Comments received on poems by Cinderella_Pixie



Disgust
Goldfinch60 said:

In that darkness you may be lost but remember that light always conquers darkness, look for that light in your life, it may only be a spark but that spark will grow and show you the way to freedom from your hatred.

July 4th, 2019 00:16

Trash talking
dusk arising said:

So sad to read. This horrible cycle is something i went through too. Leaving home at 15 worked out ok for me but i would advise against leaving home very young nowadays because times are so much more dangerous for us all.
One thing is for sure though, if you ever feel yourself being unkind to your children sometime in the future, you will deal with it differently to the example you grew up under.
Be positive.

March 16th, 2019 07:29

Trash talking
Nicholas Browning said:

Ah, to forsake and to abandon in hopes of becoming more somewhere else. A fresh start, a new beginning. Can\'t say it doesn\'t sound appealing, of course I\'ve done it before. Not all it\'s cracked up to be. People suck, that\'s pretty much how it goes. I could say what everyone else says, but I\'ll spare you the repetition. Best regards in your endeavors.

March 16th, 2019 01:12

How Can I Live Without You
Aislinn Wilson said:

Real talent inside this. Keep writing!

January 9th, 2019 10:38

Mask your pain today
Broken_kingdom said:

Battles, thoughts, wars. And they\'re all in our heads. Those are the monsters we take to bed.

May 29th, 2018 10:11

Another one in the sky
Lorna said:

Oh I hope so! Very poignant........

May 11th, 2018 05:05

Growing Up Broken
Caring dove said:

hello, this is very good.. i love how you talk of her being your rock but then roles reversed and you attempted to be her rock. i like your reference to the sea . you wrote this very well. its a sad thing when roles are reversed and you have to attempt to be the parent, i\'m sorry this happened..

May 8th, 2018 03:02

Second Chance Hope
onepauly said:

its always good to have a heart.
ha! ha!

May 5th, 2018 09:51

Plummeting Heart
kitcat said:

Beautifully written how very sad this is breaks ones heart
Superb I enjoyed reading it

May 2nd, 2018 06:24

Plummeting Heart
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS PIXIE ~ For a very elegant and yet horrific poem on the subject of \"Heart Broken Suicide\" ~ Like so many poems on MPS it make me ashamed to be a MAN ! We can be so so cruel in \"Aspects of Love\"
\"Once again a girl falls
Spinning through the sky\"

A very dramatic opening to one of the most graphic and numbing Poems I have read on Suicide by Jumping. I have lost Friends and Students in this manner and it is very very hard for those who have to \"pick up the pieces\" It made me think and I hope it will affect others to think a well ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN



May 2nd, 2018 02:57