 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I think I get the same reading as Andy
from this unflinchingly brave words,
clearly there\'s a disconnect you\'re picking up on, cos its bled into your write,
question is, if the dream is just that
a visison, a mirage of subconsius entering reality
through your dreams, or
if its more sinister, and its reality that\'s overwhelming your capacity to dream..
a really intriguing concept and read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 14th, 2021 02:54
Paths VII
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe those dark dreams are the to lead you to the light .
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe those dark dreams are the to lead you to the light .
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:53
Portents IV
Eugene S. said:
It\'s so amazing to me that I can illicit such interesting interpretations. Thank you again for listening.
September 7th, 2021 17:02
Eugene S. said:
It\'s so amazing to me that I can illicit such interesting interpretations. Thank you again for listening.
September 7th, 2021 17:02
Portents IV
L. B. Mek said:
those blinked seconds between choice and consequence?
or happenstance and circumstance?
or nurture vs nature?
or, or, or...
Portent\'s and prophecies aplenty, from antiquity,
to that same stinky socks, worn for every \'lucky day\' miracle \'Hail Mary\' attempt, with seconds remaining on that fleeting window of opportunity...
I say, put a P on one side and E on the other of your chosen \'faithful\' coin, flick it up - high
and walk-on, to your next - to do list
(where E stands for Excuses, Escapes, Elective-ignorance)
(forgive me if I completely side stepped your theological themes and hijacked your words into my own selfish interpretation, dear poet)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
September 7th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
those blinked seconds between choice and consequence?
or happenstance and circumstance?
or nurture vs nature?
or, or, or...
Portent\'s and prophecies aplenty, from antiquity,
to that same stinky socks, worn for every \'lucky day\' miracle \'Hail Mary\' attempt, with seconds remaining on that fleeting window of opportunity...
I say, put a P on one side and E on the other of your chosen \'faithful\' coin, flick it up - high
and walk-on, to your next - to do list
(where E stands for Excuses, Escapes, Elective-ignorance)
(forgive me if I completely side stepped your theological themes and hijacked your words into my own selfish interpretation, dear poet)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
September 7th, 2021 05:03
Not the Religion I Knew
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of any alignment with your theological points
this was a well written poem
very insightful and your arguments, well articulated
thank you, for choosing to share..
(why not start our own avenue for faith
a pick and mix buffet, devoid of zealotry and lies
we choose, knowingly
eyes - wide: shut! in hope
that we, alone - be the ones to guess write?!)
\'Let no one, dictate - Anything, to you
not even, when they poison your waters
to that childhood naivety, you - long
to claim back, and include in your
purview of informed, Awareness...\'
September 6th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of any alignment with your theological points
this was a well written poem
very insightful and your arguments, well articulated
thank you, for choosing to share..
(why not start our own avenue for faith
a pick and mix buffet, devoid of zealotry and lies
we choose, knowingly
eyes - wide: shut! in hope
that we, alone - be the ones to guess write?!)
\'Let no one, dictate - Anything, to you
not even, when they poison your waters
to that childhood naivety, you - long
to claim back, and include in your
purview of informed, Awareness...\'
September 6th, 2021 04:23
Drinking Mead in Roosevelt\'s Horse Stable
Eugene S. said:
You\'re too kind! Thank you.
August 23rd, 2021 12:05
Eugene S. said:
You\'re too kind! Thank you.
August 23rd, 2021 12:05
Drinking Mead in Roosevelt\'s Horse Stable
aDarkerMind said:
whether things have changed or not Eugene...
what wont change is your poetry of brilliant images and life itself;
the last stop on the way to history...
a line to treasure;
August 23rd, 2021 11:52
aDarkerMind said:
whether things have changed or not Eugene...
what wont change is your poetry of brilliant images and life itself;
the last stop on the way to history...
a line to treasure;
August 23rd, 2021 11:52
Paths V
The elder poet said:
Thank you for the tour . You describe your garden well. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2021 10:52
The elder poet said:
Thank you for the tour . You describe your garden well. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2021 10:52
Sixty Taps in an Olde Swamp
The elder poet said:
You habe found your Happy place. Your home away from home. A place to feel at ease in. A place to feel at home. A nice write.
August 22nd, 2021 10:49
The elder poet said:
You habe found your Happy place. Your home away from home. A place to feel at ease in. A place to feel at home. A nice write.
August 22nd, 2021 10:49
Paths VI
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their cadence in the morning darkness
It\'s always been an escape for me
An alternative destination
Someplace contrary to where I\'m headed\'..
exemptional pacing, adding a real depth of poignancy
and relatability of melodic melancholy
although, without it being too sombre;
a measured write of nuanced brevity,
your lines take us on a musical whirlwind journey
of yearned-for: remembrance
to a time, we wouldn\'t necessarily want to revisit
under normal circumstances.
Brilliantly executed, a great write! dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their cadence in the morning darkness
It\'s always been an escape for me
An alternative destination
Someplace contrary to where I\'m headed\'..
exemptional pacing, adding a real depth of poignancy
and relatability of melodic melancholy
although, without it being too sombre;
a measured write of nuanced brevity,
your lines take us on a musical whirlwind journey
of yearned-for: remembrance
to a time, we wouldn\'t necessarily want to revisit
under normal circumstances.
Brilliantly executed, a great write! dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 03:35
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