Comments received on poems by Arianna Smith



Boredom
orchidee said:

Did you have a nap? Did you doze off? Some places of employment have really dull \' team meetings\' too!

May 11th, 2018 01:46

“I\'m fine”
Joshua Shutt said:

I say \" I\'m fine\" to many times because we don\'t want to hear what people have to say. This poem is really good and makes me think alot. Thank you for sharing! Have a great day

May 10th, 2018 06:07

Eternity
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write, I do hope that love is returned.

May 10th, 2018 00:37

Eternity
w c said:

very nice

May 9th, 2018 12:46

Eternity
orchidee said:

A fine write Arianna.

May 9th, 2018 12:00

Eternity
Maxine Smith said:

Beautiful hunny.

May 9th, 2018 09:25

Eternity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ARIANNA for another elegant poem ~ 5 balanced quatrains and a consistent Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb etc) makes it pleasure to read ! I can relate to the SUBJECT because our love is not always reciprocated ! If you read my Poem for Today ~ LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ You will appreciate that \"Enchanted Evenings\" really do happen. Thanks for another Love Poem from your Heart ! Yours BRIAN

May 9th, 2018 05:29

“I\'m fine”
SLR said:

I agree. So many people seem to say that they\'re \"fine\" when they have so much going on in their lives and they\'re telling everyone they\'re fine, especially themselves. I\'ve definitely had times like that.

May 8th, 2018 21:55

~For my Grandma~
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful tribute, she will always be with you.

May 8th, 2018 00:17

~For my Grandma~
w c said:

Wonderful. A lovely poem and subject!

May 7th, 2018 21:06

~For my Grandma~
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ARIANNA for a very elegant poem ~ Good Rhythm and consistent Rhyming Pattern which is important in good poetry and helps with recitation ~ I am a Performance Poet ! Grannies are very special and we always lived near them so they were a big influence in my Life ! I\'ve only got one left and she is nearly 90 and lives with my Parents so I see her often ! She is my MUMS MUM ! thanks for caring & sharing ! Thanks for comment on my FUSION ~ I like RED especially with STEAK ! Yours BRIAN

May 7th, 2018 16:31

~For my Grandma~
Maxine Smith said:

A painfully beautiful write hunny ❤️

May 7th, 2018 07:10

Until we meet again
Maxine Smith said:

Welcome hunny. A beautiful read, breakdown the barriers, if it’s meant to be it certainly will be. Keep them coming.

May 7th, 2018 02:01

Until we meet again
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Arianna, distance is no barrier these days, one of my Granddaughters has a boyfriend in France and they are in contact every day via Skype, her mother says that it is like they are always together, not just speaking to each other but acting out their normal lives but the person is always there.
Welcome to MPS.

May 7th, 2018 00:46

Until we meet again
Joshua Shutt said:

I love this so much! I am dealing with this right now and I have no words for how great it is! I truly feel I found this for a reason!

May 6th, 2018 18:58

Until we meet again
onepauly said:

wonderful!

May 6th, 2018 11:51

Until we meet again
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ARRIANNA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which struck a CHORD with me ! Parting from Friends and Family is always painful ! I have known my Fiancee for two years and next Saturday she is going to New Zealand (11,500 miles !) for a YEAR on JOB exchange and I\'m crying already ! (Real Men do cry !) Like yours \"It is the toughest goodbye !\" Memories ~ Miles apart ~ In my HEART ~ Goodbyes are not forever ~ Until we meet AGAIN ~ I could have written this POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) The way MPS works is: We read and comment on each other\'s poems and build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ would like to be your first ! Love the structure of your poem ~ rhyming couplets give it Rhyme & Rhythm ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 6th, 2018 11:41