Comments received on poems by dave donovan
Chrysalis
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hiding in plain sight,
like a mind abused.
Watching from the side lines,
Agreeing with the group.
Hoping no one will notice
The lie inside of you.
And when you cant deny it,
Still you hide the truth.
Away from the prying eyes,
You discover the butterfly,
Inside the cocoon. \'
(Brilliant!)
March 7th, 2022 06:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hiding in plain sight,
like a mind abused.
Watching from the side lines,
Agreeing with the group.
Hoping no one will notice
The lie inside of you.
And when you cant deny it,
Still you hide the truth.
Away from the prying eyes,
You discover the butterfly,
Inside the cocoon. \'
(Brilliant!)
March 7th, 2022 06:51
Missing
RDS said:
Really emotive and filled with half-spoken anguish stoically navigated. Hope all works out well and that your poetry helps make sense of the turmoil life can seem when it\'s all so in yer face and immediate.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:22
RDS said:
Really emotive and filled with half-spoken anguish stoically navigated. Hope all works out well and that your poetry helps make sense of the turmoil life can seem when it\'s all so in yer face and immediate.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:22
Missing
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Dave, I do hope that all gets sorted out and that the missing piece of your heart is found once more.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Dave, I do hope that all gets sorted out and that the missing piece of your heart is found once more.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:47
the mask.
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
You are all heart, that\'s a wonderful thing. Stay strong for those with hearts are always vulnerable in a toxic world mainly peopled by the heartless. Your poems speaks truth from the heart to the heart.
June 17th, 2018 18:53
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
You are all heart, that\'s a wonderful thing. Stay strong for those with hearts are always vulnerable in a toxic world mainly peopled by the heartless. Your poems speaks truth from the heart to the heart.
June 17th, 2018 18:53
eternity is a lie
Laura🌻 said:
Our children are surprised when we come up with gems...from time to time! We, as parents, need to support our astute children with your awesome message!
Perhaps this quote is a forever quote...
“...forever only lasts
As long as ever does.”
I know I’ll reference it many times! Thank you!
May 24th, 2018 13:22
Laura🌻 said:
Our children are surprised when we come up with gems...from time to time! We, as parents, need to support our astute children with your awesome message!
Perhaps this quote is a forever quote...
“...forever only lasts
As long as ever does.”
I know I’ll reference it many times! Thank you!
May 24th, 2018 13:22
eternity is a lie
Laura🌻 said:
Dave,
A great poem! The greatest thing about it is not only its structure but...
ITS MESSAGE!
All you say is the absolute truth!
As I like to say, “Been there...done that!”
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 12:08
Laura🌻 said:
Dave,
A great poem! The greatest thing about it is not only its structure but...
ITS MESSAGE!
All you say is the absolute truth!
As I like to say, “Been there...done that!”
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 12:08
eternity is a lie
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAVE Thanks for your first POEM ~ very very true and in the last 17 years (18 ~ 35) I have Loved & Lost many times ~ but (in my opinion) \"Better than to have never loved at all !\" I am engaged (for the first time) but ANGELA (30) is in New Zealand for a year ~ I am praying that \"Absence\" really does make the heart grow fonder ! Loved every word of your poem and its structure ~ more please ! Please check my Flowers Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2018 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAVE Thanks for your first POEM ~ very very true and in the last 17 years (18 ~ 35) I have Loved & Lost many times ~ but (in my opinion) \"Better than to have never loved at all !\" I am engaged (for the first time) but ANGELA (30) is in New Zealand for a year ~ I am praying that \"Absence\" really does make the heart grow fonder ! Loved every word of your poem and its structure ~ more please ! Please check my Flowers Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2018 05:37
