Comments received on poems by lottierose



All in a matter of time
Crystal Hope said:

this is very moving and beautifully done. :)

September 12th, 2018 21:17

All in a matter of time
MSA-19 said:

I interpreted this as people being preoccupied with their own worlds & not really noticing the world around them

September 12th, 2018 18:05

Our looks crafted by society
Lorna said:

Society is just a mass of people trying to squash us...... tell them where to go.

July 30th, 2018 07:21

A day washed away
Lorna said:

Lovely words - you didn\'t waste the day!

July 30th, 2018 07:18

I don’t even love myself
Lorna said:

Love as many people as you can - that\'s good to do. But start to realize that there really isn\'t anyone \'out there\' who is \"better\" than you. Even if they are all shiny on the outside. Once you figure that out (and it takes time) you will find you are perfectly wonderful (as long as you\'re not a serial killer or something)...... write lots of poems and then one day sit down and read them all back and you will see yourself and like what you see!

July 30th, 2018 07:17

I don’t even love myself
Β π‘…πŸ‘π’·π’Ύπ“ƒ 𝑅𝑒𝒷𝒾𝓇𝓉𝒽 said:

Always think of you as being special and you could shine up any mind its in your heart and soul but your the one to fight you have a strong will just think about it this is really a deep read I enjoyed immensely check out my new one with my video I made I think it will make you laugh

July 30th, 2018 06:38

I don’t even love myself
tepo said:

It\'s all about what is inside
You have a talent
Try not to be so hard on yourself
No one ever seems really happy all the time
Be good to you
Clever writing

July 30th, 2018 06:21

Uneased
Unsub said:

lottie,

cleverly pieced together poem creating vivid images to meld with the emotive atmosphere created,

well crafted for sure.

Unsub.

July 11th, 2018 16:59

Our looks crafted by society
Blackhawkwings said:

Very nice. Easy to grasp.

July 10th, 2018 20:24

Paint brushed sky
Diamond said:

Sky is sky...... And always fascinating!

Nice thoughts.

July 9th, 2018 21:53

Paint brushed sky
Heartwriter said:

Beautiful write.

July 9th, 2018 18:58

I don’t even love myself
E-Poems said:

I would choose you! keep smiling hun, things get easier. Always here if you ever need someone yo speak to.

July 7th, 2018 16:19

Deepest ocean of thoughts
Poetic Dan said:

Never be sorry for what you write
I\'ve also written about suicide
\"Back to front\" you\'ll find it
When I now see my sorrys were for myself
I know you know this is to you too
Your incredible to do what you do
As much darkness there is light too
Keep expressing that inner truth
I can already feel it shining through

July 2nd, 2018 14:18

Deepest ocean of thoughts
anonymous.poet said:

Most strong writers have a story- well done for being strong enough to embrace yours πŸ’“

July 2nd, 2018 13:17

Hostage
Saima said:

I really do relate, all the thoughts honestly drive me mad. You can talk to me whenever you want:) reading my poems might make you feel more happy, i think you\'d relate to them

July 1st, 2018 20:40

You are loved
Claudelle said:

Love your message!

July 1st, 2018 00:38

You are loved
Melissa Daly said:

This is so beautiful!

June 30th, 2018 18:41

I hate myself
tepo said:

You answered this yourself
Learn to love yourself
Almost impossible
Makes it possible
Super writing

June 27th, 2018 16:09

I hate myself
GON said:

Studies have shown that people more depressed/anxious use the pronoun \"I\" more often than otherwise, including in poetry. This is because people who use \"I\" more often are more likely to have their focus shifted inwards toward themselves, and thus more likely to be overly self-critical.

Imagine if there was a bitter old geezer following you around all day, criticizing everything about you and everything that you did. You probably wouldn\'t like him very much, so why do it to yourself?

I\'ve struggled with this myself, and I think the way to deal with it is to try and shift your focus from being too inward (introverted) to being outward, to other people (extroverted). I think you may find that you stop hating yourself so much and you start doing things that make you respect yourself.

Anyway, those are my thoughts. Take it easy.

June 25th, 2018 16:41

5 reasons not to die
kitcat said:

Written beautifully makes you feel very sad

April 24th, 2018 14:17

5 reasons not to die
Syd said:

Brilliant. You\'ve really put life in perspective.

- Syd

April 24th, 2018 14:00

5 reasons not to die
orchidee said:

A fine write Lottie. It\'s serious, but if it was not so serious, we could add: \'Oohh and suicide is very bad for one\'s health too!\' (bit of black humour. heehee).


April 24th, 2018 13:42

5 reasons not to die
sharda92 said:

Omg yessss!! I love this so much. Amazing job.

April 24th, 2018 13:16

The scars you left
Maxine Smith said:

We can never escape those deep cutting scares, how we got them and who gave them to us.
We can use them to remind us how strong we are, how far we have come and to give purpose to brighten those dim lights.
An emotive write. Hope you find your path back to the warmth.


April 11th, 2018 17:10

With the rope around my neck
Maxine Smith said:

Keep pushing through, take all be bad in, absorb it, become stronger, make the good all the more worth it when it comes back around. Which it will. You just don’t know it yet.

April 10th, 2018 13:28

With the rope around my neck
Eugene S. said:

Yes indeed. We all have to live for those around us. Anything less has the roots of sefishness.

April 10th, 2018 08:50

With the rope around my neck
Daveyboyz said:

A grim topic, and the most common killer of young men currently. Life can be stormy but you have to believe eventually the sun bound to shine if you hold out for it.

April 10th, 2018 06:09

How depression feels
larosamarchitada said:

I love that you are spreading awareness. I too do so every chance I get. Fuck stigma and Lord help us in our darkest emotionless days. #notalone

April 10th, 2018 01:02

How depression feels
Lawless said:

Yup. I know all to well.

Well done!

April 9th, 2018 17:41

How depression feels
Maxine Smith said:

Brilliant emotive write, reaching out and raising awareness. Your piece is moving and speaks to so many.


April 9th, 2018 16:29

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