Comments received on poems by lottierose
All in a matter of time
Crystal Hope said:
this is very moving and beautifully done. :)
September 12th, 2018 21:17
Crystal Hope said:
this is very moving and beautifully done. :)
September 12th, 2018 21:17
All in a matter of time
MSA-19 said:
I interpreted this as people being preoccupied with their own worlds & not really noticing the world around them
September 12th, 2018 18:05
MSA-19 said:
I interpreted this as people being preoccupied with their own worlds & not really noticing the world around them
September 12th, 2018 18:05
Our looks crafted by society
Lorna said:
Society is just a mass of people trying to squash us...... tell them where to go.
July 30th, 2018 07:21
Lorna said:
Society is just a mass of people trying to squash us...... tell them where to go.
July 30th, 2018 07:21
I don’t even love myself
Lorna said:
Love as many people as you can - that\'s good to do. But start to realize that there really isn\'t anyone \'out there\' who is \"better\" than you. Even if they are all shiny on the outside. Once you figure that out (and it takes time) you will find you are perfectly wonderful (as long as you\'re not a serial killer or something)...... write lots of poems and then one day sit down and read them all back and you will see yourself and like what you see!
July 30th, 2018 07:17
Lorna said:
Love as many people as you can - that\'s good to do. But start to realize that there really isn\'t anyone \'out there\' who is \"better\" than you. Even if they are all shiny on the outside. Once you figure that out (and it takes time) you will find you are perfectly wonderful (as long as you\'re not a serial killer or something)...... write lots of poems and then one day sit down and read them all back and you will see yourself and like what you see!
July 30th, 2018 07:17
I don’t even love myself
E-Poems said:
I would choose you! keep smiling hun, things get easier. Always here if you ever need someone yo speak to.
July 7th, 2018 16:19
E-Poems said:
I would choose you! keep smiling hun, things get easier. Always here if you ever need someone yo speak to.
July 7th, 2018 16:19
Deepest ocean of thoughts
Poetic Dan said:
Never be sorry for what you write
I\'ve also written about suicide
\"Back to front\" you\'ll find it
When I now see my sorrys were for myself
I know you know this is to you too
Your incredible to do what you do
As much darkness there is light too
Keep expressing that inner truth
I can already feel it shining through
July 2nd, 2018 14:18
Poetic Dan said:
Never be sorry for what you write
I\'ve also written about suicide
\"Back to front\" you\'ll find it
When I now see my sorrys were for myself
I know you know this is to you too
Your incredible to do what you do
As much darkness there is light too
Keep expressing that inner truth
I can already feel it shining through
July 2nd, 2018 14:18
Deepest ocean of thoughts
anonymous.poet said:
Most strong writers have a story- well done for being strong enough to embrace yours 💓
July 2nd, 2018 13:17
anonymous.poet said:
Most strong writers have a story- well done for being strong enough to embrace yours 💓
July 2nd, 2018 13:17
Hostage
Saima said:
I really do relate, all the thoughts honestly drive me mad. You can talk to me whenever you want:) reading my poems might make you feel more happy, i think you\'d relate to them
July 1st, 2018 20:40
Saima said:
I really do relate, all the thoughts honestly drive me mad. You can talk to me whenever you want:) reading my poems might make you feel more happy, i think you\'d relate to them
July 1st, 2018 20:40
I hate myself
Noah Malice said:
Studies have shown that people more depressed/anxious use the pronoun \"I\" more often than otherwise, including in poetry. This is because people who use \"I\" more often are more likely to have their focus shifted inwards toward themselves, and thus more likely to be overly self-critical.
Imagine if there was a bitter old geezer following you around all day, criticizing everything about you and everything that you did. You probably wouldn\'t like him very much, so why do it to yourself?
I\'ve struggled with this myself, and I think the way to deal with it is to try and shift your focus from being too inward (introverted) to being outward, to other people (extroverted). I think you may find that you stop hating yourself so much and you start doing things that make you respect yourself.
Anyway, those are my thoughts. Take it easy.
June 25th, 2018 16:41
Noah Malice said:
Studies have shown that people more depressed/anxious use the pronoun \"I\" more often than otherwise, including in poetry. This is because people who use \"I\" more often are more likely to have their focus shifted inwards toward themselves, and thus more likely to be overly self-critical.
Imagine if there was a bitter old geezer following you around all day, criticizing everything about you and everything that you did. You probably wouldn\'t like him very much, so why do it to yourself?
I\'ve struggled with this myself, and I think the way to deal with it is to try and shift your focus from being too inward (introverted) to being outward, to other people (extroverted). I think you may find that you stop hating yourself so much and you start doing things that make you respect yourself.
Anyway, those are my thoughts. Take it easy.
June 25th, 2018 16:41
5 reasons not to die
Syd said:
Brilliant. You\'ve really put life in perspective.
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 14:00
Syd said:
Brilliant. You\'ve really put life in perspective.
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 14:00
5 reasons not to die
orchidee said:
A fine write Lottie. It\'s serious, but if it was not so serious, we could add: \'Oohh and suicide is very bad for one\'s health too!\' (bit of black humour. heehee).
April 24th, 2018 13:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Lottie. It\'s serious, but if it was not so serious, we could add: \'Oohh and suicide is very bad for one\'s health too!\' (bit of black humour. heehee).
April 24th, 2018 13:42
5 reasons not to die
sharda92 said:
Omg yessss!! I love this so much. Amazing job.
April 24th, 2018 13:16
sharda92 said:
Omg yessss!! I love this so much. Amazing job.
April 24th, 2018 13:16
With the rope around my neck
Eugene S. said:
Yes indeed. We all have to live for those around us. Anything less has the roots of sefishness.
April 10th, 2018 08:50
Eugene S. said:
Yes indeed. We all have to live for those around us. Anything less has the roots of sefishness.
April 10th, 2018 08:50
With the rope around my neck
Daveyboyz said:
A grim topic, and the most common killer of young men currently. Life can be stormy but you have to believe eventually the sun bound to shine if you hold out for it.
April 10th, 2018 06:09
Daveyboyz said:
A grim topic, and the most common killer of young men currently. Life can be stormy but you have to believe eventually the sun bound to shine if you hold out for it.
April 10th, 2018 06:09
How depression feels
larosamarchitada said:
I love that you are spreading awareness. I too do so every chance I get. Fuck stigma and Lord help us in our darkest emotionless days. #notalone
April 10th, 2018 01:02
larosamarchitada said:
I love that you are spreading awareness. I too do so every chance I get. Fuck stigma and Lord help us in our darkest emotionless days. #notalone
April 10th, 2018 01:02
My reflection
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOTTIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ well written ~ and with an important message \"Our Beauty is our Character what lies within ~ Our refection in the Mirror is superficial\". You will study Physics at school and you know in a mirror image everything is reversed (left is right & right is left etc) That\'s not even what others see they see a true image (of You) as in a PHOTO ! God does not look at our superficial exterior but at our inward character ! That\'s how we should see others ! It is good to have some Young Teens on this site ~ because you are honest and tell it like it is ! I\'m still under 35 but I don\'t bare my soul I tend to write Poems about things I like in way that will make others like them too (please check !) Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2018 17:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOTTIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ well written ~ and with an important message \"Our Beauty is our Character what lies within ~ Our refection in the Mirror is superficial\". You will study Physics at school and you know in a mirror image everything is reversed (left is right & right is left etc) That\'s not even what others see they see a true image (of You) as in a PHOTO ! God does not look at our superficial exterior but at our inward character ! That\'s how we should see others ! It is good to have some Young Teens on this site ~ because you are honest and tell it like it is ! I\'m still under 35 but I don\'t bare my soul I tend to write Poems about things I like in way that will make others like them too (please check !) Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2018 17:59
My reflection
smallest_stars said:
I think it\'s a fine poem. It could use some editing.
My favorite line is this one:
\"So 13 years old and I starve myself because nothing tastes better than skinny feels\"
Just the way you described that. That\'s a profound line. Well done!
And welcome. :)
April 5th, 2018 17:04
smallest_stars said:
I think it\'s a fine poem. It could use some editing.
My favorite line is this one:
\"So 13 years old and I starve myself because nothing tastes better than skinny feels\"
Just the way you described that. That\'s a profound line. Well done!
And welcome. :)
April 5th, 2018 17:04
My reflection
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beauty comes from with in your soul,
your personality,
April 5th, 2018 16:35
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beauty comes from with in your soul,
your personality,
April 5th, 2018 16:35
